| #1 John Ckawsoki[144285] |
| adsl-63-206-95-57.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| 1st! |
| #2 Triped[144287] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| this is fucking terrible. Get the fuck out of here; nobody wants to put up with your miserable submission. |
| #3 Sabotage[144289] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
Triped for once, i agree with you :),
Come back when you learn pictures, read the guides, then come back. |
| #4 EldritchEvil[144290] |
| nr11-216-196-184-232.fuse.net |
Die, Triped.
Not bad. Needed more details and to be longer. Also, the game seemed to consist of (after the early-back-and-forth) sitting at home and powering and expanding. I don't know, maybe SC was always like this and I just sucked, but I never remembered it being so... Laid back. A nice comback, by the way, but you needed some temps or reavern. The writing didn't bore me but, like I said, needed more details and you needed to explain more. Like, how the 12 tanks "somehow" managed to kill your 12 force. What kind of micro? Did he siege in a formation? What did you do? ect. are the things we need to see more of. Other than that, we(you) need images and longer, more descriptive writing for gold reports. Keep it up, though, I sense potential in this one.
6.5 |
| #5 Sabotage[144291] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| just not as harsh though, btw i got 2 and 3! |
| #6 Sabotage[144292] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| uh, no i don't |
| #7 Sabotage[144296] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| God ima take back what i said. This wasn't too bad, but not 6.5. just read the guides and stuff. |
| #8 Chris[144303] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
Whoops.
2.5 |
| #9 willwinforfood[144306] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
| play diablo 2 legit. ;> |
| #10 Sabotage[144312] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| chris is about right 8) |
| #11 Triped[144313] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| this guy can't even be bothered to use basic HTML, or to use proper grammer, or to write in an interesting manner. somebody please explain why anyone should waste time encouraging him. |
| #12 Sabotage[144314] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Well, the idea is to tell him to learn html, do pics, and from then on he can improve into a new golden reporter |
| #13 Pr0be[144316] |
| dpc6682009048.direcpc.com |
Please look at my first report. Now look at my latest.
Cough. I think he's got potential. Just learn HTML. |
| #14 ZeaL[144321] |
| AC994A81.ipt.aol.com |
| #2 and #3 obviously didn't bother to read. This was a pretty decent piece of writing, probably a 6.5 alone, put some pics in, and you got gold easily |
| #15 Sabotage[144324] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| yea then i read it and i say 6 |
| #16 Sabotage[144325] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| okay my FINAL change is to 5.5 |
| #17 EldritchEvil[144329] |
| nr11-216-196-208-207.fuse.net |
| Sabo, you are the essence of the comment whore. |
| #18 Triped[144332] |
| dsc05-chc-il-6-32.rasserver.net |
| I read everything, and it sucks. Just because all the other guys who can't write disagree, doesn't justify a lower standard. |
| #19 Comment Whore[144333] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| I caught one or two spelling mistakes, but that alright. |
| #20 EldritchEvil[144356] |
| nr11-216-196-208-207.fuse.net |
| Triped, I respect your opinion on this new guys report, and I... No, wait, scratch that, your a blathering idiot and deserve to be killed. Messily. |
| #21 willwinforfood[144358] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
| i couldn't finish reading this report. sowy. ;< |
| #22 Triped[144364] |
| dsc05-chc-il-6-32.rasserver.net |
| If you respected my opinion, it'd be a sure sign I'm saying something wrong. |
| #23 IcE-Inforcer[144369] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3905425.sympatico.ca |
Stfu Triped. This is his first report, there's a lot of room to improve. The main reason brs.com is going to hell is because of idiots like you who entice new reporters to stop making brs. We don't see you writing shit all so don't complain about the quality of other people's work.
-IcE- |
| #24 Sabotage[144371] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
okay for the VERY last time, i go with ice because i can't decide what side anymore. Of course i was always, and still will be on the anti-flamer side.
Wow what a comment whore I am! |
| #25 Triped[144383] |
| dsc05-chc-il-6-32.rasserver.net |
| I don't want anybody to write a report who won't take the time to fucking read and emulate a gold report. No effort? No positive reinforcement. Keanu made an excellent comment on another report about how it is, in fact, people like you who make this site total shit compared to a few years ago. |
| #26 Mr.Puddles[144386] |
| 216.49.243-DSL-187.ckt.net |
| Sabotage = Comment whore =/ |
| #27 Ith_bOw[144392] |
| CPE00045ade6654-CM400046003078.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
Although I do appreciate every single comment made, I have certain queries to some of you. For instance, Sabotage, just because I didn't use HTML, what makes you think I don't know it? I have been posting on this site for AgEs, and I stopped lookin' at it for some time, so I wanted to see what the community has evolved to. Apparently, reading comprehension isn't your strength (that applies to most of the posts).
Now, the community requires pictures, flash animations, and other bs. I have written professional reports, and non-professional reports for a long time. When I first looked at some 'golden' reports here, I decided to make one like it. I had flash animations, amazing use of HTML, etc. Right before submittin' it, I changed my mind, and made it this simple. I wanted to see if you people value the game over the pictures.
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| #28 Ith_bOw[144393] |
| CPE00045ade6654-CM400046003078.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
Pictures are not needed. That's what replays, fpVODs and VODs are for. As for your suggestions about spelling and grammar mistakes, I suggest you take a look at your own posts first. Perfect 'grammer' indeed. I never make a spelling or grammar mistake, and if I do, i do it on purpose, to make you think you stand a chance of busting my chops. Little do you know that my chops are un-bustable. I never need to check my reports for grammar or spelling, because I get everthing perfekt the frst time.
I would also like to request that you people refrain from open insults, as that makes this site sink even lower. |
| #29 willwinforfood[144395] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
| i think some br's here and there would have made the report flow better and easier to read. |
| #30 Triped[144396] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| Open insults are a poor entertainment substitute for good reports, but they get us through these hard times. |
| #31 Sabotage[144397] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Well, your right in so many ways. but still, making black text on white just doesn't look like a br, and so I didn't bother to read it. |
| #32 Cpt.Chronic[144403] |
| 38cust231.zeecon.com |
| BR's need pictures. And you're so full of shit about having all this done in flash and 'amazing html' that it is really quite pathetic. |
| #33 IcE-Inforcer[144404] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3905184.sympatico.ca |
| Post the flash and I'll believe you. |
| #34 EldritchEvil[144407] |
| nr11-216-196-187-211.fuse.net |
| Ith, that was... Bad. BRs with images and flash are better recieved here, look better and they help people understand the game better. Also, what is the difference between a "professional" report and an un-professional report? Post the one with images and flash. Unless you deleted it. |
| #35 Ith_bOw[144429] |
| wc01.mtnk.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
BR's dont need pictures... thats' what replays are for
why need a picture when u can watch the replay?
i dont care if they help ppl undetstand, people here are retards apparently and can't read, so they need little pictures... why u think most good books have no pics in them? cause they pointless |
| #36 Triped[144430] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| Text-only reports are excellent reads, but only when the author actually knows how to stimulate the reader's mind. This shit wouldn't be in a "good book". |
| #37 Ith_bOw[144435] |
| CPE00045ade6654-CM400046003078.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I know how to stimulate the average reader's mind. Either you're too young, or too old to understand it properly, (like some books are much better to read if you're like 12, and others if you're like20 ) , or you're either a genius or a retard (probably the latter, since i can't imagine you being a genius) |
| #38 EldritchEvil[144439] |
| nr11-216-196-190-10.fuse.net |
OK, now you're just flaming.
Banleeted. |
| #39 Novadistortion[144620] |
| ed55.ips.PaulBunyan.net |
Look man, a few pictures won't kill you. Even if you just put them at the end, it helps the reader visualize what is actually happening in the game. Text only is much harder to do, because there aren't any colorful images to distract your reader. Two things that I need to point out though.
1. You named yourself after a hacked d2 weapon.... thats just sad.
2. You were obviously trying to make jokes at the beginning, and I dont think they got across very well. |
| #40 willwinforfood[144673] |
| ool-18b817a1.dyn.optonline.net |
| i guess you didn't stimulate the raters minds. |
| #41 Ith_bOw[144896] |
| CPE00045ade6654-CM400046003078.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
i fail to see the correlation between someone's name, and their reports... please explain... and your ... 'trying to make jokes' comment.. i don't get that either..
i don't TRY to make jokes, that's just how i write
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