| #1 Asmodues[146905] |
| roc-24-169-206-37.rochester.rr.com |
| BAM! First. |
| #2 striz[146906] |
| CPE0007e95ea1fa-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
kinda BAM....second.
wait, we don't really do this any more =(
now to read. |
| #3 Convider[146907] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3663109.sympatico.ca |
not half bad
6 |
| #4 EldritchEvil[146908] |
| nr11-216-196-186-253.fuse.net |
Hey, I liked it.
Good writing. Very good. Use some semi-colons next time, maybe add some pictures, basic HTML and a background combined with a better game and golds will be yours, easy.
That said, the game was ok, kind of one-sided, but a fun read. Please make more!
6.5-7. |
| #5 Avail[146909] |
| c-65-97-24-49.va.client2.attbi.com |
So-so report, not bad for a text-only though.
I agree with EE, you have way too many run-ons in the report. Read your report out loud to yourself, I mean who starts a paragraph with the word 'which'? :)
I enjoy your writing style, it's very descriptive. Add in some color, background, and pictures and you're on your way to a gold.
6 |
#6 
[146912] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Like the grammer nuts said, writing could need a bit of work.
Otherwise a nice report, be careful with using the names of heroes, it could confuse inactive gamers like mysef who don't remember which hero is called Lord Thunderspoon.
As for formatting and colors and stuff, slap something like this around your text in the submit field:
<div style="background-color: #000; width: 500px; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 11px; color: #ddd; line-height: 180%; padding: 20px;>
REPORT
</div>
And you should have something that looks quite pleasing, easy to read and without stupid font tags or tables.
6. |
| #7 EldritchEvil[146913] |
| nr11-216-196-187-167.fuse.net |
Ahhh, Ling. How I do love your web-standard zeal.
You might even educate these people a bit. :) |
#8  [146914] |
| ip68-227-211-83.dc.dc.cox.net |
| Ling forgot to close his property! Oh no! :D |
| #9 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[146917] |
| cache-rg04.proxy.aol.com |
| Oh no! Oh no! Put a sock in it, CB. |
| #10 [146920] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Heh.
Edit:
<div style="background-color: #000; width: 500px; font-family: Verdana; font-size: 11px; color: #ddd; line-height: 180%; padding: 20px;">
REPORT
</div>
Next time I'll run my xhtml documents through the cattlevalidater. |
| #11 Chris[146928] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
Blah blah blah, everything said above, and then fix your title.
5.0 |
| #12 Chris[146936] |
| 168.53.109.12 |
| why would NE want a BM? |
| #13 DredNicolson[146941] |
| 164.58.125.242 |
#12:
Beastmaster = melee tank
Beastmaster + Bears (he can summon another before the first runs out of juice) = 3 melee tanks
Beastmaster + Bears + Mass Archers = possibly a game winning army before Tier 2 gets underway
Also, once he gets a few levels, a BM has almost as many HP as a TC and unlike the Pit Lord has enough mana to use his spells regularly.
It is the latest way for incredulous NE "weather" players to fatten their ladder records by taking advantage of balance problems brought on by the most recent patch. |
| #14 BlueRibbon[147011] |
| host12.mvsd.com |
| Pictures are your friend, not your enemy young padawan learner! |
#15  [147018] |
| 168.53.109.12 |
yea...pictures would be nice...
|
| #16 FInalHope[147116] |
| host217-43-176-145.range217-43.btcentralplus.com |
i liked your writing technique, very informative.
gj. |
| #17 Fuck You[147142] |
| 65.67.229.80 |
| This sucked ass |
| #18 endersshadow[147186] |
| ool-182d28d8.dyn.optonline.net |
Try reading Phiber~Optiks guide to HTML if you go ahead and make another, that's where I started T.T
A little longer and this could've easily been gold, keep goin'. |
| #19 Asmodues[150073] |
| 208.31.47.29 |
| Excellent narrative voice, work on HTML and runons, and excellent reports will result. |
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