| #1 Drunken)Goose[136695] |
| adsl-67-39-14-149.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| looks short, i just skimmed so i could achieve the holy 1st place comment. |
| #2 Drunken)Goose[136696] |
| adsl-67-39-14-149.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
I'm not sure what you were really trying to accomplish here... or if this is really serious... but if you're going to report short games do a few of them in one br.
I looked at it through viewsource and saw you put the background color in the body tag, when it should be in the first table tag. That seems to get everyone on their first try.
Don't neglect the Preview option. |
| #3 TelferProject[136697] |
| sdn-ap-021tnnashP0174.dialsprint.net |
| 2nd |
| #4 TelferProject[136698] |
| sdn-ap-021tnnashP0174.dialsprint.net |
| Or 3rd and 4th >_< Now to read. |
| #5 Razoriel[136699] |
| CPE-203-45-78-116.nsw.bigpond.net.au |
| 5th |
| #6 jimmy[136701] |
| dialup-195.47.194.203.acc02-nort-cbr.comindico.com.au |
6th
wow, not TOO bad i guess
-NJ |
| #7 ZeaL[136703] |
| cache-da02.proxy.aol.com |
| Its pretty good, just short. |
| #8 mick[136704] |
| 1Cust66.tnt9.bne1.da.uu.net |
| ... |
| #9 Convider[136705] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3663172.sympatico.ca |
| pretty good but short |
| #10 Smeagol[136706] |
| 139.134.57.153 |
| Looks promising but.. white text on white background?!?!? |
| #11 Smeagol[136707] |
| 139.134.57.153 |
| Next time longer and more effort and u could get gold. |
| #12 SiX5532ONE[136708] |
| client-151-198-243-110.qdx-it.com |
WTF?!?!??!?!?!?! Gold? Promising? Not Too Bad? Skimmed to get first????? You are all fucking crazy. This report was sheer GODLINESS! OMFG w00t w00t. Keep 'em coming! abkground color. HAHAHAHA. That was really clever!
I give it a high 2. |
| #13 LameJoker[136709] |
| ip-209-23-2-194.modem.logical.net |
dawned = donned.
SiX, that was a mean thing to say. Plz apologize.
Well....ahhh...all I can say is that if you wanna make a newb report, make it on a game that lasts more than 5 minutes, and make it funny, cuz thats what newb reports are supposed to be.
The description of your opponents admittadly crazy build order doesn't really evoke many laughs.
However, you show obvious HTML ability, so plz try again.
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| #14 Epoch[136712] |
| ool-182f07a7.dyn.optonline.net |
Well, I have but ONE THING to say.
BGCOLOR goes in table. Red on white != beneficial for eye health >_< |
| #15 ZeaL[136715] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
At least this guy ATTEMPTED to make a good report.
For that, i give it i low 5
like a 5.00000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001 |
| #16 2Cautious[136716] |
| adsl-68-72-88-124.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
Herm, yes. Fix the whole background thingy. Also, there were still a few spelling errors, so do check those out. Also, one of the pictures (3rd and last) did not load on my computer. Anyone else experience that?
OK, otherwise, your game was pretty short, which was annoying. Basically, you built marines and won during your first attack. Not toooooo interesting, IMO. =< Try for a longer game, and, as people said, a funny one. Good effort, though.
4-5. |
| #17 ZerG~LinG
[136717] |
| p409-060.ppp.get2net.dk |
wtf is it with people.
"However, you show obvious HTML ability, so plz try again."
Yeah red text and 66% percent working pics. HTML is woo. |
| #18 Andris[136719] |
| cache-ntc-ag03.proxy.aol.com |
| uhhhhm... speaking of spell check concour is actually conquer, and thats as far as i read cuz it was awful, but atleast u got the right idea |
| #19 greyhoundbus[136721] |
| iris3.engr.utk.edu |
| I actually found that report very amusing. C'mon people lighten up! |
| #20 SiG.[136724] |
| adsl-34-218-98.bct.bellsouth.net |
| The spellcheck thing was a joke, #18 |
| #21 Andris[136725] |
| cache-ntc-ag03.proxy.aol.com |
| well whatever i dont get nerd humor |
| #22 ZeaL[136732] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| Please stop calling everyone a nerd. |
| #23 LameJoker[136736] |
| ip-209-23-3-242.modem.logical.net |
-_- LinG, unlike many on this site, you usually have a modicum of sensitivity to bad reports, but just because you are all so godly with your skillz doesn't mean that you have to insult something that is obviously not spam.
So shove it.
Besides, I never said that his abilities were good lol jk ;). |
| #24 ForcePowered[136744] |
| ip68-3-111-175.ph.ph.cox.net |
Thx 4 the feedback. Part of the report said it would be three battles, but I wanted to put it up sooner cause I wanted some tips. BG color got me, sry bout that, know I get it. Also i was gonna add a javascript bit that pops up a new window which would contain the 4 final score areas, but I was kinda bored and just threw it together at the end. Thx very much 4 the feed back again, and I will try looking for another longer more interesting game for my next BR.
P.S. If you could rate the pics alone (2nd one mostly) would you say the were bad-good-or outstanding? Thx for input. |
| #25 TIMEisnotonYOURSIDE[136748] |
| 12-210-79-86.client.attbi.com |
| Man, I am glad that I am going to write BRs again, cause good BRs are so rare these days, alls we get is shit like this....no offense |
| #26 LameJoker[136756] |
| ip-209-23-1-180.modem.logical.net |
| If your new to the site, a little info: don't listen to TIME, hes the village idiot. |
| #27 Lord_Morte[136760] |
| adsl-65-65-193-216.dsl.stlsmo.swbell.net |
The two pictures I saw were all right.
However, your writing was not. Besides the obvious spelling/grammar errors, the entire report seemed forced, and you used very few adjectives/adverbs. Transitions were non-existant, and there were too many question marks. Generally speaking, one is enough.
As for posting it early... Don't. For the next reports, be sure you take your time, and get everything right. Otherwise, you'll be lambashed pretty badly for it. As a general rule...
If you don't make the extra effort to make the report good, it's obvious to the rest of us that you didn't. |
| #28 Bladenewbie[136777] |
| tck1-223.interl.net |
As said above, lots and lots of spelling/grammar/usage mistakes. The report was far too short, but I found it mildly amusing. Keep trying, and better luck next time.
4 |
| #29 greyhoundbus[136792] |
| cass.roam.utk.edu |
It's a joke. Maybe you'll you'll disagree about how funny it is (I personally thought it was frikkin hilarious), but there's no denying it's a joke. I particularly liked:
-"...not a shred of spell checking, or abckround color."
-Snowman's name was white against, yep, a white background.
-The missing pic at the end.
I'd enjoy seeing how many more BR 'Don'ts' he can insert into Episode 2. So appreciate it for what it is and have a good laugh... |
| #30 Forcepowered[136800] |
| ip68-3-111-175.ph.ph.cox.net |
I guess with all good comments come bad ones, but um thx. the spell checking thing was a joke by the way!
Peice out
I mean Peace lol |
| #31 Chris[136811] |
| astound-64-85-237-118.ca.astound.net |
| 3.0 for most of the reasons stated above. |
| #32 HuNteD[136812] |
| weld-ext.nt.tas.gov.au |
| nEXT tImE WARCRAFT 3 FOR FUK SAKE |
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