| #1 Anonymous[137328] |
| dialup-209.244.182.219.Dial1.NewYork2.Level3.net |
:)! hope you enjoyed. I will post other chapters some other
day. |
| #2 2Cautious[137329] |
| adsl-68-72-161-132.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| 1st non-author! |
| #3 2Cautious[137330] |
| adsl-68-72-161-132.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Anyway, I think that more details would seriously help. &, again, it's not interesting to say "x did this. Then did this..." like:
More and more zergs were flowing in from all sides. The siege tanks were extremely helpful in stopping them. The terrans appeared to be winning. |
| #4 Newt[137334] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
| Yeah!! Whoohooo!!!I'm #4. Now I just have to read it. |
| #5 Newt[137336] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
Now that Iv'e read your story I can say "Good Job!"
~Newt |
| #6 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137339] |
| 168.143.123.69 |
| heres an idea, SHUT UP and post this all in one battlereport, jesus christ. The only thing worse than fanfics is people who spam chapter after chapter of boring fanfics. |
| #7 The commenter from hell ever ever ever ever[137364] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| RAAR its the imposter time. dammit. |
| #8 andris[137384] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
please stop writing please, its all so awful, retake your english class.
you are quite possibly the worst author that hell has ever spawned, if there was a god you wouldn't exist. |
| #9 Andris[137385] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
my god i just skimmed over it and it was worse then i thought
"yes commander" replied commander
HAHAHHAH WTF, learn english you stupid wetback or get the hell outta the country |
| #10 jimmy[137524] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Yeah. No offense, but LEARN ENGLISH.
Is it your second language? Your sentences were rather choppy.
-NJ |
| #11 Cod[137702] |
| 63-224-57-159.dsl.uswest.net |
you know this site is fucking dead when some idiot posts this drivel and gets 3 ratings, all of them silver.
oh well |
| #12 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[138081] |
| h0001026e9af4.ne.client2.attbi.com |
"We're safe but lets travel down here where its safe." whispered Jake
Good lord, you suck. |
#13 [138282] |
| dialup-64.152.165.113.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| asdf |