| #1 Burningicecream[143274] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| yes i know there is 4 copys, my cuzin was playing on my computer, plz give all or any feedback, wether good or bad. |
| #2 Sabotage[143276] |
| user-2ivebpe.dialup.mindspring.com |
| the title was spelled wrong :( |
| #3 Sabotage[143277] |
| user-2ivebpe.dialup.mindspring.com |
| And i don't read wc3 fanfics |
| #4 LameJoker[143280] |
| pool-129-44-13-229.alb.east.verizon.net |
| hmm... most ppl are prolly gonna think this is spam. all you need to do for fics is click the button on the submit reports screen that says replace my newline characters. That way, everything isn't just one long paragraph. |
| #5 LameJoker[143281] |
| pool-129-44-13-229.alb.east.verizon.net |
| As for the fic itself... you did a pretty good job with your descriptions, and thats a huge step in the right direction. I didn't read it all, though. |
| #6 burningicecream[143283] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| i know it looks like spam :( |
| #7 trint[143287] |
| ip68-105-254-18.nc.hr.cox.net |
| quaddruple post |
| #8 Triped[143294] |
| dsc08-chc-il-4-117.rasserver.net |
this was terrible. Holy Shit.
I mean, you know this isn't a fanfic site, so could you at least _try_ to impress us so we don't hate you? |
| #9 burningicecream[143296] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Triped when i want a horrable awnser, i will come to u, and y was it bad?, and i know this is not a fanfic site u name me 1 and i will go post itthere. |
| #10 Your Fellow[143303] |
| wiley-181-20382.roadrunner.nf.net |
| This isn't a fanfic site? Oh no! Drefsab's written countless gold fanfics! What, no one told him, or the raters who gave him gold, that this isn't a fanfic site? What a disaster! |
| #11 Convider[143309] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660508.sympatico.ca |
It has potential...
3.1 |
| #12 burningicecream[143314] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| so is there any comments, on the writing, even though it will probly take u 20 minutes to read. |
| #13 Triped[143315] |
| 1Cust174.tnt1.rockford2.il.da.uu.net |
| 10: see, the thing about dref, praetor, etc., is that they can actually write. Think of the br.com fanfic section as a "high quality only" zone and you'll understand why your post was even worse than "burningicecream"'s writing. |
| #14 Iflameevery1[143317] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| yo Triped, try writing somthing, iv yet to see a battlereport, or a fanfic from u, atleast burningicecream tried. |
| #15 burningicecream[143318] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| so i have another ? would u guys like me to post chapter 2 and 3? |
| #16 Triped[143321] |
| dsc09-chc-il-6-42.rasserver.net |
| NO |
| #17 Sabotage[143324] |
| user-2ive788.dialup.mindspring.com |
POst it, it wasn't too bad, just need to improve on the boringness.
Don't let triped bring you down... |
| #18 burningicecream[143341] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
k i will and triped is mad cause he has no writing skillz
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| #19 BlueRibbon[143344] |
| 65.167.44.76 |
Triped why must you troll everywhere? : [
Your starting to sound like TIME, and that isn't cool. : /
I enjoyed it, despite the obvious similarities to LOTR.
For HTML go look in Guides and Phiber Optiks' Guide to HTML.
And for god sakes, even in the comments don't talk with u, y, skillzzzzzzzzzzzzz, and so forth, it seemingly lowers your intellegence : [ |
| #20 burningicecream[143346] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I know there was similarities between LOTR and my Fanfic, i noticed it soon after a wrote it, but meh, and i know not to use y and u to speak lol. its just easyer. |
| #21 el_sux0r[143360] |
| 0-1pool22-231.nas31.philadelphia1.pa.us.da.qwest.net |
"its just easyer."
That sums it up. |
| #22 Pr0be[143368] |
| 12-221-209-32.client.insightBB.com |
Decent writing, try not to always refer to the weather, and please stop beating the Fantasy Stereo-Type, it's been done countless times. Break out of the rigid Fantasy path, , make Dwarves different, seeing the word dwarves makes you instantly assume "He's short, beard, scottish accent, big axe, likes whiskey."
Stupid stereotypes!! |
| #23 Triped[143370] |
| dsc08-chc-il-4-9.rasserver.net |
orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs
see them charge as their flag unfurls!
orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs
burning huts and raping girls!
orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs
serenity becomes disaster!
orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs orcs
slaving for their infernal master!
tell me that's not better than this fanfic |
| #24 scn[143371] |
| c-66-41-22-52.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| i support triped in his claims about this sucking. dont post another chapter, dont ever write a story again, and dont live another day. killyourselfyoumindlessfuck |
| #25 Chris[143378] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
When you use quotes you have to use commas.
"You have some grammar and spelling problems. Spellcheck and read the HTML guide, please," Chris sighed.
^-- Example. |
| #26 burninigicecream[143379] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| ya and i have an oppinion of u SCN your a lowlife loser, who can't write for shit, and is a flamer, who agrees with low life SOBs such as triped. you are the appidamy of human shit. you live in a box at the end of my street. |
| #27 Triped[143383] |
| dsc08-chc-il-4-9.rasserver.net |
rofl
my poem is so much better than your story. Admit it. |
| #28 Funkii[143386] |
| dsl-ppp-1228.tcinternet.net |
#23 holy shit that's a 10 EASY, I wish I was rater.
Author - you are a huge flaming faggot and you should die
|
| #29 burningicecream[143387] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| ya and i have an oppinion of u Funkii your a lowlife loser, who can't write for shit, and is a flamer, who agrees with low life SOBs such as triped. you are the appidamy of human shit. you live in a box at the end of my street. your also a flaming faggot, with shit for brains, and no balls. |
| #30 Triped[143388] |
| dsc08-chc-il-5-215.rasserver.net |
| could someone reach over and adjust the needle? |
| #31 Sabotage[143399] |
| pool-68-161-122-19.ny325.east.verizon.net |
Well, now that i red it, I say that its soo lotr.
And thats not a bad thing, but still the thing was too speedy. omg so lotr!
Lets see, if i were to rewrite this, it would be to have a bigger intro before eveyone is going to war, like a time of peace. kep writing, you'll be better. |
| #32 Funkii[143405] |
| dsl-ppp-1228.tcinternet.net |
I would appreciate if you wouldn't call me an appidamy of human shit.
ITS SPELLED OPPIDDOMEY IDIOT, LEARN TO SPELL BEFORE YOU FLAME ME. |
| #33 burningicecream[143419] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| um no, your not worth the time to spell things correctly, so that just tells you how much your worth. and no unlike scn you are the oppiddomey of DOG shit. |
| #34 Triped[143421] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| oh my god |
| #35 burningicecream[143422] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
same goes for you Triped
oh ya BTW i probly won't post the third chapter, scence most of the comments where bad. |
| #36 burningicecream[143425] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| oh wait no im going to just to piss you off Triped :P |
| #37 Triped[143430] |
| dsc05-chc-il-6-198.rasserver.net |
| nono, that's "oh my god" as in not only do you spell like a 12-year-old, but you actually think your "insults" are scathing. I think it's safe to say that you're the only one here who's pissed off. ":P" |
| #38 burningicecream[143433] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| lol, im not pissed off triped, im having fun, no why don't you leave and never comeback its not like any of us would miss you. |
| #39 Triped[143437] |
| dsc05-chc-il-6-198.rasserver.net |
| no, I'm definitely annoying the fuck out of you. I can tell because you're 14. |
| #40 Funkii[143438] |
| dsl-ppp-1228.tcinternet.net |
| rofl burning why are you getting so pissed, it's ok that you're 14, everyone was at one point. You'll learn to spell eventually, DONT WORRY ABOUT IT. Please though, just don't get so angry. |
| #41 burningicecream[143440] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| for the record im 19, and im not angry, my computer is having masive keyboarding problems so when i hit some of the keys don't work. |
| #42 Funkii[143442] |
| dsl-ppp-1228.tcinternet.net |
| I'd reccommend anger management man, I can tell you're taking your anger out in real life. Please, if you love your friends and family, GET HELP. |
| #43 Triped[143452] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| Furthermore, you shouldn't feel the need to add five years to your actual age. Nineteen is a long ways away; don't be in such a rush to get there! |
| #44 Pr0be[143458] |
| dpc6682009038.direcpc.com |
Dumbest....comments section....ever.
It's the EPITOME of stupidity. Spell it right! |
| #45 burningicecream[143459] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| thx probe. |
| #46 Keanu_Reaver[143595] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
blah blah blah
i didnt read it, but i can give you some advice anyway
#1. dont fucking misspell the title of your own story, you lose credibility
#2. your little message to your reader still needs to follow all grammatical rules, "I" is capitalized.
#3. you dont know html, well atleast learn how to do white on black, its much more pleasing to the eye
as for the story itself, i read the last little bit
"drunk with beer" is a terrible phrase for very obvious reason
the song was atrocious, the rhythm in itself was sketchy, but the worst part was the very setting of it...how many drunken oafs are going to be able to pronounce "unfortunately"?
all in all, i really dont believe i have to read it to tell you its terrible...but if i feel especially bored or masochistic, ill give it a try. |
| #47 Keanu_Reaver[143596] |
| ip68-99-86-96.ph.ph.cox.net |
| oh, and i have yet to write a non-gold -fanfic- at this site, so im very qualified to tell you that you suck. |
| #48 Chris[143642] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
"trusty half broken sword"
Glaring contradiction. |
| #49 burningicecream[143874] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| ya well, i never said it was good. |
| #50 Drunken)Goose[143968] |
| dsc01-dav-oh-1-215.rasserver.net |
| "how many drunken oafs are going to be able to pronounce "unfortunately"?" is why it's a shame there's no more qotm. |
#51  [152769] |
| 129.142.195.30.ip.tele2adsl.dk |
Do I laugh? Do I cry?
#14 Iflameevery1[143317]
wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com
yo Triped, try writing somthing, iv yet to see a battlereport, or a fanfic from u, atleast burningicecream tried.
#15 burningicecream[143318]
wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com
so i have another ? would u guys like me to post chapter 2 and 3?
THE IPS TELL A TALE OF SUCKAGE.
Seriously, stop already. |
| #52 Raider[152814] |
| ip68-100-182-95.dc.dc.cox.net |
| Didn't read the report, but if there were ratings for comment sections, this one would be a 10. |
| #53 jigsaw[165927] |
| CPE-75-87-223-196.new.res.rr.com |
Burningicecream and Funkii... I starting reading this forum from a random search, and I started laughing when two idiots attempted to outwit each other.
It's spelled 'epitome', for the kid who has an anger problem (and probably a few mental problems), and for the other kid with the lame response and false correction. (Hint: Don't give a spelling correction that's actually WORSE than the first guess.) Lmao.
That's for posts #29 and #32. Immature mediocrity pisses me off. |
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