| #1 endersshadow[134549] |
| ool-182d2de6.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st!!!!! |
| #2 LoveStorm[134553] |
| 232.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
yes guys i know it came out crappy but it really was a good report
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| #3 LoveStorm[134554] |
| 232.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
plz give me some tips on how to omprove the presentation of it PLZ
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| #4 DArkRider[134557] |
| adsl-64-165-225-39.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
whoooeeeee
paragraph form PLEASE! |
| #5 Chris[134560] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
Tips? I'll be merciful this time.
HTML. There's a guide somewhere on this site. Maybe someone can give it to you. |
| #6 blizzar89[134565] |
| pcp01815890pcs.nash01.tn.comcast.net |
Meh... I couldn't finish it all because of the block form... The standard HTML break tag is <br>. That'll give you a space between lines. Also, pictures always help. Check out the HTML guides on the site. I'll try to read the rest then make another about the actual report.
-Bliz |
| #7 blizzar89[134567] |
| pcp01815890pcs.nash01.tn.comcast.net |
Allright... I made it through the report. It was EXTREMELY confusing. This was probably because of the format but it seemed to jump far to much for my liking, and I really couldn't tell who was who throughout the report. The game seemed decent but your writing style needs serious improvement (This would be where paragraphs help out a lot).
As for grammar and spelling issues, I saw many a spelling error and I personally when people use 4 for for or 2 for to or too. That's ust a pet peeve of mine.
The game was decent as I said and was probably tense for you, but your writing style made it seem dull. It was very hard to understand with one sentence about Storm and the next about Ready.
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| #8 blizzar89[134568] |
| pcp01815890pcs.nash01.tn.comcast.net |
[continued]
Also, every single battle you described were finished in, pretty much, one sentence. That was part of the reason that this report seemed dull and methodical to me. Put more detail into your reports, I love feeling as if I'm in the battle.
Hate to seem harsh but your report needs a good deal of work. Just keep trying. Your reports will become steadily better as time goes on. just need some experience.
-Bliz |
| #9 jimmy[134573] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-25.prem.tmns.net.au |
What blizzar89 said
NJ |
| #10 undeadbunz[134579] |
| 24-90-233-40.nyc.rr.com |
VS me in EAST REALM. I promise it will be a nice match up!
name: undeadbunz
stats: better than bnet says.
reasons for playing me: you know you want to.
anybody welcome to challenge me...always up for a good game, even getting my ass handed back to me on a plate!
undeadbunz~undeadbunz~undeadbunz~undeadbunz |
| #11 convider[134581] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3660712.sympatico.ca |
| its much clearer if you read the source... |
| #12 Whoha[134583] |
| 12-237-142-114.client.attbi.com |
| nice find 11 |
| #13 Ice_Demon[134587] |
| HSE-Ottawa-ppp238789.sympatico.ca |
| confusing. could use some pics and html. |
| #14 [134588] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
dont be put down by the negative comments. although the lack of paragraphs really hurt the report, you really have potential. keep going
5.5-6.0
use preview next time |
| #15 LoveStorm[134589] |
| 076.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
Thanx alot guys 4 the tips.. do u think i should redo this report correcting everything i did wrong?
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| #16 LameJoker[134592] |
| ip-209-23-0-171.modem.logical.net |
No don't do that.
Hmmmmm why would you give this a 5.5? More like a 2.5.
ANYWAY, you can't copy n paste pictures into a report, I call it html. There are guides on the left hand part of the page. If you have bad micro AND bad macro, you really need to work on your game. That was you, wasn't it? |
| #17 ComicGenius[134593] |
| ip-209-23-0-171.modem.logical.net |
| O YES it really helps if you use the English language, please don't use instant messanger speech in a battlereport, it makes it so confusing. Biggest problem- saying 4 every time you mean FOR. |
| #18 andaca[134596] |
| ool-4353591e.dyn.optonline.net |
2.
Assuming you muddle through the complete lack of html and page breaks, maybe a 4. |
| #19 pop_killer[134598] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3757139.sympatico.ca |
| Lovestormer, you should make paragraphs in your future battlereports. |
| #20 pop_killer[134600] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3757139.sympatico.ca |
| Lovestorm*(I think LoveStormer sounds better) |
| #21 Lovestormer[134601] |
| 061.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
happy lol
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| #22 Cyana[134604] |
| a1.troweprice.com |
| I don't understand why people that post reports on this site generally suck at warcraft. This is a fairly well-known site, why don't people observe GOOD players playing games and report on all the skill that was involved, rather than just get two random people together, play a game, and submit a report on how EXCITING it was. As a high level player myself, I enjoy the format of the site, but I find the reports to be drab, especially the recent trend towards ffa games where it seems like NO ONE really knows what they're doing. It's like watching a bunch of fat guys do synchronized swimming with a beer in each hand. |
| #23 LoveStorm[134610] |
| 083.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| actually dude, the guy who i played is lv 18 on his other account so... |
| #24 ZerG~LinG[134613] |
| p431-062.ppp.get2net.dk |
"Holy paragraph batman"
-mark4 |
| #25 LoveStorm[134616] |
| 083.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| 5.5 !!!! i dont even deserve a fuking 2 |
| #26 2Cautious[134626] |
| adsl-68-72-101-127.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Well, depends on the way you look at the rating. Everyone's gonna have different opinions. Anyway, I'm sure you've seen the light & we can look forward to some good BRs from you. => Gl (hf ka dd). |
| #27 LoveStorm[134628] |
| 054.c.002.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| thanx cautious |
| #28 [134641] |
| mnet-baca244-13-199.monarch.net |
Cyana, i think the genral low skill in BRs is for a couple of reasons.
firstly, most people do have a life, and its hard to be a good BRer and still find time to be a good player. people are often forced to report there own games because everyone practicaly seems to ladder and there are obviously no obs in that. belive me, its hard to ever obs a game with GOOD players
secondly, i actualy belive that low level games where people dont know what they are doing/are just fucking around are more fun to read about than how some high level player massed casters or massed dual aura
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| #29 Mark4[134662] |
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| I unchecked the tag box for ya. |
| #30 lovestorm[134668] |
| 028.a.001.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| thanx a bunch |
| #31 tHE FAG[134689] |
| pool-68-161-56-9.ny325.east.verizon.net |
im new but i know,
for a black background, (it works but its weird)
<bg color=000000>
<td>
-=AND=-
for green text,
<font color=green>
<body>
blah blah
</body> </font>
THats just a start, there is plenty more, try that so far. |
| #32 THE FAG[134690] |
| pool-68-161-56-9.ny325.east.verizon.net |
oh correction
for a black background,
<bg color=000000>
</td>
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| #33 Smeagol[134694] |
| 139.134.57.153 |
Having played alot with Lovestorm i have to say he is a really good player for the ammount of time he plays and he has got about 70% win ratio
if he stayed in just one account he'd be about lvl 15 by now
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| #34 LoveStorm[134697] |
| 064.c.002.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| thanx friend |
| #35 LoveStorm[134698] |
| 064.c.002.hob.iprimus.net.au |
| but my account has got nothing to do with my BattleReports |
| #36 jimmy[134831] |
| cvpp-p-144-138-156-183.prem.tmns.net.au |
what #25 said.
-NOTjimmy |
#37  [134986] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Confusing text with a few too many abbreviations, and I couldn't get a feel of any excitement from the so-so game. HTML is not needed for a good report, but a good grasp of the English language, or at least a proofreader, is a must. 3.5 - 4.0.
Regards,
~CB~ |
| #38 DarkMasterK[138992] |
| ciscoce.psd.k12.co.us |
Nice report, even without picture.
Especially good comsider it was only ur first. |
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