| #1 lowlymarine[137709] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Well, uh, this area is for comments, I suppose. Make some, I guess, if you want to... Whatever. |
| #2 Manius[137710] |
| ga-cmng-cuda2-c5b-128.cmngga.adelphia.net |
| 1st non-author |
| #3 cool[137712] |
| cache51.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
| its me |
| #4 lowzeewee[137713] |
| cache51.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
| =) |
| #5 jimmy[137721] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-207-13.prem.tmns.net.au |
Umm... Money map?
No.
-NJ |
| #6 lowlymarine[137744] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Well, the map had a normal amount of spice on it, but the starting setz were a bit high. |
| #7 Triped[137752] |
| 150.201.107.64.rtc5.illinois.net |
| You're making the game look bad, and I hate your writing personality. |
| #8 LameJoker[137754] |
| pool-129-44-15-79.alb.east.verizon.net |
| Not bad, I liked it, but the players were so newbish. I actually think that its quite a well balanced game, because of sub-houses. |
| #9 Chris[137761] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
1. Only one picture.
2. Undescriptive and plain writing style.
3. One sided ownage.
2.85 |
| #10 ZerG~LinG[137810] |
| p429-028.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Woah, text is near unreadable :/ |
| #11 lowlymarine[137815] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
[rantmode]Hey Chris (I assume you're the rater?),
1. YOU try taking screenshots of a game with no Screenshot button and still be able to play.
2. WW games kinda lend to that. And it took place months ago, I was going on memory.
3. One sided ownage? Well I can't help how the game went. You want me to get half-beaten on purpose?
BTW, you don't like WW games, do you?
Uh, Triped, you've never even written a report...[/rantmode]
Zerg~Ling, are you sure it's not your browser or something? I can read it fine...
The next one will be better; for one, it won't be a WW report. (Well, kinda, probably Generals, but that game has a little more excitement to it, and a replay feature.) |
| #12 lowlymarine[137816] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Oh yeah, so does anyone have any suggestions? CONSTRUCTIVE criticism? |
| #13 lowlymarine[137817] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
(Agh, ther needs to be an "edit post" button.)
Zerg~Ling, the text is suppoed to be shadowed, makes it much easier to see. I guess BR.com doesn't support that or something. |
| #14 lowlymarine[137821] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
"Constructive" criticism. Maybe you missed that part.
By the way, it says in there "I haven't done one of these in a while." Well, let's see YOUR first BR. |
| #15 Triped[137824] |
| dsc04-chc-il-4-203.rasserver.net |
What kind of constructive criticism would you like? I provided you an example to follow. That was my first BR ever; I threw in that opening line for flavor. =]
Some constructive points:
-Your only screenshot was boring and probably means nothing to someone who hasn't played. Text-only is cool, but if you want to do graphics, don't make them a waste of a download.
-You didn't pick a good, readable font. Function over form...
-It wasn't a good game. It was boring and one-sided, nobody did anything different or clever, and there wasn't anything funny.
-As to your writing style, you aren't very good. It doesn't matter how boring a game was, or how long ago it was; you can still make it sound better than you did. I believe Mark4, CB, or YRM once wrote a mini-br on a 4pool in the comment of another bad report, just to demonstrate this point.
Happy now? Try again. |
| #16 Triped[137838] |
| dsc04-chc-il-4-203.rasserver.net |
| nono, don't redo this game. It wasn't really worthy of a BR in the first place. |
| #17 jimmy[137844] |
| 144.139.223.1 |
I agree with triped
Chris? Rater? My @$$
-NJ |
| #18 Napoleic[137851] |
| h24-82-62-176.vs.shawcable.net |
| heres some constructive criticism: don't whine like a bitch if someone doesn't like your report. |
| #19 jimmy[137901] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
How true. Get ggs etc etc
Oh ,and another thing: DO NOT save stuff in BMP. Either JPG or GIF will do.
-NJ |
| #20 lowlymarine[137919] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Yeah, but JPG and GIF look like crap. What's wrong with BMP? |
| #21 lowlymarine[137942] |
| user-0cej4e7.cable.mindspring.com |
| Ah, wait, uncompressed GIFs look fine...And they're smaller, too! |
| #22 brent[153965] |
| dhcp065-024-064-037.columbus.rr.com |
| i love to battle.please battle me .i am some of the best just like the rest.but i only rest on your deck.so be perpared fo me cuz i am the great. OF THE BEST! |
| #23 Chris[163450] |
| astound-64-85-254-196.ca.astound.net |
| I should be rater. |
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