| #1 endersshadow[147390] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
| first |
| #2 endersshadow[147391] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
I'm about halfway through 'Duty' now, and I thought you would like to know that these are still unbelievable.
7-8 (only because I don't know how the raters will think of this, as either a battlereport or a fanfic). |
| #3 Some_God[147393] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
| 2nd... :D time to read. I'm all hyped up from watching Saving Private Ryan for the 100th time. :D |
| #4 Some_God[147394] |
| ool-18b8c53e.dyn.optonline.net |
This deserves an 8. Writing was good, except for the "The bazooka. The assault gun. The bazooka team was supposed to kill the assault gun. The bazooka team's dead. I'm the bazooka team. I've got to kill the assault gun" part. I understood that part after reading it 2 times... but thats just me. Next time can you devote more text to the German parts? They intruige me.
Peace,
~SG~ |
| #5 Mark4[147399] |
|
9.0
Read this series. |
| #6 Giga[147400] |
| krajina.yubc.net |
| That...is...fuckin'...great :O |
| #7 azntemplar00[147410] |
| pool-151-200-243-189.res.east.verizon.net |
9.0
I've read the entire series and I have to admit, I've loved it from the start. Very Well written. |
| #8 EldritchEvil[147415] |
| nr11-216-196-208-94.fuse.net |
| Glee. |
| #9 MojoMAN[147416] |
| tor58-uas-26b-209148142237.3web.net |
| Love it. Solid 8. |
| #10 Nihilo[147447] |
| bie-036.beatricene.com |
| Some rough spots in the dialogue, but overall, it was a great read. Keep up the good work. |
| #11 el_sux0r[147601] |
| dhcp078132.res-hall.northwestern.edu |
| Super. |
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