| #1 the-nut[138626] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| i spent more time on this one ... and i think its better. HOPED U LIKED ^ _ ^ |
| #2 endersshadow[138627] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
writing/format is still ugly, no offense. the free-hand writing in the pics are also a turn off. overall not bad but could use some touch ups.
7 |
| #3 LurkerBurger7[138629] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
U STOLE MY ORANGE
anyway
i agree with #2. the free-handness painting is kinda screwy.
not bad
you should organize your screenshots more
6 |
| #4 endersshadow[138631] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
by ugly writing i mean:
"Well, i guess i just got my BC swarm and owned him."
try and recreate the battle scene, even if it was a one sided fight. it will make for a more entertaining read overall.
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| #5 the-nut[138632] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| kk thanx |
| #6 Jaood[138634] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| Try using something other then MSPaint. |
| #7 Smeagol[138637] |
| cascade-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
better, but please for the love of god, just use text. dont draw your text in the pitures as it looks really really shit. oh and your actual writing was constantly filled with spelling mistakes making it harder to read and confusing. ur writing style and descripion was bad as well but it will get better as u keep writing. Oh yeah and maybe u should stop insulting the other player all the time cause it makes u sound like a whinging little bitch.
6 |
| #8 NotJim[138638] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Yeah, unless your good at using it :)
Anyway, better than last. Not too bad! GJ
6.5 |
| #9 Smeagol[138639] |
| weld-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
| Yeah try and get something better of the net if u can. u know something that dosent look shit, like photoshop? |
| #10 NotJim[138640] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| or Presto Image Folio |
| #11 Smeagol[138643] |
| nile-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
Hey NJ whats ur bnet record for war 3 now? i cant check cause the school banned the battlenet server and i cant check anyones records. mines boofhead and possumo btw.
the department of education fucking piss me off |
| #12 Smeagol[138644] |
| nile-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
oh yeah nice piture at the end, havent seen that be4, i wanna know what happens to kerigan and raynor!!!
dammit blizzard make starcraft 2! |
| #13 Sabotage[138645] |
| pool-68-161-56-161.ny325.east.verizon.net |
heh. That party was fun.
Trevor- way too wide, i'll teach you tables. Also, that game
wasn't even close. Sucky game. But good improvement!
-also, your intro was longer than the report. heh. |
| #14 AvaiL[138647] |
| c-24-30-250-7.va.client2.attbi.com |
| H-Scroll was terrible =[ |
| #15 Smeagol[138649] |
| dorset-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
oh yeah thaT to.
fix next time k |
| #16 the-nut[138650] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| :( |
| #17 NotJim[138651] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
I forgot that as well.
Smeagol, mine is lvl 5 team, lvl 4 solo, us-west. T_T.
PLay on weekend? |
| #18 NotJim[138652] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
I forgot that as well.
Smeagol, mine is lvl 5 team, lvl 4 solo, us-west. MacroWaveOven. Sorry for the double post (if it is) T_T.
PLay on weekend? |
| #19 NotJim[138653] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| Stupid government. |
| #20 2Cautious[138656] |
| adsl-68-72-170-2.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Basically what people said: the scroll amount is annoying, needs more detail, use alt text, or computer written text in your pics, and proper spelling/grammar doesn't hurt. Maybe more interesting/longer game, too. Other than that, gj.
6 |
| #21 NotJim[138657] |
| 144.139.223.10 |
| Then again, 6 probably does it justice. |
| #22 BoX[138658] |
| adsl-35-7-93.bct.bellsouth.net |
| Too damn wide, man. |
| #23 ScotTt[138668] |
| 128warp179.newtel.com |
Time for some good old fashioned constructive criticism:
For starters, this was alot better than the your first. The pictures weren't clunky full-screen shots like the last one, and the layout, although it needs improving, improved from the last game.
I liked the party setting. The idea that you were playing in a tournament added an element of suspense to your BR. It was nice. What wasn't nice was that you didn't give us the results of the tournament at the end of the BR! The tournament/party setting served as an interesting side story that enhanced the BR, but it lost most if not all of its effect when you failed to tell what later transpired. |
| #24 ScotTt[138669] |
| 128warp179.newtel.com |
It's been said before, and I'll say it again, don't write free hand on your pics. Type is fine, drawing is fine sometimes, but until you improve writing freehand, don't do it.
Besides, that, please work on your grammar skills. The best sentenced had spelling mistakes, the worst were incoherrent. Remember to prood read it, or get someone else to.
Hope this helps.
Bye,
Me |
| #25 ScotTt[138670] |
| 128warp179.newtel.com |
DAMMIT!
*sentences
*proof
LOL maybe I should take my own advice |
| #26 the-nut[138673] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| thanx for hte advice but i dun need it. i get advice from someone else |
| #27 ZeaL[138680] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| Lol, maybe instead of reporting your own games, which are total noob(9000 minerals??!!!!!), you should try reporting some better players? |
| #28 Airplane_steel[138695] |
| dialup-209.244.182.4.Dial1.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| a SIX! this deserves a friggin 8! it has pix ans stuff. |
#29  [138696] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Lemme see, find a more competitive game. I don't care if both players are "noob" as Zeal suggests. It really detracts from the report, though, if a player is totally outclassed throughout the whole game.
Also, this report was unrefined. Spend much more time on your writing, layout, and imaging. I totally agree with comments #24 and #22. Also, either in-game detail was lacking or the poor quality of the game prevented the report from having much substance.
I'm going to give this report a rating of 4 (which I am sure will be an unpopular rating). I don't want to discourage you, but there is much room for improvement.
-CHJ |
| #30 Triped[138721] |
| 150.201.107.64.rtc5.illinois.net |
| Excellent rating, CHJ. Everyone who thought this deserved a 6 or higher is a tasteless idiot. |
| #31 LurkerBurger7[139300] |
| ool-182e1a3b.dyn.optonline.net |
| Jeb, thats a little harsh |
| #32 NotJim[139704] |
| 144.139.221.1 |
| 5.5 |
| #33 Chris[142768] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
| 3.0 |
| #34 Sabotage[144340] |
| pool-68-161-53-191.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| last and 4 |
| #35 DD[155656] |
| dsl-KK-167.194.95.61.touchtelindia.net |
| Christ + CHJ = smart. :[ |
| #36 DD[155657] |
| dsl-KK-167.194.95.61.touchtelindia.net |
lol...
Chris* |
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