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"Just as the big smile hits my face I happen to glance back to my base. Hmmm. What the heck are ten mutas doing coming in over my probe line?"
-AQD3




#1 endersshadow[148902]
ool-182d2f86.dyn.optonline.net
Galaxies? Have to read this ;)
#2 Some_God[148903]
ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net
Looks perdy...
#3 MuLepton[148904]
Ge10d.g.pppool.de
Well, hope you enjoy it.

Unfortunately, "submit" seems to hate me. Could one of the wizards explain why there's this white border around the report? How would I prevent that in future reports?

Mu



#4 endersshadow[148905]
ool-182d2f86.dyn.optonline.net
Wow.

In all honesty, this was the most enjoyable fan fiction I've ever read on this site. Your attention to even the minutest details (regarding your character's interaction with the swoop bike dealer, describing Endor, etc.) really made it feel as if I had left my room and entered the Star Wars universe. Seriously, this was comparable to the "Tales of the Bounty Hunters" Star Wars novel that sits on my shelf. If you ever need a proofreader, just ask :D

9.



#5 Some_God[148906]
ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net
I totaly agree with Ender. This was a very interesting report/fan fic. I was a little confused at first, as I always am, but I managed to digest the whole story. You should do one from the Empire's point of view. Become a stormtrooper and write a report "Cops" style... you could call it "Troops." :)

Anyway GJ. Dont know if I should post my report today or tommorow.

#6 BlueRibbon[148907]
65.167.44.36
Not to sound like a copy-cat, but Goddamn. This was by far one of the best reports I have read in awhile. It had very good writing, was easy to follow, and had a unique blend of fanfiction and an actual game. Incredibly, I found so few flaws that I can't think of any reason this should get below a 9. This was great to sum up my comment. Congrats. You have my support for any future reports you wish to write.

9-9.5, no less.

#7 Lithium[148908]
cache-dtc-aa02.proxy.aol.com
Best fanfic/br I've read in a long time. It's really good writing and I like how you turned it into both fanfiction and a battle report(since you actually did this). Maybe I like Star Wars too much, or maybe Galaxies was one of my favorite games. Either way, this report deserves a 15.
#8 Convider[148910]
HSE-Toronto-ppp304610.sympatico.ca
Wow.
9
#9 Breakfast[148912]
CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com
this was amazing.
#10 Slotham[148913]
dsl-202-173-156-103.vic.westnet.com.au
More! More, more, more, more, MORE! Ummm, yeah, I loved it.

9

#11 wakiki[148916]
STU581.cpe.leeds.al.charter.com
Man, this was an awesome read. This is the first fan fiction I have read off this site -- I hope it doesn't make all the rest seem sub-par. Very well written.
#12 Chris[148917]
astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net
Hotsex.

9.5

#13 Chris[148919]
astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net
10 for being a readable fanfic. Great work.
#14 Fred[148925]
dhcp52.des.ucdavis.edu
Nicely done. 8-9
#15 [148926]
129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk
Well, I can only agree with the rest of the comments here: great work, even though I'm not a very big fan of the whole star wars setup.

The rating was killing me, but I finally settled on an 8. Lower than the rest of the lads here, but that's just the way I see it :)

#16 MuLepton[148927]
Ge81f.g.pppool.de
Thanks for the positive feedback, everyone. Glad you liked it!
Ling: That's your prerogative as rater :)

Mu


#17 eU)NiCk[148928]
dsl-235-160.utaonline.at
excellent, I've wondered what that game looked like, a couple of friends are into it. great read. :)
#18 wakiki[148938]
STU581.cpe.leeds.al.charter.com
Time to flame Ling ;)
#19 [148941]
dsl-202-173-156-103.vic.westnet.com.au
LinG always does that to me too. An 8.5 and an 8.6 cause he just HAD to rate both my reports at an 8. I can't imagine what you'd need to do to get a 10 of him :S
#20 bobthecob[148942]
host-66-205-110-183.classicnet.net
Mu great job as always and very orignal one of the best things i have read in a long time. We all support you at Dotc.
#21 Smeagol[148943]
008.a.001.dav.iprimus.net.au
... mulepton comes back after almost 1 1/2 yrs after leaving us with a mammoth br (10 all the way too :P) and does a fanfic on Galaxies... all i can say is was the anal probing painful???
#22 choboPeon[148949]
ool-182faa3c.dyn.optonline.net
art
#23 Fungee[149001]
hsdbsk142-165-117-170.sasknet.sk.ca
superb

#24 striz[149069]
CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com
hardcore, great job. nice to see a fic-game tie in that is actually correct and parallel to storylines. kudos.
#25 blitzkreig_[149070]
ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net
blitzkreig_, I know troops has been done before. I saw that shit on Sci Fi channel and was hoping to get more with Mulepton's reports. :)
#26 Some_God[149071]
ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net
That post (post #28) should have had my anme but due to poor copy and paste skills it is otherwise. :)
#27 el_sux0r[149113]
dhcp078132.res-hall.northwestern.edu
;) Well done.
#28 [149174]
kenn-dial-1-86.amerion.net
like it some one should do one on world of warcraft
#29 DD-LinG[149417]
prx7.sa.schools.net.au
it was a good report
but i felt the area that you lacked was in the surprise area. BEfore i even got to the end i knew you were goin to hunt him down and kill him.
anyway good work
keep it up


#30 a contract writer[149585]
205.238.135.10
As a contract writer for the game, I'm glad to see that someone actually reads and enjoys the missions text. Awesome.



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