| #1 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[131620] |
| h0010b59c54e2.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| Well if no one else will take 1st I guess I will...and feel free to "ruin" my comment section, immature fools. I dont care. |
| #2 Chris[131622] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
| Hah. |
| #3 Flash of Death[131624] |
| ppp398-mfe.tiagris.net |
| did I say you could use my picture...uhh...I mean...uhh,nice report... |
| #4 XMrNiceguyX[131625] |
| f35158.upc-f.chello.nl |
I dont wanna hurt anyone's feeling here, But I actually think this is starting to look like a battle report.
If you add some pics and give some more details of what happens, this battle report will deserver a 10.
I liek it if people try to make reports in an origianal way, and the dialogues really are a difference compared with the "normal" battlereports written by CattleBruiser and sht :)
Atm I would give it a 6/7. MOre pics and more details will definately get it to a 8/9. |
| #5 Chris[131626] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
Honestly, you COULD have:
1. Pictures.
2. Not do fanfiction of any kind right after you admit it sucks. And yes, you're right.
3. Make text size just a little bit bigger on some parts.
4. Post under TIME is not on YOUR SIDE. Don't be a pussy and hide behind other names. If you want to actually do something, put your name behind it fully.
A surprising effort by you. 5.1 |
| #6 Berra[131630] |
| h204n1fls32o814.telia.com |
It's nice to know you have learned how to insert colored backgrounds. Too bad you chose all black. :)
Nice report. |
| #7 jusdh[131631] |
| vnnyca-1-g1-l2-148.vnnyca.adelphia.net |
| it's spelled adieu, damn! im in 9th grade english too.. haha |
| #8 PsiStorm3328[131632] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
I liked it, but lack of pictures don't give it too much appeal.
7-8 |
| #9 Decay[131633] |
| 206.10.109.71 |
First off, "Not an undead thing was alive" -~TinoYS~
Irony? lol
Anyhow, I wish that you would try more aften. This would be a great report if it had pics. The Fanfic mixed in was kind of dumb, but with an actual story going behind it, that could be cool, too. For examples on what I mean, go read MRHD's Gunnar's Saga. It's old school War2, but its pretty much like this, from br to ff and back to br. Please make real reports more often, I enjoyed, and it's nice to not have to flame you. :P
~Decay |
| #10 CrazyGoNuts[131635] |
| 1Cust3.tnt1.huntington-beach2.ca.da.uu.net |
| I don't care if TIME's br's are actually getting better, i still want him to get run over by a clown car and dragged away by wolves and have vultures miraculously fly from Afric to clean up his carcass |
| #11 JLW[131636] |
| AC9B6C20.ipt.aol.com |
| that was pretty . . . . good. make more like that TIMe i thought it was pretty good. 6/7 |
| #12 god[131637] |
| pool-64-222-170-42.man.east.verizon.net |
| delete |
| #13 Chris[131638] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
For Christ's sake...
Adeiu: French.
Without further ADO. That's what you put, #7. |
| #14 ................[131643] |
| HSE-MTL-ppp60938.qc.sympatico.ca |
| Ya i agree, go back to your grade nine english class fag, HAHAHA U SUCK. Anyways this report wasn't bad, but it could have been longer. Uhhh a 6, if i were generous I would say 7. Anyways cut out the *Triumphant music plays* stuff. P.S. HE REALLY IS SOME GOD I AM RIGHT BAHAHAHAHA< NEVAR DOUBT ME AGAIN. P.S. if you put as much effort into these BRs as you do into trolling you would get consistent gold. |
| #15 blitzkreig_[131645] |
| dialup-63.214.15.125.Dial1.Seattle1.Level3.net |
lotta gramatical and technical errors.
then instead of than
halls of the dead arn't really "born"
Black citedal-> Black Citadel
The ghoul army was rising-> The numbers in the ghoul army were rising
tuche-> touché, you get the idea
fan fic script was pretty lame |
| #16 MrBigStuff[131646] |
| 24.247.208.81.bay.mi.chartermi.net |
| Well, if this was in fact your work, TIME, I'd have to say good job. Personally, I really liked the transition from BR to FF and back, it really added variety and was more entertaining to read than just the "usual battle report routine" of early game, mid game, late game. Keep writing like this and I might actually get to look forward to reading your reports! |
| #17 pop_killer[131648] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3756562.sympatico.ca |
not again a fucking warcraft 3 report...
warcraft 3 is seriously like warcraft 2 |
| #18 ZerG~LinG[131650] |
| p426-067.ppp.get2net.dk |
WHo cares.
The fact that you've already made so much shit should be enough incentive for anyone to skip this completely, not commenting at all. Maybe just posting:
"Die" |
| #19 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[131651] |
| h0010b59c54e2.ne.client2.attbi.com |
Sorry ZerG~LinG, but I am a good reporter when I want to be, and the non-ignorant people of this site will always read my reports and comment on them.
I dont care about you. |
| #20 Nightwisp[131652] |
| 12.223.140.207 |
| I side with the Ling of the Pastry. You are so annoying, so retarded, and you lie so much no one will ever really look forward to a Time report. You have achieved infamy, and it will haunt you forever at this site. |
| #21 2e722[131653] |
| cache210.156ce.scvmaxonline.com.sg |
Hmm...if this was really time's work, its a big surprise. I actually laughed alittle, because i only read the first few parts but that was enough to let me come to this point...
There were quite some spelling and grammar errors, but the fanfiction part made me laugh for sometime. But... seriously, Time, if you were to really submit the report as your name 'Time is not on YOUR SIDE' and submit more reports like this instead of lousy ones... you might be respected some day.
It might be a 5~6. More pics.
Peace |
| #22 pop_killer[131654] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3756562.sympatico.ca |
| fucking warcraft 3 |
| #23 LameJoker[131665] |
| ip-209-23-1-32.modem.logical.net |
| Haha, actually made me laugh a few times, the fanfic was cool. Was that little crazy thing at the end who was tracking blood supposed to be me? It said Lame on it. |
| #24 Epoch[131675] |
| ool-182f07a7.dyn.optonline.net |
I guess its that "TIME" of month again... ;D
No, actually this wasn't half bad. Pics and better writing skills plz ;/ |
| #25 TheyAre[131676] |
| pa-gbg-ts-02-024-197-051-016.winbeam.com |
This sucked. It took for-fucking-ever to figure out what the hell was going on, your writing sucks, and you're TIME. That's about it.
5 because you put some effort (barely) into it. |
| #26 UltimateFire[131679] |
| cache-ntc-ad01.proxy.aol.com |
| Try harder. |
| #27 Flash of Death[131687] |
| ppp30-hrl.tiagris.net |
#15
this is fan-fic...the ground gave birth to the halls of the dead.
And the ghouls learned to float...
and in time land, there are no such things as gramical errors.
...and about the script...
.....no comment about that one. |
| #28 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[131688] |
| h0010b59c54e2.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| aye, flash of death has everything down. thats what i meant by all of those. therefore, my writing is flawless. |
| #29 Sovereignty[131727] |
| wsip68-15-45-159.ri.ri.cox.net |
| rofl. does anybody else think that picture of the baby looking at the doll is the funniest thing ever? |
| #30 ibanez[131736] |
| c-24-62-163-32.ne.client2.attbi.com |
the lack of pictures, blatant homosexual bashing and just overall little-kiddishness of this report would normally make it deserve a 2... and so that's what it gets. I'd also like to say it was not funny, at all, although it clearly tried to be.
This report is very well-written... if TIME is in 6th grade (and failing).
p.s. never do the fan-fic/report thing again, please. There is a reason why nobody has ever done it before. |
| #31 CrazyGoNuts[131737] |
| 1Cust90.tnt1.huntington-beach2.ca.da.uu.net |
| No, die |
#32  [131779] |
| lon213b.long.fsu.edu |
This was okay but it could have used a lot more polish. The condescending tone was grating after a while. With a little work you could have some decent reports on your hands. 6.0-6.5.
Regards,
~CB~ |
| #33 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[131781] |
| h0010b59c54e2.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| 6? the tree of life and farm one got a 6 too. your saying they are equal in goodness? I fail to see your logic. |
| #34 Chris[131789] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
They weren't equal in goodness. This was crap.
But hey, you've already got nearly the same rating as Some_God. Isn't that what counts? Being better than him? |
| #35 I_am_Nitros[131793] |
| h64-141-25-41.sunwave.net |
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D! AN I"M FUNNY PRODUCTION! :D I LOVE that pic! :D:D:D:D:D:D
eh heh... eh hehehheh...... |
| #36 cmot_dibbler[131799] |
| p14229226.net.upc.nl |
| Time, this is really your master piece! I think there's no way you could improve on this monumental effort of battlereporting. I therefore strongly recommend to stop writing anything so people will remember you as fondly as you have allways been |
| #37 Flash of Death[131803] |
| 168.53.109.33 |
| CB, whatever happened to "Cheers"? |
| #38 scn[131804] |
| c-24-118-250-248.mn.client2.attbi.com |
| other people started stealing it, and since cb is a hardcore mofug he threw down wit a new phrase, nomsain? |
| #39 SiG.[131805] |
| adsl-34-23-225.mia.bellsouth.net |
*Pries SCN off of CB's cock*
Nice report, TIME...
I really liked the switch from FF to BR to FF to BR and so on..
Those people here who have such limited imagination that they despice FF's probably wont like it.. But I loved it.
Maybe if you had a little better dialogue, and made it flow better...
Good stuff, man. Make some more, but in BW.
War3 BLOWS. |
| #40 SiG.[131806] |
| adsl-34-23-225.mia.bellsouth.net |
| Despize* |
| #41 Ruin Time's Day[131807] |
| 24-90-13-224.si.rr.com |
| Next time you should try not to suck. |
| #42 Chris[131816] |
| astound-64-85-237-205.ca.astound.net |
Despise*
People who don't like fanfictions probably don't like them because they ruin imagination. |
| #43 ..[131817] |
| wwwcache.lanl.gov |
| sig test |
| #44 RebornWarrior[132295] |
| Barrie-ppp126876.sympatico.ca |
| I laughed my @$$ off when i read this, i dont know why you guys are knockin his fanfic i thought it was great, Time please keep up the awesome reports and never take out your fanfic |
| #45 ChaosDemigod[133172] |
| 197.80-202-225.nextgentel.com |
| lol, 10 for adding fanfic as a joke |
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