| #1 Gimpler[138871] |
| 219.94.74.8 |
1st, and not proud of it :P
Use paragraphs, you hobo |
| #2 endersshadow[138879] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| ahhh paragraph form please |
| #3 TM[138880] |
| 65.120.150.5 |
| short. no paragraphs. fan fics suck. |
| #4 kman[138884] |
| igate.tc.faa.gov |
| yeah, i know, paragraphs. just dumped it quick to see what you guys thought of the content. TM, its short because its a PROLOGUE. i'll upload a better formatted version later this week with chapter 1 if anybody likes the story. |
| #5 Freque[138886] |
| 63.229.167.10 |
| Hey kman, you suck. |
| #6 BlueRibbon[138888] |
| 65.167.44.227 |
| I thought it went pretty well Kman. These people jsut bash because they have nothing better to do ;p. Chapter 1 plz. |
| #7 2Cautious[138891] |
| adsl-68-72-164-31.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Mmmm... yes, need paragraphs. Also, since this is fan-fic, I don't think that you should really refer to things by their abbreviations. Otherwise pretty good. |
| #8 NotJim[138955] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Blah. Ok I guess, 5.5-6.
Spend more time on them please! |
| #9 NotJim[139032] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| The sad state of the site: I'm last. |
| #10 Newt[139041] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
Hmm, definitely write it into a series. That's all I can think of to say to you though. Oh well.
Quote:______________________________________________
Hey kman, you suck.
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-Freque
What gives you the right to say that? Give me three good key points suporting that the author sucks and I may listen to you in the future. Freque, how immature can you be. Oh my god, 12 year olds.
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| #11 NotJim[139047] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| f this |
| #12 School Safety Agent Tim[139085] |
| 165.155.64.130 |
BlueRibbon your absolutely right and you should all die, thank you thank you no applause needed. Coming straight at you from the Department of Education i'm outta here
oh yea i didn't read the report but its great keep writing |
| #13 NotJim[139092] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| T_T |
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