| #1 much[149637] |
| ip68-98-186-203.dc.dc.cox.net |
| better. |
#2
[149638] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Heh. Enjoyable story, if "a little" cliche ;)
Have no idea what to rate these kind of things, so I won't do so for now.
Ignore the inevitable "This is not a bla bla bla site" comments. |
| #3 Munro[149641] |
| cache-ntc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
heh thx, i know i might get crap for it. I dont expect people who arent interested to red it, so if you hate it thats cool just dont read it :)
I plan it to be a three part piece, but the other two part wont be done until after i graduate(in 2 weeks). So you can just rate after all 3 installements are submitted. Thanks ;) |
| #4 Mistears[149642] |
| cpe-66-75-183-197.socal.rr.com |
| i read it. and will read the next parts. |
| #5 deathgod[149643] |
| plutonia.singnet.com.sg |
This is not a STORY TELLING SITE!
get ur facts right little kid |
| #6 TwistedNecro[149644] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-202-139.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
| So? Doesn't really matter. Anyway, I thought this was a pretty interesting story. Post more soon. |
| #7 maareek[149646] |
| mblt-aa077.gtcom.net |
| In all honesty, isn't this a story telling site? I mean, a battlereport is basically a story. I really only skimmed over it, but it seemed like a good story. Quite a few people seem to like it, and that's really all you can hope for when you write, anyway. |
| #8 striz[149650] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| with paragraphs, you get bonus points. |
| #9 Convider[149655] |
| HSE-Hamilton-ppp291717.sympatico.ca |
:O
not bad |
| #10 BlueRibbon[149656] |
| 65.167.44.43 |
| It is a storytelling site but, it is a story telling site for, just like you said, battlereports. This lacked both a battle, and a report. I liked it, but I can't agree that it was posted in the correct place. Good writing though. Why not try a report next? :} |
| #11 Munro[149660] |
| cache-ntc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| i play poker now rather than BW/war3:) I could do a repot on a tournament sometime. |
| #12 RubiksCube[149672] |
| c147048.adsl.hansenet.de |
Actually it had a battle ;D
I liked it |
| #13 Chris[149675] |
| astound-66-234-209-235.ca.astound.net |
Oh no!
2.0 |