| #1 The-Nut[144146] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
i tried to make this the best 1 yet
enjoy! :-D |
| #2 LurkerBurger7[144147] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
great job nut. huge improvement over your last. keep it up!
7.0 |
| #3 The-Nut[144149] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
OK THIS IS FUXED.....
2 COMMENTS...
GOT A 7... |
| #4 tHE-nUT[144150] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| srry got ovverreaccted |
| #5 lurker716[144154] |
| pcp04439209pcs.verona01.nj.comcast.net |
Ok, I'd say a rather average report. The writing was ok, enough to describe the game but not enough to hold my interest. The pics were decent, and that pic of the mutas in grayscale was cool. The quality needs to be upped tho. The first game in the BR was not neccessary, the game sucked, Zerg was horrible. All in all, I'd give it a 6.5.
LurkerBurger7: You are the brother of the-nut right? Why do you have to comment on his BR via the comments section? Can't you just walk on over to ur brother and offer your critique? Why is it neccessary to post your comment over the internet? It seems pompous to me, like an attempt to bolster your standing with the denizens of BR.com. No offense meant, just wanted to know the reason. |
| #6 The-Nut[144155] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| lol lurker |
| #7 el_sux0r[144156] |
| 0-1pool40-251.nas36.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
Inquiring minds want to know: left, or right?
-el_sux0r, asking the question that was on none of your minds, but is now. |
| #8 JakobderLudner[144157] |
| 24-205-51-132.gln-eres.charterpipeline.net |
GREAT improvement over your last reports. The first was well-written, but it was a poor game choice. Zerg sucked, so it probably wasn't even necessary.
But I didn't bother with the second report. Formatting there was HORRIBLE in my opinion. The paragraphs were clumped up in one big chunk of text, and whole paragraphs were shoved to the side in two word columns with some of the bigger pictures. Separate the text into more paragraphs, and whenever you have a big image just use <br clear=all> so the paragraph isn't squeezed into the side and is easier to read. Nobody likes to read a big hunk of text or a paragraph squeezed into the side (unless you're a demented soul that is). Makes for a horrible reading experience.
Average at best. 6.0-6.5 |
| #9 el_sux0r[144158] |
| 0-1pool40-251.nas36.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
Hm, the writing improved.
You are to be commended. |
| #10 BlueRibbon[144162] |
| 65.167.44.37 |
| not bad :] |
| #11 The-Nut[144163] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| :( |
#12  [144164] |
| Toronto-ppp272682.sympatico.ca |
| good job, I havent read your other reports but from the comments I can tell this is an improvement. In that case, keep improving. |
| #13 The-Nut[144165] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| :D.. this might b my final report |
| #14 Sabotage[144166] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
Trevor! sweetness man!
And dago fucking mar! HE's BACK! BR.com LIVES! |
| #15 Sabotage[144167] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| Trevor! Im glad you have your nice first juicy gold now! its about time! Jeremy whens yours? Im currently working on my own. |
| #16 LurkerBurger7[144168] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
dang it.... u got 2 7's...i...only got.....1!
lol lurker... yeah i guess it is kinda gay to comment on your brother's report instead of walking upstairs and saying:
great job nut. huge improvement over your last. keep it up!
7.0 |
| #17 The-Nut[144170] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| hey guys! 2 sevens!? man.. after getting 4's, 4.5's and 5's this feels great! just so u kno... even if u dont care, i'm taking creative writing this year in school. Will hopefully boost my br's up to 7.5's and 8s! |
| #18 Sabotage[144171] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
hey nut! Im glad you got rid of the quote that jeremy said...
"Zonage" gjgj. |
| #19 corpus[144175] |
| 12.214.224.251 |
| good good. |
| #20 Smeagol[144176] |
| dorset.nt.tas.gov.au |
yah nice job BIG improvement on ur other reports, but please dont do another report like ur war3 one
ugh* the memory of that report scars me forever
remember not to strech pitures cause that makes them look fugly |
| #21 Sabotage[144177] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| hahah. |
| #22 Chris[144178] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
You know, I look at your first reports.
And I look at this.
And I have to say you've come a long way.
But some work still needs to be done.
More paragraphs please. |
| #23 IcE-Inforcer[144184] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3905651.sympatico.ca |
Was this report's only purpose to promoto peanuts and nutritious foods?
??
-IcE- |
| #24 IcE-Inforcer[144186] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3905651.sympatico.ca |
Jussst kiddatizing.
A few things could have made this report better;
-Higher pic quality.
-Better game, equaly skilled players.
-Smoother colours, lime green sux.
Gj tho, uve improved.
-IcE- |
| #25 the-nut[144196] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| i never thought i'd say this.. but thanx chris |
| #26 ZeaL[144197] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
I must say you have improved, but did you use a thesaurus or something? Some words were used pretty awkwardly. Overall, good effort, but your writing style is awkward(very)
6 |
| #27 Sabotage[144198] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
So look like you're not gonna stop here?
Btw your logo pwns. Call me nut. |
#28  [144202] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Definetly an improvement.
The biggest issue is still your writing, you lost me several times with the he did that, he did this stuff.
Still tho, lets keep it gold ;)
7 |
| #29 The-Nut[144205] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
HOLY CRAP!
THREE 7'S! |
| #30 Speed.DeMoN[144206] |
| host217-42-160-202.range217-42.btcentralplus.com |
hi nut remember me?
minor improvent from last so ill be generous and give it a 3.5
keep up the below average work!
writing was horrid. |
| #31 The-Nut[144208] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| wtf 3.5? u go write a report |
| #32 [144210] |
| host217-42-160-202.range217-42.btcentralplus.com |
| ok 3.7 |
| #33 Cpt.Chronic[144224] |
| 38cust231.zeecon.com |
| I'd like to write a report...how long does it normally take? |
| #34 Smeagol[144225] |
| cascade-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
Rofl pud
its actually not that bad :p
its true thou u still sound like a retarded 12 yr old thou
which u undoubtedly are ^_^ |
| #35 The-Nut[144226] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| no i'm 11 not 12 fool |
| #36 Smeagol[144231] |
| nile-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
my mistake ur a retarded 11 yr old then
that better? |
| #37 [144238] |
| host217-42-160-164.range217-42.btcentralplus.com |
| lol |
| #38 LurkerBurger7[144242] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| =/ |
| #39 nasser[144253] |
| user-0cev9aj.cable.mindspring.com |
| Considering you're only 11, your writing is fairly good. Try your best to read over the report and correct all the grammatical errors. |
| #40 Smeagol[144256] |
| nile-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
look if u want to learn how to write better just examine CB~ and Z~L reports and see how they explain a situation or battle and what kind of words they use
once uve finished ur report compare ur sentantces with theres and see if u think its good enough :p
i know ur only 11 but if u just work hard enuf on it, it wont matter how old u are
gl with ur next report and if ur writing improves more u have a chance of getting 8's
still its good to see that ur pics are now good and all u need now is better writing and ull become more respected/less flamed and more 8's and who knows even 9's will come ur way |
| #41 The-Nut[144257] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| =O reallY!? WOW |
| #42 [144270] |
| host217-42-88-148.range217-42.btcentralplus.com |
| smeagol isnt the brightest lad |
| #43 Smeagol[144271] |
| 235.c.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
k... and who the fuck might u be then ya mouthy little cunt :p
im just giving advice to a 11 yr old
ive read fuckloads of reports and i know shit writing/good writing when i see it and this kid just needs to learn ^_^ |
| #44 ZeaL[144276] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
kaka
-_-;; |
| #45 Sabotage[144346] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| last11 |
| #46 The-Nut[144466] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
not for long haahhahahahaahahha
46th! |
| #47 Sabotage[144507] |
| pool-68-160-205-235.ny325.east.verizon.net |
omfg.
"Giga i graduated to gold reporting!"
-the-nut |
| #48 The-Nut[144555] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| brian |
| #49 The-Nut[144556] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| u |
| #50 The-Nut[144557] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| SuX |
| #51 Sabotage[144591] |
| pool-68-160-205-235.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| rooooooflex |
| #52 koalasnatcher[144757] |
| sms1.stmikes.k12.nm.us |
that was pretty good.
BUT:
-there should be more pictures, less writing (check out sabotage's reports)
-personally, i hate it when there are 2 reports in one, cause it seems sooooooo looooooooong.
IT WAS REALLY GREAT, THOUGH!
-to find out more about me, go to sab's clash of the newbs 3.
im comments 60something and on. ur pretty tight too, u nut.
lataz
|
| #53 BlueRibbon[147159] |
| 65.167.44.43 |
Hey, why bother continuing to write 7's and 8's BR's right Nut? Hell when you can battlereport a meal, get a 1.3, and then basically get exiled from the site.
Roflmao |
| #54 The-Nut[147785] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| LOOX I R BACK AND NOW I R 12 .. THAT IS 1337 |
| #55 THE-NUT[147786] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| BTW THIS IS FROM 1/21/04 |
| #56 The-Nut[149658] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| NOW ITS FROM 5/31/04 |
| #57 THE-NUT[158880] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
NOW ITS FROM 7/6/05
wtf this is gay |
| #58 The-Nut[162023] |
| ool-182fdd2d.dyn.optonline.net |
| 11/5/05 |
| #59 Threefold[166213] |
| ool-457a77a4.dyn.optonline.net |
| memories ... 1/3/08 |
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