| #1 FlavorOfYellow[136929] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
| comment away |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[136930] |
| p425-050.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Hey, first non-author. |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[136931] |
| p425-050.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Sorry to say this, but this may be the ugliest BR I've ever seen. |
| #4 kyn3tix[136932] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3684569.sympatico.ca |
Top 3 reasons why tihs report is <6 :
3) The pics look newbish
2) Most jokes are bad
1) The text is F***ing ugly! |
| #5 OneL[136933] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
Hi everyone im OneL yo ling taht last report was sick so when are u comming out with your next 1?
FlavorOfYellow it was ok, didn't have alot of description and was really ugly no offence or anything, and very unorganized, by the way i kept getting lost. |
| #6 Jaood[136935] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| Wow, I made it into the report. That last picture of the overlords popping was done by my ghost I believe some night we decided to just mine the whole of LT then nuke stuff in the middle. |
| #7 FlavorOfYellow[136938] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
| Oh so your occult ok. Sorry about pics, i know they suck, but I couldn't find out how to make an oval lasso, so i had to use the freehand. |
| #8 LameJoker[136940] |
| ip-209-23-2-248.modem.logical.net |
| hmmmmmm, to do the circly thingies you use autoshapes (with a pic editor of course) |
| #9 jimmy[136941] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
its ok yellow, but try not to use obsene language so much and try to get in more detail and non-biased would help too.
5.5.
-NOTJimmy
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| #10 endersshadow[136944] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| ack just manage to make top 10 eamon :o |
| #11 endersshadow[136947] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| the best part of this was the pic of the ovies exploding =[. however, i know that your next report will be much better once you learn more paintshop pro. |
| #12 FlavorOfYellow[136949] |
| ool-182d2b38.dyn.optonline.net |
| thx Dan |
| #13 ZeaL[136950] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
Good attempt, pretty good, considering all this spam thats being posted.
6 |
| #14 Decay[136955] |
| 206.10.109.43 |
wow.
I lose in another br. :( maybe my next ffa one will have to be me winning AND COMPLETELY FUCKING OWNING YOU WITH MY GUARDIANS!!!1 Maybe not. :/
Anyway, pics were ugly like they said, but at least they were clear. :O I'd say 7ish. I liked the part where you tried to boldface something about me getting owned and didnt close it, thereby screwing the text in the rest of the report. GG ;)
BTW I'm like 2-32758 vs lieu :( |
| #15 endersshadow[136956] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| heh i was gonna mention the bold report face decay but didnt want to kill an aspiring reporter :). |
| #16 I_am_Nitros[136957] |
| h64-141-27-37.sunwave.net |
| Dude, I wrote a white background, no picture, all texter with war3 and got a 6... Your br had colour and pictures... something is wrong here... |
| #17 Zomb0_[136958] |
| ool-182d2da9.dyn.optonline.net |
i got some things to say about this report........
eamon you said the word own too many times in the report. I mean a couple times is ok but eventually you get sick of reading this owns that and that owns this.
also whats up with the font? that bold is really annoying and half way through report i didnt want to read it. It was a good try for you first report, and hopefully in your next you'll get some better jokes. and wtf why is everything gay? if i was a homosexual i would be offended (not trying to be too harsh)
gl hf
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| #18 jimmy[136963] |
| prx3.act.schools.net.au |
I re-read it. Still not too bad.
-NJ |
| #19 BlueRibbon[136967] |
| 65.167.44.164 |
| People tend procrastinate too much, and seem to focus on the problems. This report was descent, and for a frist attempt I'd say nice job. And i also think that ovies should carry nukes :D. |
| #20 IBashar[136974] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
Hmmm. "Ugly" is the right word. Ugly font, ugly pics and ugly text.
You seem to have tried to mirror the BRs you like (with "BR.com" humour, master pic editing ...) without achieving your goal. Try to write in your own way (you see, THAT'S WHAT THE WORD "OWN" IS FOR). You must always try to stay in your range of skills. Writing an ok report with medium skills is always better than trying to write a godly report with those same skills. Do you want some example ? Here it is : #16.
Btw, I'm pretty surprised that Decay and Lieutenant play so bad (no offense, guys. I thought you were gosu NHers). Wtf is with those Dragoons drops ??? Who drops goons in a PvZ IN WHICH THE ZERG MADE NO LURKERS ??
Keep writing but try to create your own style. |
| #21 Decay[136976] |
| 206.10.109.68 |
Ahem.
"I thought you were gosu NHers."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH
AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA |
| #22 blue_hurricane[136982] |
| ool-182d2da9.dyn.optonline.net |
too many bad jokes, really bad pic editing, and half the report was in bold!!! wtf is this!!!
the best part by far was the nuking of the overlords tho |
| #23 Cod[136983] |
| 63-224-57-159.dsl.uswest.net |
this report was hard to look at
that and the players are both newbies, and Drunken)Goose is the biggest fucking idiot on the face of this entire planet. Yes, he's worse than epoch and SiG. :/ |
| #24 Chris[136984] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
The backgrounds of the pics were rainbowy. No thanks.
It was alright though. More mediocre than good, but its quality compared to some of the stuff on this site.
6.5 for you GJ |
| #25 Drunken)Goose[136987] |
| dsc04-dav-oh-4-240.rasserver.net |
I don't remember a time when I just had an army of pure Goons, and I think they're pretty effective support for picking off wounded units after a storm or if zeals/archons are playing the meatshield game :E
I think I did well with them. |
| #26 .I_Am_Nitros[136988] |
| wc01.wlfdle.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| I am the Origonal Nitros some, Bum stole my name |
| #27 Sabotage[136989] |
| pool-68-161-58-52.ny325.east.verizon.net |
| no read yet, looks good at first glance. |
| #28 Mitre10[136996] |
| CWPP-p-203-54-206-243.prem.tmns.net.au |
| LOOKS OKAY KAKAKAKA |
| #29 2Cautious[136999] |
| adsl-68-72-81-45.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Wayl, a little more detail wouldn't hurt. But certainly not bad. You might have used the word "own" a little too much, but who cares, eh? I found no problem with the pictures, myself, but then again, my br had REALLY bad pictures... ::cough::
6.5-7.5 |
| #30 Lord_Morte[137006] |
| adsl-66-137-208-242.dsl.stlsmo.swbell.net |
Out of moral considerations, I couldn't get halfway through this report. Swearing and constant innuendo is not the way to get higher ratings, methinks.
Anyway, of what (little) I read, it seems like a mediocre report. Not awesome, but pretty good for a first attempt. Just tone down the language and use more picture editing, and you should go far. *nods* |
| #31 I_am_Nitros[137049] |
| h24-67-181-59.ok.shawcable.net |
Mayhap you should get even a basic grasp of the English Language before posting there "Origonal Nitros'. Of course the rest of these guys don't... but yeah.
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| #32 LameJoker[137052] |
| pool-129-44-17-105.alb.east.verizon.net |
Ummm I would post this in the forum but it won't work sooo..
Photoshop won't show WC3 screens correctly, it just looks like a white and black checkerboard. I don't wanna use MS paint :(
help |
| #33 endersshadow[137056] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| morte you *nod* too much :/ |
| #34 Newt[137261] |
| dsl3-63-249-85-66.cruzio.com |
I'm the kind of Commenter that is too lazy to acually read most BRs (in other words im cheap) so I can be quite harsh on appearance (it being the only thing I am anything on). So anyway here is my ACTUAL review.
I thought (no offense) that the letters looked stupid in bold, the font was a very ugly font, the report was too flashy, I didn't understand a great deal of the screen shots (they were too cut up). One thing I did like was the photo of the overlords getting nuked like--well nevermind. The players were protoss and zerg but the interface was that of terran. Also nuclear missiles are TERRAN weapons. So why is a nuke seen in this game. 4.5
~Newt |
| #35 Sabotage[137365] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
:p no offense i take that back. The tye-dye thing reminded me of hippies, which made me scared.
The writing was pretty good though. Gj. (sorry about making you bush in "owning the toss with zerg+terran" |
| #36 Sabotage[137366] |
| dialup-209.244.100.93.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
:p oh yea um, crap i forgot. um OH YEA. Don't make the
arrows in red with a pinkish orange w/e background. :)
*nods* *nods* *nods* *nods* *nods* *nods* *nods* |
| #37 Random Guy[155879] |
| CPE00a065cb0ceb-CM014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Greatest images ever. GJ. |
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