| #1 HunterD (NEW93127183.columbus.rr.com)[6522] |
|
| That was surprisingly easy, I'll have to learn how to use screen shots and all that jazz and actually make a real story. |
| #2 Mark4 (1Cust130.tnt3.rdu1.da.uu.net)[6534] |
|
| That was pretty descriptive and colorfull. A bit too much so in spots, but with a little polish you'll be able to brinf it off. Not bad for a first effort. |
| #3 Slicer (ip168.portland11.or.pub-ip.psi.net)[6544] |
|
Your story-writing ability is good.
Your grammar leaves something to be desired... are students no longer exposed to "there, their and they're" in school? I know they don't learn "your and you're" anymore... |
| #4 HunterD (NEW93127183.columbus.rr.com)[6545] |
|
Thanks, I just reread it for the first time, and you're right, it was painfully overdone in parts, I really should of edited before putting it up. Oh well, I just kinda wanted to see how tough it was to put up a BR. Once I figure out the picture thing I'll try to send in a polished one. By the way, whoever's site this is, it absolutely rocks. Thanx.
|
| #5 SnowSquall (dyn070-tnt01.athens.frognet.net)[6574] |
|
This was really good for a first BR.. maybe a little flowery with the descriptions to the point that I have to really concentrate to make sure I'm following what is actually going on. If that's the worst thing I can pick out, then I think you're doing fine!
Yes, this site does indeed rock. :) |
| #6 Tony (204.52.186.197)[6618] |
|
For future reference, if you select a group of Zerglings, click "A" and click your sunken colony, they will kill it for you. A desperate measure, true, but arguably better than leaving your only exit blocked off.
Then again, the blockade seems to have worked well for defense... |
| #7 DeathWing (spider-te082.proxy.aol.com)[6730] |
|
| that reminds me of my second game as toss. my goons were unable to fit between my cyber core and gateway. only the 2nd gateway could produce goons. still i managed a win by making sure to produce goons out of the 2nd gateway and scmall units out of the 1st |
Home
Forum
Starcraft Tournaments
