| #1 scn[137402] |
| c-24-118-250-252.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| aw shit first LOL |
| #2 scn[137403] |
| c-24-118-250-252.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| girl at the end is very thx =[ |
| #3 SiG.[137404] |
| adsl-155-183-24.bct.bellsouth.net |
Holy fuck that girl is in a VERY sexy posture (what with the bikini bottom all tight..)
But yeah, Psy, didn't you get the memo?
I'll have one sent to you later, okay? |
| #4 Who'sGotLag.IDO[137405] |
| usrns93.dialup.hawaii.edu |
It was a nice br, but it looked like you wrote it in a hurry. You had some errors and lapses that disrupted a little.
1. No minimaps (I had to whip out my spatial orienting skills to determine your team's start locations)
2. Bunch of spelling errors and some strange grammar occastionally.
3. The sudden appearance of an unmentioned expansion ("natural expansion was under attack" or so)
I'd say 7-8 range. Minimaps and better spelling/grammar would up it to 8-9 range.
P.S. Centered text? I assume that was that an accident. |
| #5 BiGRooStER[137406] |
| pcp02936415pcs.dalect01.va.comcast.net |
| i only read [read=skimed.] 3/4 of it and this is what i saw that was wrong "not only did Psyonic still lived" |
| #6 endersshadow[137407] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| can you say implants? |
| #7 Ezikel[137409] |
| 212.219.117.197 |
| Whether she has or not, whats your point? If they look real, feel real, taste real.... i dont see a problem. |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[137410] |
| 1Cust202.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Yeah I did write it in a hurry. I wanted to finish it up last night and my parents were bugging the hell outa me so I couldnt go over it one final time. Guess I should of just waited until today.
I'll go back over it later today when I get home from school and fix spelling errors.
Minimaps...Yeah. I always forget those updates. I tell myself every time I'm gonna do it then, oops, I forget. Bad Psy. =(
SiG. I already have one...Its here somewhere.
Thanks for the comments everybody! |
| #9 Psyonic_Reaver[137411] |
| 1Cust202.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Yeah. Centered Text...Must have forgotten to close something somewhere. I'll get it when I get home. |
| #10 Convider[137413] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3663172.sympatico.ca |
| cool |
#11 [137414] |
| imsbbcf06.netvigator.com |
I like it
the girl at the bottom helped too |
| #12 Dogg[137418] |
| 80.232.240.84 |
Sylicon boobs suck.
But the report is okay :)! |
| #13 TM[137421] |
| 65.120.150.5 |
| 13 on a psyonic reaver report! yay! |
| #14 LameJoker[137425] |
| pool-129-44-17-245.alb.east.verizon.net |
yAy.
Ummm, seemed like you didn't proofread as well as usual, there were a few mistakes, but it was still great.
"Psyonic sends a scout to probe the top left main"
- this is either a really good joke or a really funny mistake. |
| #15 LameJoker[137426] |
| pool-129-44-17-245.alb.east.verizon.net |
O yea your momma jokes pwn.
You just put that girl at the end to give everyone a boner and a real good feeling about the report. I'm on to ya ;) |
| #16 SandTrap[137428] |
| c68.116.129.205.ts46v-11.otn-e1.ftwrth.tx.charter.com |
Less sc, more sexy girls please.
; |
| #17 ZerG~LinG[137430] |
| p444-109.ppp.get2net.dk |
MmmmMMmmMmm.
Nice girl, okayish game.
Didn't really notice the lack of minimaps so nvm that. Funny in the right places and pretty easy to read.
8 |
| #18 ZeaL[137432] |
| proxys.sj4.marketscore.com |
conufusing and rushed, but otherwise, good
:) |
| #19 Psyonic_Reaver[137433] |
| 1Cust85.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
LameJoker: I did that on purpose. But you can take it either way and omfg you found out my secret, time to die.
Ok I've been noticing in my last few BR's that people are saying I need proofreaders...Any volunteers? Just list your email here, thanks.
Right. I'll get right on fixing my mistakes now. |
| #20 Panther855[137435] |
| AC9A3823.ipt.aol.com |
| i'm just some random guy that comes in here every now and again (going to get off my lizy bum and write a br sometime too) but i'll proofread for ya. although i can't guarentee the best i can catch most of em'. Oh and the girl rocks. even if they aren't real! :D |
| #21 jimmy[137436] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
W00t! kinda like mine at times thou.....
but very good. Specially the chick :)
GJ on ur 8!
-NJ
|
| #22 Psyonic_Reaver[137440] |
| 1Cust85.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Whosgotlag: I did mention that expansion. =/
Panther: Please leave your email.
Jimmy: Explain?
I think I got all the mispellings and whatnot. If you guys see any more please give me a shout! Thanks! |
| #23 Psyonic_Reaver[137441] |
| 1Cust85.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Oh hey. two 8's. *cough* Hi Mark4 I love you *cough* |
| #24 ThePalisade[137446] |
| s28.dial1.pro.nac.net |
I'll proofread :]
dragonsven@hotmail.com
-Sven |
| #25 FFA(X)Seymour[137448] |
| pool-141-150-11-82.mad.east.verizon.net |
Cool Post... I like dis site itz cool. lol. I especially like how it shows every1's isp. Cuz i've been lookin for a really good 1 in my area cuz Verizon SUX ASS!!!!!!!!! The most common isp every1 has i see is well.. verizon.. unfortunately.
P.S.- HAHA I BET I GOT ALL OF U TO NOW LOOK AT EVERY1's ISP. MUAHAHAAHHAAH
2nd time i've ever been here. |
| #26 scn[137456] |
| c-24-118-250-252.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| yea anyone who is complaining about that girl is fucking stupid |
| #27 stac[137457] |
| AKCF3-GGI.xtra.co.nz |
proof readins quite important..
I work as an financial analyst and they threatened to fire me if I did'nt stop making mistakes.. mainly due to my lack of proof reading... hehe... |
| #28 LameJoker[137458] |
| pool-129-44-17-143.alb.east.verizon.net |
| #26 - the brilliance of your prose is blinding. |
| #29 Sabotage[137459] |
| pool-68-161-58-97.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| just looked at pretty pictures, especially last. dammit gj. |
| #30 LameJoker[137463] |
| pool-129-44-17-143.alb.east.verizon.net |
O yea, about the game:
Khas and whoever his teammate was made their biggest mistake in allowing Satan to power unhindered. Psionic fulfilled just as an important role however, just by being able to hold out, even though he was double-teamed several times. Well I don't know why I thought I had to say that. |
| #31 Psyonic_Reaver[137465] |
| 1Cust61.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
^^ Good observations.
Wanna go have sex? |
| #32 Who'sGotLag.IDO[137467] |
| usrns58.dialup.hawaii.edu |
Ahh...
"...decided to expand during the movement."
I claim "centered-text confusion" defense. |
| #33 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[137472] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| good :0:):):L)0)0)0 |
| #34 BlaZe[137473] |
| 153.110.34.65 |
chu! Sc report :)
I hope you were kidding about gaema being a non-toss map tho^^ (marx, map can be found @ sclegacy.com)
Is Satan a good t player now? Hihi satan ~~ |
| #35 LameJoker[137482] |
| pool-129-44-16-68.alb.east.verizon.net |
| hmmm Reaver? What you mean? |
| #36 endersshadow[137492] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| he means your an idiot |
| #37 scn[137493] |
| c-24-118-250-252.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| he means spell "you're" right when calling someone an idiot. =[ |
| #38 BW-sux[137495] |
| ip68-97-187-223.ok.ok.cox.net |
It was an okay report. Less typos. More minimaps.
7
BW-sux |
| #39 Psyonic_Reaver[137516] |
| 1Cust233.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| I MEAN I wanna have hot pink monkey sex with you. |
| #40 Sabotage[137540] |
| pool-68-161-58-160.ny325.east.verizon.net |
a few words:
-rofl
-nice chick
-nice map
-nice players
-gj |
| #41 Mr.Syco[137578] |
| cache-rh05.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice BR but I totally disagree with Gaema Gowon screwing over the protoss players. It is much more open than LT wich allows a protoss player to be able to flank(pincer) a Terran with greater ease. Theres also the nice double ramp cliff expo so not only can you be a sneaky devil against early expo Zerg players but it also makes it easier to stop a Terran from cliffing you. Those are just some of the obvious reasons why its good for a Protoss player. |
| #42 jimmy[137593] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Well, Reaver, mine was rushed at times, same goes 4youres :(
-NJ |
| #43 Psyonic_Reaver[137601] |
| 1Cust192.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
I assume the -NJ means Nice Job?
Nice job in rushing it out? =/
And Mr.Syco, in open spaces yes, but if a terran seiges up on the cliff overlooking your ramp and walls off the ramp closest to your ramp. You = Screwed, because they will have most likely covered the other ramp with mines or bunker.
|
| #44 Mr.Syco[137612] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Thats true if you don't keep up on observation. Also, it's very easy to starve a Terrans gas supply on that map. |
| #45 BlaZe[137616] |
| 153.110.34.65 |
Gowon is nice for toss because its an easy mass map.
Mass toss = scariest thing on the planet...
and that siege cheesy thing is easy to stop, just get a pylon or something up there. Huh! |
| #46 jimmy[137620] |
| CVPP-p-144-134-113-4.prem.tmns.net.au |
No, not a nice job, a bad job. NJ stands for Not Jimmy, BTW.
-NJ |
| #47 Psyonic_Reaver[137630] |
| 1Cust8.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| But your name is Jimmy..... |
| #48 jimmy[137632] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
He. Placing 'Not' in front of my name was an 'inspiration' I had a few months ago to confuse people. And it worked on you. hehe.
-NJ |
| #49 jimmy[137633] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Oh, and usually on LT I place cannons on my own cliff for anti-turbo-newbie and for recon.
-NOTJimmy |
| #50 jimmy[137726] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-207-13.prem.tmns.net.au |
LAST!
-NJ |
| #51 Psyonic_Reaver[137836] |
| 1Cust49.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Highly doubt it Jimmy. |
| #52 jimmy[137845] |
| 144.139.223.1 |
Reaver, what comment are you talking about?
I'm assuming #51, so... last!
-NJ |
| #53 Psyonic_Reaver[137866] |
| 1Cust105.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| No. |
| #54 jimmy[137885] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Yes!
-NJ |
| #55 Psyonic_Reaver[137948] |
| 0-3pool16-22.nas6.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
| Jimmy. NO! NOW GO AWAY! |
| #56 jimmy[137956] |
| 144.139.221.171 |
Emm okay then
-NJ |
| #57 jimmy[138026] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Okay. Mine thnx
-NJ |
| #58 Psyonic_Reaver[138044] |
| 1Cust23.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Ok if we're gonna keep doing this likes have a real conversation ok?
So hows your girlfriend? |
| #59 CobaltFusion[138059] |
| usr2-137.dial.txcyber.com |
| is there a replay? i think it always enhances a report to post the replay so that all of the readers can see what you saw first hand. |
| #60 jimmy[138060] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Good! We nearly made out yesterday T_T
Yours?
-NJ |
| #61 Notjim[138096] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| Damnit theres so many reps already not many people really send them anyway and yet theres heaps |
| #62 so[138132] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| yes |
| #63 Notjimmy[138241] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| Damn it last |
| #64 Psyonic_Reaver[138244] |
| 1Cust167.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Nah. I dont have a g/f..I mean they ARE fun and all but High School drama is just the pits. |
| #65 Notjimmy[138287] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-41.prem.tmns.net.au |
| Ach. I broke up with her yesterday and instead concentrated on MY studies. |
| #66 Psyonic_Reaver[138313] |
| 1Cust234.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| And what studies might those be? |
| #67 NotJim[138526] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
SOSE, English, Maths, Physical Education, Music, French, Biology and Chemistry.
Is that enuf for u? |
| #68 NotJim[138660] |
| 144.139.223.10 |
| It seems that I am last. |
| #69 Psyonic_Reaver[138867] |
| 1Cust139.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| No I just got busy. So why are you taking all those classes? Gonna be a doctor or something? |
| #70 NotJim[139040] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Dunno why. Parents request :((((
BTW, what year are u in? |
| #71 NotJim[140279] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
| last! |
| #72 Psyonic_Reaver[142072] |
| 0-1pool15-54.nas6.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
| Wrong again Jimmy. |