| #1 Augury[130202] |
| web.ucsd.edu |
Your writing needs work. Fragments throughout the whole report will make it difficult to read...
Try borders on those pictures.
Otherwise, quite an improvement over that text crap you put up earlier
1st |
| #2 GSpoT[130203] |
| sdn-ap-021neomahP0379.dialsprint.net |
Hehe thax I repeatedly had unknown problems getting the top 2 pics to work and in fact the background should be black I fail to see why that didnt work either hell someone can check the html its good to go and be black.
And the writing is horrible in a way for the reason writing on a 1 hour 58 minute game where u basically just ran around keeping the enemy scattered and pissed isnt easy from about 35 minutes to around 1 hour 30 minutes I was just hitting and running non stop.
Hehe and yea that text crap was total accident if only the 300kb limit on replays was upped to 353 so I could post the replay its really a nice watch.
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| #3 Lieutenant[130204] |
| adsl-67-39-7-6.dsl.dytnoh.ameritech.net |
| 2nd nonauthor on a... gspot report? |
| #4 FDASFDSDFS[130205] |
| 209.234.157.163 |
| Gosu? |
| #5 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130207] |
| 209.234.157.162 |
| Damn, those split personalities really get out of hand... |
#6  [130209] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
"To start things off I took some ghouls and did some traditional creeping knowing well I need high level heroes well red did some scouting and said yellow was massing archers so I thought I could pay him a visit to decide if he would be our first rush victim. "
wtf are you trying to say? |
| #7 Augury[130210] |
| web2.ucsd.edu |
GSpoT, perhaps you misunderstood what I meant. Your command of the English language isn't flawed only in the report. Just read your post (#2). You have three sentences that couldn't possibly pass as a C in any English class.
Use punctuation. Try reading aloud what you type to see if it sounds right, at least.
If you can get your writing up to a coherent level, your report could probably hit a gold rating. |
| #8 Jaood[130211] |
| hc6524652.dhcp.vt.edu |
| Holy fucking run-on sentence, Batman. |
| #9 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130212] |
| 209.234.157.160 |
| As an English Teacher, this would get an F. You are either pathetic, retarded, or from another country. Good day, ma'am. |
| #10 Mr.Puddles[130215] |
| netcache-2002.public.lawson.webtv.net |
| Funny, you have 3 "the worst part"'s in your report. Confused me a hell of a lot. |
| #11 Sovereignty[130216] |
| 131.109.124.206 |
| wtf? i think reading this report as made every visitor here silghtly dumber. I dont think i saw 1 non-fragment non-runon sentence in the whole thing. Pics shouldn't disrupt the text like that, place them on the side of the page and let the text keep going down alongside it maybe? much easier to read. |
| #12 The Wise One[130217] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
| Ya 1 on the English |
| #13 The Wise One[130218] |
| 170.211.33.155 |
Do you see the two reports below yours?
Notice how they're text onlys?
Notice how they both have 5's and your report only has a 3?
Notice how the grammer on their's is proper for the most part?
In conclusion, the fact that you added pictures does not make up for the poor grammar usage. |
| #14 Chris[130219] |
| 169.199.140.249 |
#13, you mispelled grammar. ^^
Your first 2 pictures are ruined. You should check up on that. |
| #15 Ender[130225] |
| 128.226.4.140 |
| yea the bad GRAMMAR ^_^ made my head hurt and i didn't even read past the 1st pic (or lack of pic whichever) but according to the comments posted already by everyone else. i'll just nod my head and agree. |
| #16 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130229] |
| aas2-3.rrcnet.com |
| LMAO #13, you can't even spell, let alone talk about English... And you people say I aam retaded. |
| #17 TSUNAMI[130236] |
| 209.234.157.160 |
| I'm not going to comment. |
| #18 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130239] |
| 130.94.107.201 |
| Hehe so true. :) |
| #19 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130271] |
| 209.234.157.161 |
| Ok um, ya, stop stealing my name please? Thanks... |
| #20 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130289] |
| 130.94.106.234 |
| Shut up im time stop stealing my name |
| #21 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130293] |
| 128.226.4.166 |
| Shut up im time and im gay and i'm supposedly a english teacher |
| #22 GSpoT[130354] |
| sdn-ap-027neomahP0201.dialsprint.net |
An english teacher with too much time to criticize.
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PS: Thax for the criticism all honestly if i could have just posted my replay I would have saved time for both of us it appears. I didnt realize u ppl all like these reports filled out in essay or novel form. Considering most of the stuff I type is in shortened internet eubonics form hehe.
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#23  [130359] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Too hard to follow. 4.0
Regards,
~CB~ |
| #24 The Wise One[130907] |
| 150.208.98.171 |
#16
Lmao! i wouldn't be talking about English TIME sure i misspelled grammar but i also wrote it spelled right below that
not to mention the fact that u spelled am as aam and retarded as retaded
and we're suppose to believe your a English teacher |
| #25 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[130921] |
| cache-mtc-ab09.proxy.aol.com |
| That wasn't me, it was some fool pretending to be me. Dumbass? Dumbass. |
| #26 The Wise One[131002] |
| 150.208.98.171 |
You can change IP's at will so as for as I'm concerned any post using your name is you. So unless you can give me a list of the IP's that are really you, quit denying what you really posted.
And since when did English teachers use grotesque, disgusting, inappropriate slang terms such as "Dumbass."
Let me answer my own question, since never. |
#27  [131577] |
| proxys.ord.marketscore.com |
| heh |
#28  [131578] |
| proxys.ord.marketscore.com |
| heheh |
#29  [131579] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| better have worked |
#30  [131580] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| >=D |
| #31 [131581] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| faadf |
| #32 </b>Heheh[131582] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| sadf |
#33  [131583] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| damnit |
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