| #1 ShadowCrown[3974] |
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| YAY! Another great episode of the Phoenix Legion Chronicles. Keep pumping out these gems as fast as possible.:) |
| #2 MikeyMonty[3977] |
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| These things are great to read. Keep cranking them out. |
| #3 .Praetor[3983] |
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| Thanks guys! You'd be surprised, but a few comments like those make my whole day! Same for most writers, I think. |
| #4 Chargon[3991] |
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| Great story, im always looking forward to your next installments. This one has really helped me get through a long day at work. :) Thanks |
| #5 MikeyMonty[3992] |
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| Hey .Praetor, do you just make this up as you go along? Or is it based on a game or series of games? |
| #6 Mind Twist[3997] |
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| Awesome, but too long for me to read in one sitting. It's different reading stuff like this on the net, so here's an idea for you: publish it into a book and I'll read it all in a day or so, but I can't do that on a browser, for some reason. And I swear I missed a section or 2, and I'm too lazy to check (Like reading ahead a few long chapters, messes me up badly :p) |
| #7 .Praetor[4002] |
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Thanks Chargon, nice to know I'm doing some good =).
And Mikey, yes, I do just make this up as I go along. Not really based upon a game at all. In fact, not at all, though I used to do a lot of FFA's on Ashrigo. The only planned writing I've done is my story on SC Legacy, where I have the whole plot outlined, and am just filling in the many, many details and fleshing out the characters.
Hey MindTwist, here's an idea: Don't read it in one sitting. =).
Now what I really want to know is: WHO ARE THE NEW RATERS? THEY HAVE HELL TO PAY! First I get below nines on my awesome FFA's (deserved that really, they weren't as good as some of my previous reports). The other thing is, it seems like there is a rater (or some raters) giving substantially lower ratings, especially if no pictures are present. I don't like that bias. Sure pictures help, but there can be excellent 9+ reports (proven by myself and others) without pictures). If someone is doing no more than a 7.0 for a report without pictures, they should be removed from the raters. I don't know what the changes have been as far as personell, but I also don't like them overall. The rating has been not as good.
Second, no 10 on this???? And now there won't be!!! For my fiction like this, I could care less the details of score, cause it's gonna be produced anyway, and is not dependant on a game, but this is breaking tradition! Personally, I'd prefer a NR.
Johnny, can't you change this? (jk)
.Praetor
P.S. that was Not Rated in case the slash is missing.
P.P.S. By the way, Johnny, I am suggesting you seriously consider going back to the previous raters, late or not, and only replace them individually as they inform you they will no longer be rating.
P.P.P.S. To preclude people saying I am whining, others have commented on the picture bias, and I would suggest that my reports' ratings not be changed. |
| #8 Blade101[4009] |
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| I love reading your work! I was wondering why i didnt see a new chapter on saturday for your phoenix saga...when do you think they can upload it? |
| #9 bad_yellow28[4047] |
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this stuff rocks.. but i was a tad annoyed when you said 'just in time to drop an archon off'... =) i'd picture seeing an archon as something mind-blowing.. =)
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| #10 Johnny_Vegas[4048] |
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| Hmm.. The old raters are still rating the reports. We haven't actually told the new raters to start yet. I know cause the password hasn't been switched. I might make individual username/passwords to keep tabs on raters. |
| #11 .Praetor[4092] |
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Well, Blade, Enforcerman at SC Legacy, my contact, is being lazy apparently. Two chapters should be up this Friday. Grrrr... That is, if I can get my normal comp to work to send him the 4th =(. Some good stuff, I promise you.
bad_yellow28, you are so right. DAMN how did I miss that. I think I got too into seeing the battle action (br style) and less into making it seem real (what I should be doing). I think I have an idea on how to fix that =) Thanks.
Johnny, Raters, it appears I have egg on my face. Three or four, actually. Have I told you guys how much I like this site?
**.Praetor hits self in back of head.** |
| #12 eagle[4449] |
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| Nice story. Those people at sclegacy.com havent updated their Pheonix legion chronicles in a while. |
| #13 .Praetor[4717] |
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| Yes, I noticed eagle! I've e-mailed Enforcerman about it, but who knows. I do have chapters 3 and 4 done, but as to when they are up.... |
| #14 SuperGeneral (cr732571-a.pr1.on.wave.home.com)[8542] |
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You are so right. I write BRs just for the comments... Well heres mine...
Its GREAT! KEEP GOING AT ALL COSTS!
I would like to work with you if possible. I could do pics and other stuff... E-mail me at bmurray1@home.com |
| #15 ~SIGH~[108708] |
| 210-55-145-2.dialup.xtra.co.nz |
Great saga man, but um... wheres spike?
:D |
| #16 UltimateFire[113247] |
| spider-ntc-tc083.proxy.aol.com |
| ...I have not read a better Fan Fic than this. Ever. Period. |
| #17 .Praetor[122898] |
| 209-165-127-175.dsl.earthlink.net |
| UltimateFire - Danke |
| #18 Timid[141373] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
Hi
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| #19 old man of many fights[151176] |
| va-staff-u1-c4d-206.frbgva.adelphia.net |
| KICK MUCH ASS YOUNG ONE! |
#20  [158930] |
| CPE000ea6388836-CM001371143574.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| This is a weaker installment (though still good) - less character development, somewhat confusing action and some more generic dialogue. Still satisfying though! |
| #21 .Praetor[167011] |
| c-67-164-209-28.hsd1.ca.comcast.net |
| Hey if it's satisfying, I'll take it. Fan fiction that isn't total crap is hard! |
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