| #1 MikeyMonty (spider-wj083.proxy.aol.com)[7698] |
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| Hehe, way to edit the pics to beat the five upload limit. Good report. |
| #2 sKoZaK~pRoZaK (vict-mx0100404.smartt.com)[7724] |
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cool br,
for a first time it's really good
keep 'em coming |
| #3 patheto (zam22753.zam.kfa-juelich.de)[7793] |
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NICE!what I really liked was the thing with the goliaths.
There you can see what the boyz are good for, especially with charon. Ah, btw: Was that BW or vanilla? |
| #4 Dino Din (port-38-28.access.one.net)[7823] |
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| well seeing as Red did a DT drop on Orange... well I'll let you guess |
| #5 YourRoleModel (relay.atinc.com)[8077] |
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| Good report. You did a nice job remembering most of the action. Since you asked for feedback, I'd recommend getting your reports to this point, then refining them further into sections. Divide portions of the game by chapter titles or some creative break. Be a bit clearer about color/race/name/team in two player games. (The Red Protoss, Straz and his partner, blah...) Throw in full descriptives like that so readers don't have to scroll all the way back up to remember who is who in the game. 1-1 it's much easier. Anyway, good job on your first effort... I found myself symathizing with BlueMage for getting double teamed, been there, done that, and it sucks when it happens. |
| #6 YourRoleModel (relay.atinc.com)[8078] |
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| Good report. You did a nice job remembering most of the action. Since you asked for feedback, I'd recommend getting your reports to this point, then refining them further into sections. Divide portions of the game by chapter titles or some creative break. Be a bit clearer about color/race/name/team in two player games. (The Red Protoss, Straz and his partner, blah...) Throw in full descriptives like that so readers don't have to scroll all the way back up to remember who is who in the game. 1-1 it's much easier. Anyway, good job on your first effort... I found myself symathizing with BlueMage for getting double teamed, been there, done that, and it sucks when it happens. |
| #7 Dino Din (port-59-46.access.one.net)[8097] |
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| Thanks YRM i'll keep that in mind. By the way, what you said about our 2 1on1s... well i read some of your reports and would be glad to give you a synopsis of what I can remember from the games, if you took pictures that is. |
| #8 Dino Din (port-59-46.access.one.net)[8116] |
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| ack your stuff demoted my rank |
| #9 YourRoleModel (relay.atinc.com)[8126] |
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Don't worry about rank... 6+ kicks ass on a first report. I was too busy fighting you in our games to take pictures. Sorry. I can't post a BR without PICs, because I have set my style and standard that I have to live up to now... =(
You are very good at Micro. I've never seen someone use so many spells. In our zerg vs terran game, I believe every spell or special ability except yamato was used. You even used blind for heaven's sake. I used burrow and every queen and defiler spell also. |