| #1 ProXy[cF][148636] |
| ca01-ch02-bl03.accel.atl.earthlink.net |
| Hmm try a little harder to make it look more interesting (not that it looks bad or anything...) |
| #2 corp[148637] |
| 12-214-224-251.client.mchsi.com |
| Html, its not that hard, learn it. |
| #3 Uteo[148638] |
| ip68-107-203-17.nc.hr.cox.net |
kaka
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| #4 Desert Demon[148639] |
| user-0ce2k6i.cable.mindspring.com |
| Enclose your paragraphs in <p>...</p> tags, or at least use <br><br> at the end of each. This will greatly improve legibility and people will be able to spend more time reading it and less time getting confused. |
| #5 zeon[148642] |
| CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| PARAGRAPHS. HOLY SHIT! PARAGRAPHS! |
| #6 striz[148645] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
err... yeah. I'm with zeon/the entire audience of this site in this matter. html or go home =/
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| #7 OverTheUnder[148646] |
| 12-205-134-226.client.mchsi.com |
| The content was fine and it sounded like a good game but u know what they say, " a picture is worth a thousand words." So yeah..... um just spice it up a bit next time its helps alot, many ppl don't even read it if it looks boring. U can never tell tell u get replay but a pro? I have never heard of him before what country is he from?:P gg |
| #8 Dr_Ransom[148647] |
| pcp07843142pcs.wilmsc01.tn.comcast.net |
| not bad, not bad,.. the writing seemed a little,.. hmm, unpolished maybe. don't laugh at me, my writing is a lot better than what I posted in my first report, so don't dismiss my advice as 'from a newb.' It was a good game, so use more detail! maybe tell us your opinions, why so and so did such and such. Also background info on the players. Good paragraphs are a must, of course. Pics would be a nice finishing touch. I'd give it a 5. ~Dr_Ransom |
| #9 TwistedNecro[148651] |
| lsanca1-ar54-4-3-193-255.lsanca1.dsl-verizon.net |
| Not bad for a first report (sarcasm), but I agree with the people above. Paragraphs, pics, anything to help the reader. My eyes hurt from reading that. There's no good place to stop in the middle of a huge blob of text. :-) |
| #10 Chris[148653] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| 1 for drefsab's reason. |
| #11 BlueRibbon[148655] |
| 65.167.44.79 |
HOLY SHIT MY EYES WERE JUST CLAWED OUT BY A CAT. Oh wait its just "non-paragraph-temporary-blindness-syndrome."
You know you think someone with the name "Doom" (think of the hell he went through to get that name) would win. I mean only good players have names without numbers in them. And only newbies do. *COUGH* MARK4 *COUGH*
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| #12 Psyonic_Reaver[148656] |
| dialup-67.25.64.23.Dial1.Portland1.Level3.net |
I like your reasoning Blue. =)
Yeah. HTML. It was a good report but learn the HTML. They have many excellent guides here at BR.com. Thats where I learned my stuff. Dont worry I'm sure the next one will be gold. |
#13  [148663] |
| CPE0010b50f508e-CM00e06f16610c.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| decent text, but needs paragraphs and could use pics, ill give u a 6 as a carrot |
| #14 EldritchEvil[148666] |
| dialup-65.58.62.114.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| Paragraphs please. |
| #15 Chris[148667] |
| astound-64-85-254-129.ca.astound.net |
| Raters are sissies. |
| #16 donotreaddis[148697] |
| 192.139.27.18 |
| damit unban me alrdy so i can actually get on and write another report |
| #17 quikgenius[148765] |
| 40-pool1.ras15.nynyc-p.alerondial.net |
| you can get pictures off your replays by pressing print screen twice, then using paste in an art program. U can only do two at a time that way though, which is tedious, but its worth it. |
| #18 BlueRibbon[148790] |
| host12.mvsd.com |
| If its StarCraft you can Print Screen as many time as you want, as it will save them to wherever you installed StarCraft. You can then open them with whatever artist program you have and edit them into nicer ones ^_^. |
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