| #1 the-NUT[141550] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st |
| #2 LurkerBurger7[141551] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| 2nd |
| #3 endersshadow[141553] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
It's very nice not to see "WAR3 REPORT GKOGOGO" everyday. Although your writing seems a little rushed (Brian sent all he had to attack my base and show that he isn't no ones bitch.) I still enjoy reading these Generals reports.
But why do you play as GLA? With no air units at all I would think them the weakest of the three powers. I just love abusing Chinese MIGs vs. them ;)
Keep up the great work SG.
P.S. You can send your future reports for proofreading to me at Qacpilot@aol.com. I meant to tell you in the forums, but it won't let me post -.- |
| #4 Psyonic_Reaver[141555] |
| 1Cust144.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Go some god! Good stuff keep it up!
*Ender that was technicly my mistake...*cough* I helped edit *end cough* |
| #5 EldritchEvil[141559] |
| nr11-216-196-191-35.fuse.net |
Niiiice. I like people who report games other than Blizzard ones. Blizzard games are great, but variety is the spice of life, and this is mexican.
8.5 |
| #6 Slotham[141571] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
| Dang, I'm going to have to get in my Generals report in soon before all the charm of a new game wears off! Stop posting Generals reports Some_God! Well, until mine gets in anyway! Please :D |
| #7 LameJoker[141572] |
| pool-141-149-27-44.alb.east.verizon.net |
| T.T = crying.... |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[141573] |
| 1Cust55.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
And ASDF means AssShitDamnFuck
K? ^^ At least I think it does......... |
| #9 BOBBY357[141577] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Good report. Nice to see more C&C:G battle reports on this site (It's such a cool game). Anyways, great job and keep the Generals BRs comin'. |
| #10 BlueRibbon[141578] |
| 65.167.44.156 |
| Nice. 8-9 |
| #11 Decay[141580] |
| 206.10.109.66 |
Nice report, you've really come a long way from where you started.
asdf can mean assshitdamnfuck if your mad, but I think it just creates the effect that you are very emotional and are mashing your keyboard or something. It would be kinda dumb if you weren't on a qwerty keyboard. :P |
| #12 LuckyNewbie:P[141588] |
| user-uinjcem.dialup.mindspring.com |
For the writing, there was some bad grammatical errors
("It was not until I had produced a bomb truck, filled with toxic chemicals, passed by Brian's supply dump and realize what had happened")
some were not necessary
(T.T. (Sadly, I don't know what T.T means). )
and some parts were just annoying
("People that are fed up with ZerG-Ling being a rate- I mean a bunch of people with AK's and Molotov Cocktails" and "Le GG")
Some were, sad to say, a combination of everything
("...lighted me up faster than a Christmas tree on the Forth of July.")
If you want to write a better report, please get rid of all of these.
(Continued...) |
| #13 LuckyNewbie:P[141589] |
| user-uinjcem.dialup.mindspring.com |
...and as for the pictures, there's still room to improve. Hell, I'll even give you a few suggstions:
Since hardly anyone at br.com has played this game, you can beef it all up with concept art, in-game art, and cinematics found in the game, etc...
If you do collages in the future, maybe number each frame for everyone else to follow along? Maybe decide a better way to seperate frames from ice tileset to ice tileset than a *fade to white*?
(still continued...)
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| #14 lowlymarine[141590] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
Hey! I got mentioned!
I am working on a Generals report...and a few others. They'll all be in one big, big report...
Good report! 7-8 |
| #15 LuckyNewbie:P[141591] |
| user-uinjcem.dialup.mindspring.com |
...finally, on the report itself, your best tool in making it good remains largely unused. How the hell does *Generals* work? This is the first Generals report I've read, and I'm probably not alone. How do you collect resources? Is there any upkeep? etc...
But some far cooler aspects could be elaborated on. I just partially caught on at the end that technicals can transport troops(!) Can they shoot while in the technical? Did you use this to do hit-and-run tactics? There's a lot of potential here, but none of it was expanded upon.
I personally don't want to hear about whats available after you complete (or is it upgrade?) a palace and get the next tech level. I want to know both what you and your opponent are fighting with.
Anyways, that's all I can think of now. You know where you can improve, and it can (hopefully) only get better. But until then, I say this is seven-ish |
| #16 enderssadow[141594] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| luckily LuckyNewbie:P, there is no upkeep in Generals. That is one of the primary reasons the game is so good ^^; |
| #17 Some_God[141601] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
Jesus Christ Lucky... are you telling me that you, by yourself, cant use common sense and figuer it out. Its like you are asking me to explain the game in two pages and and write a half-page BR and thats no fun. I could just give you a link to the information on the game, like lowlymarine did, but thats really stupid since you came to read a BR and not to read 5 pages+ of info on the game... anyway thanks for all the comments.
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #18 Slotham[141614] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
I am currently writing a Generals BR and I thought it essential to give the BR.com community background knowledge in some of the concepts in generals. Wouldn't you like your readers to understand your report??
Lucky's comments are very relevent, don't be so defensive. He didn't even express his views in a harsh tone!! |
| #19 LuckyNewbie:P[141620] |
| user-uinjca1.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I'm telling you that a good portion of the audience doesn't know what the hell you're talking about if you don't explain. You already know this. You already explained parts. I'm asking you to explain more. Maybe i'm not smart enough to "figuer" it out. |
| #20 endersshadow[141621] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| hush slotham, I'm sure your Generals report will be perfect ;) |
| #21 Some_God[141628] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
Ok Slotham. I will not post a BR on generals until you post your BR. Then I will see how good you explained it.
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #22 Psyonic_Reaver[141631] |
| 1Cust66.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Lucky..So next time I do a SC or WC3 report I should explain the game in case a new comer hasn't read or heard of the game before?
Complete BS. |
| #23 endersshadow[141634] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| anyone else can send there reports for proofreading at Qacpilot@aol.com. I am, like, good at teh english linguage! |
| #24 striz[141648] |
| CPE00a0cc2d2b10-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
I must say...I have to raise the question: how many people actually know what T.T. means? I mean...it's common knowledge until you actually get asked what it means.
you can always say words like 'fissiparous' and 'slumgullian' to sound intelligent without knowing what they mean, for example...
fissiparous = split apart
slumgulliam = a watery norwegian stew, made of beans and scrawny meat |
| #25 Pr0be[141649] |
| dpc6682009031.direcpc.com |
| T.T is sad, tears coming out of eyes and a small mouth. For some reason I always think it means, "Too true." Wierd. |
| #26 LuckyNewbie:P[141651] |
| user-uinjcj3.dialup.mindspring.com |
(..continued)
So Psyonic_Reaver, I disagree that you shouldn't "explain the game" because the notion is "complete BS"
I say if you do a Orc vs Human report on Frozen Throne, it might be a good idea to say what the hell a "spell breaker" does and the importance of making a "Voodoo Lounge," and any other 'cool thing' that's relevant to the battle, because unless you're catering to the handful of us that have The Frozen Throne, you'll get a mixed reaction at best. |
| #27 LuckyNewbie:P[141652] |
| user-uinjcj3.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Woo-hoo! Comment whore! |
| #28 Razoriel[141656] |
| CPE-203-45-78-17.nsw.bigpond.net.au |
| I like Westwood games almost as much as Blizzard games because I can actually play and not feel crap. |
| #29 lowlymarine[141689] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Lucky, you moron, why don't you just go back and read the first Generals reports? Are you that damn lazy? :p The game shouldn't have to be explained in EVRY SINGLE REPORT. :p |
| #30 EldritchEvil[141690] |
| nr11-216-196-190-98.fuse.net |
| Actually, yes it should. |
| #31 BlueRibbon[141694] |
| 65.167.44.197 |
Apart from the majority of the people who are just arguing with (or for) Lucky, I enjoyed the report. 8 :]
Even if you've never played General's before, you had to have played a Westwood RTS (or any RTS for that matter) at one point in your life, and they usually don't change the way they do things, so you shouldn't have much trouble finding out how you do a few things. I've never even played General's, but from playing Red Alert, RA2, and Tiberian Sun, I can bet a bundle on the fact that some truck goes out and gathers something and deposits it in a refinery... Not that hard to discover, just use common sense : / |
| #32 War3 player[141937] |
| cdm-208-94-202-pine.cox-internet.com |
Tiberian sun is muchhhhhhhhhh better then generals for me
maybe it would be better if i had a up to date patch but since i have a russian burned game.. that screenshot those firetanks sure have big range.... the ones i play w/ are almost melee |
| #33 Some_God[141996] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
WooHoo... 8! Now I will try and improve more... Even though Lucky is being a little comment whore, I will copy his writing style and add it to "myn". I will add it to the collection I have: ZerG-LinG, Mark4, Psyonic_Reaver, and some less know BR'er like ~CB~...
Cheers,
~SG~ |
#34  [142012] |
| p448-7.ppp.get2net.dk |
:o
Have a 7, a lot of LN's points made sense, and a lot of your sentences were annoying to read. Think about adding some commas here and there too O.o |
#35  [142309] |
| adsl-63-205-56-204.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| keke |
| #36 Some_God[142539] |
| ool-18b8c59f.dyn.optonline.net |
Ok slotham... so far no report on Generals yet, so I guess I'm going to have to make one again... GG.
Cheers,
~SG~
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| #37 Slotham[142611] |
| euryale.its.adfa.edu.au |
Ah, yeah, my internet connection went down so the last thing I saw was enderssadow's prediction that my report would be perfect. So far I've bribed ~CB~, Mark4 and Drefsab but Ling's being the friggen goody-two-shoes-newb-rater-who-knows-shit-all and won't conform to my beliefs that my report is perfect!
I'll have to kill him....GG.
Cheers,
Sloth |
| #38 lol...[159500] |
| 203-206-234-172.dyn.iinet.net.au |
| guys dont act like noobs, tib sun is unbalanced, gen is balanced to hell tbh, let me explain, china owns all early game not because as posted the have good inf as they dont, they have alot of inf true wehat most china pros do is quick warfac + quick barrax and so some type of cliche gat tank + tank hunter spam. Gla is good to last as as TTs which isnt crying its Terror Tech which is a tech filled with terrorists lolol dence or what. GG wp no re u suck at gens and the person who played got owned by a noob,. |
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