| #1 ???[127320] |
| 168.53.108.130 |
| 1st!!!! HAHAHAHAHHA the first time im first T-T |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[127321] |
| p458-68.ppp.get2net.dk |
Seems like thought has actually gone into this :)
Will read now. |
| #3 Snowman[127322] |
| e0.filt2.davidson.tn.ena.net |
| 3rd!!! |
| #4 Pay Your Taxes[127324] |
| nat2.eaglesi.net |
4th!!!
Anyway, nice job. I enjoyed it. |
| #5 vincible[127325] |
| SABERTOOTH.MIT.EDU |
| Not bad. Of course, your track record on finishing stories isn't promising :P Think you'll finish this one? |
| #6 Merkava[127326] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
| I quit after Drefsab was very mean to me, he's such a meanie =*( |
| #7 Ender[127331] |
| 128.226.33.50 |
| looks nice but fanfics = no thx -_-;; play some sc |
| #8 Mr.Puddles[127338] |
| netcache-2001.public.lawson.webtv.net |
| Not that bad! Good work. Just one thing... do a battle report. There are an abundance of fanfics. Same with battle reports but they are much better =] |
| #9 Ender[127349] |
| 128.226.33.74 |
| with pics =] |
| #10 juiceman[127407] |
| mail.deltasupplyco.com |
| Screw anybody that says otherwise, this is good stuff. It looks like part of what happened before the Human Campaign began, I like that. You're good, definitely a future in it for you. I don't see why you should have to do Battlereports if you don't want to, other do that. |
| #11 Merkava[127411] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
| I would do BRs but see... no computer at home, doing this at school... |
| #12 Rhino[127416] |
| 216.7.247.5 |
| excellent story, IMO, continue!! |
| #13 Arcjin[127418] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| Finally a good fanfic, plz continue!!! |
| #14 UltimateFire[127437] |
| spider-ntc-ta051.proxy.aol.com |
| Good story, stop and I stab you. |
| #15 Merkava[127470] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
| LoL Chapter Two here it is... |
| #16 2Cautious[134175] |
| adsl-68-72-89-123.dsl.chcgil.ameritech.net |
| Well, nice, but in general if you're going to do fanfic, do it about made-up characters (of course, "real" characters can make appearances, just don't focus the story on them). Well, that's just MHO. If people like it, do it! |