| #1 BlueRibbon[140192] |
| 65.167.44.147 |
| Enjoy~ |
| #2 Heaven02[140193] |
| 104.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
2nd!!!!
nice report btw. 7.5 |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[140196] |
| p454-21.ppp.get2net.dk |
3rd!!!!!§!½½½½ ½§§§§1111111!
Anyway, kinda short, even for a single game report. Ridiculous picture height :O I found it hard to relate the pics to the text, and sometimes it felt like you were talking about something completely different. I think it was because the pic came first, then the text that explained the actual action. Works best the other way around.
What little writing that was actually there wasn't the best ever, but okay. All in all a 7 for effort and some nice storm pics :)
Next time, better and longer games please! |
| #4 el_sux0r[140197] |
| bay3-20.dial.umd.edu |
enjoying!
It seemed like you put a lot of effort into the pics.
"GoBuS played really gay-like."
It seemed like you put . . . less time into the writing. In many ways, this may be the opposite of my style. It was interesting to read ;) |
| #5 Some_God[140198] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
Yes 5th! looks nice...
Cheers,
~SG~
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| #6 Some_God[140199] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
This was a nice read. The pics were nice but you spelled some things wrong... its ok I dont write things correctly all the time (actually most times I dont). Keep up the good work and maybe you be as good as me =þ ....
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #7 Some_God[140200] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
BTW you spelled things wrong in the writing not the pics... just to clear that up. =|
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| #8 BlueRibbon[140201] |
| 65.167.44.147 |
Thanks,
Ling, I will find a better game next time.
Suxor, I did put more time in the Pics then the writing :D.
Some_God, thanks in general. I used spell check but, I too noticed a few errors after submitting (Never do when i read it before hand though :p)
The reason the pictures were long because I read several Fractal_Wave's reports such as Single-0 and liked bigger pictures. :D
~BR |
| #9 LameJoker[140203] |
| pool-141-149-16-176.alb.east.verizon.net |
| not bad, but what is a drone split? |
| #10 Some_God[140204] |
| ool-18bc02b8.dyn.optonline.net |
Ya Blue I use spell check too but I get too lazy to re-read everything (to see if I phrased or wrote everything properly)so I got me a proofreader =D
Cheers,
~SG~ |
| #11 EldritchEvil[140205] |
| nr11-216-196-188-198.fuse.net |
Fileread! Fileread is your friend, then you can correct mistakes afterwards!
Otherwise, not bad. I think you clumped the pictures together too much, and as such you disjointed the report. It was like: this is what happened, this is what happened, this is what happened.
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
PICTURE
This is what happened.
A neat report otherwise. 7. |
| #12 BlueRibbon[140207] |
| 65.167.44.147 |
LameJoker - you always has one question for me :D. A drone split would be refering to how he took his drones and using his overlord that is hovering over Soren's minerals, send the drones to mine. When they got over top of the Zealots he just moved them someplace, and this causes the Zealots to be forced to move usually off the ramp.
SomeGod - All my friends are fools, like myself, and would not even notice the spelling mistakes :D. But if you want too, you can proofread the next one :D.
Eldritch - The pictures were really the backbone of the report, so thats sort of what I intended to do :D. But I'll try and spread them out a bit more next time. |
| #13 Convider[140210] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660634.sympatico.ca |
| hmm. neat. but you really shouldn't base your brs on your pics as if you're good you won't even need pics |
| #14 ZeaL[140214] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| Gj, 7-8 |
| #15 LurkerBurger7[140215] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
A very neat report indeed (that sounded kinda funny didn't it).
7.5 |
| #16 striz[140218] |
| CPE00a0cc2d2b10-CM013050003852.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| found it fun...wow, almost 2 am...I hate stuff...later.... |
| #17 BlueRibbon[140219] |
| 65.167.44.226 |
Thanks~ #13,14,15.
Striz, I should hope to god that is not some warped way of writing your Suicide Letter. I really wouldn't like to think my reports are bad enough for you to end your own life :D. |
| #18 EldritchEvil[140228] |
| nr11-216-196-189-41.fuse.net |
| Never have the pics be the backbone of the report. They should always be supplements and a way to see what you're describing with your words. |
| #19 ZeaL[140246] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| haha, no raters for you ^^ |
| #20 BlueRibbon[140248] |
| 65.167.44.182 |
| its bs ZeaL :[. They are all sexing up one another and are too busy to rate it! :D |
| #21 iNsOm[140253] |
| evrtwa1-ar13-4-62-068-190.evrtwa1.dsl-verizon.net |
| it was a good br, don't listen to people if they say it sucked cuz it didn't, the pics were simple and nice, and obviously, they weren't clumped together, you didn't have to label them to know which one was first, second, third and so on. the first was only connected to one and was at the beginning, and the last was only connected to one and at the end, if i was doing pics in a br, i'd do it the same logical way you did it |
| #22 BlueRibbon[140298] |
| host4.mvsd.com |
Pfffft. How did I get a 6 on my first report, and that sucked... but I get a 6 on this one. :[ This one is alot better :/
Thanks ~ 21, 22 |
| #23 Sabotage[140369] |
| pool-68-160-248-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
omfg ur ring too. I felt just as bad. Ratings so unfair.
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| #24 Senor Hat[140617] |
| rev-65-113-65-110.i-plus.net |
Not too bad...
I'm not gonna regurgitate what everone else has said, so just make your pics smaller next time. I liked the Monty Python theme though. ;) |
| #25 BlueRibbon[141128] |
| 65.167.44.225 |
| Monty Python Rules ^^ |
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