| #1 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137131] |
| cache-mtc-am04.proxy.aol.com |
| FIRST |
| #2 2Cautious[137134] |
| adsl-68-72-98-28.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| OMG! I got 2nd! |
| #3 andris[137138] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
| gay go die, you too time and 2 cautious u nerds need a life, im serious go die please |
| #4 mick[137139] |
| 1Cust84.tnt12.bne1.da.uu.net |
I hate fanfics, but I'll leave a comment anyway, because I'm a fucking idiot, and for some reason need to voice the fact that I hate fanfics every time I see one
;D |
| #5 SiG.[137140] |
| adsl-35-3-18.bct.bellsouth.net |
| Nothing but <3. |
| #6 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137141] |
| 130.94.107.132 |
meh,
10 for writing
-9 for fanfic
LOZLZOZLZOLZOZLZ Im funnay. |
| #7 [137142] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
fairly solid, an enjoyable read and better than the majority of fanfics on the site
7.0-7.5 |
| #8 LameJoker[137143] |
| pool-129-44-14-220.alb.east.verizon.net |
hahaha I get it ;)
Nice job, much better than the last episode. |
| #9 ZerG~LinG[137147] |
| p404-062.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Phew, it's like a year since part 1 :/ |
| #10 2Cautious[137148] |
| adsl-68-72-98-28.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Can't I make a joke, #3?
Anyway, gj. Perhaps a little more action/character building would be nice, but oh well.
7 |
| #11 jimmy[137151] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
Pretty good. 7
- NJ !!!!!!!!!! |
| #12 FlavorOfYellow[137156] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
best part, was picture of yourself at end =]
"Lick me baby"
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| #13 Sabotage[137162] |
| pool-68-161-57-213.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| beutiful. hehe i didn't read it though. cool pic. |
| #14 Cod[137167] |
| 63-224-57-159.dsl.uswest.net |
| you write like a 6th grader |
| #15 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137171] |
| 130.94.107.155 |
| I agree with cod, this writing is very average and bland. What grade are you in? |
| #16 SiG.[137183] |
| adsl-34-237-134.bct.bellsouth.net |
6th.
durr, 12?
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| #17 scn[137186] |
| c-24-118-250-248.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| this is what id call a masterpiece |
| #18 Andris[137189] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
| all of you die, right now DIE |
| #19 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137192] |
| 209-234-160-70.gen.twtelecom.net |
| rofl, if scn calls this a masterpiece it must be the first thing he has ever read. EVER. |
| #20 SiG.[137197] |
| adsl-35-12-95.bct.bellsouth.net |
Ever ever?
Dont fill my comments thingy up with your useless poo. I can take any comments, just dont post some crap that is irrelevant towards the story. |
| #21 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[137206] |
| 130.94.107.155 |
| Alright, heres something related to the story: It sucks. gg no re. |
| #22 scn[137208] |
| c-24-118-250-248.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| hey time remember when you came to br.com and posed to be an adult but turned out to be a 12 year old nerd? yeah shut the fuck up idiot |
| #23 Decay[137222] |
| 206.10.109.76 |
Guys, hes not the real TIME. First of all, he doesnt have an AOL IP, and second, he actually acts like hes 12. TIME had the natural chic for flaming and trolling, while not acting like a completely idiotic moron (like this guy). This guy flames by saying, "you suck" and trolls downright horribly. If your going to troll buddy, get your own name. Nobody liked TIME, but you managed to worsen the reputation of his name.
SiG: I like this story. It can hold my attention, much like .Praetors stuff did. Make the next part quicker please? :P |
| #24 SiG.[137228] |
| adsl-35-22-38.bct.bellsouth.net |
| ;D |
| #25 Psyonic_Reaver[137232] |
| 0-1pool15-159.nas6.portland1.or.us.da.qwest.net |
Been following the storyline. Alright so far. Nice job.
7 |
| #26 SiG.[137237] |
| adsl-155-177-190.bct.bellsouth.net |
I appreciate that some of you like it, and I can tolerate that some of you don't.
What I'm looking for, though, is criticism.
Tell me what I'm doing wrong, tell me where I'm doing well.. I want to know those things, so that I can fix them and change.
Will I change if I don't know what I'm doing wrong? |
| #27 Anonymous writer[137319] |
| dialup-209.246.88.111.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
well sig. I think ur stuff is more exciting than mine. I like the
action. Maybe better detail, like describing the starport and crap. GREAT JOB THOUGH. |
| #28 [137450] |
| pool-141-150-11-82.mad.east.verizon.net |
Cool Post... I like dis site itz cool. lol. I especially like how it shows every1's isp. Cuz i've been lookin for a really good 1 in my area cuz Verizon SUX ASS!!!!!!!!! The most common isp every1 has i see is well.. verizon.. unfortunately.
P.S.- HAHA I BET I GOT ALL OF U TO NOW LOOK AT EVERY1's ISP. MUAHAHAAHHAAH
2nd time i've ever been here. Hehe.. I bet u'v seent his before :) |
| #29 Notjimmy[138237] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
This is nice, FFA aka Seymour, stfu talking like that.
Last |
| #30 BlueRibbon[142900] |
| 65.167.44.141 |
| Fuck you, you're last jimbo :O Me > You. :] |
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