| #1 demon_blade3[124669] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-1-134.rasserver.net |
| i'm working on the last part of the lists :D cause i just noticed they were cut off |
| #2 The 8-bit Version of Buddha[124671] |
| 1Cust78.tnt9.lax3.da.uu.net |
| nice HTML skillage you got there, Justin. Keep it up, and you'll make your own webpage in no time (and you'll stop bugging me about making a website for you! :p). |
| #3 Redemption6[124672] |
| 216-164-223-141.c3-0.lex-ubr3.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| who the fuck can't make their own webapge? :D nice br, haven't read it yet but it looks nice. For the record, blue on black = no thx. |
| #4 Zeal1590[124674] |
| spider-tm013.proxy.aol.com |
| 4th |
| #5 Zeal1590[124675] |
| spider-tm013.proxy.aol.com |
| oh yeah, great report |
| #6 Corpus[124677] |
| 12-216-216-153.client.mchsi.com |
| I don't mind the blue on black, infact i might go so far to say i like it. Gj nice report. |
| #7 doobiesnacks[124678] |
| c-66-56-2-206.atl.client2.attbi.com |
at first i was gonna bitch about first pic, but ur alt text was damn funny. i like ur writing style. next make sc report
7th |
| #8 otherOne[124681] |
| ool-182e5490.dyn.optonline.net |
Don't bold, no comic sans ms font, and blue isn't that great.
Btw nice br
6~7-ish |
| #9 DarkLord[124682] |
| 18.PPP.NBY1.enoreo.on.ca |
gw. your first pics sux. other than that it was great. try diffrent angles for W3 pics... blue is fine...
wtf is with this double posting thing??? am i missing out on some gay fad??? stop it all you fucking newbs |
| #10 demon_blade3[124687] |
| dsc06.ivn-ca-2-193.rasserver.net |
| i deserve that :( but anyway I would've spent more time on the pics, but my first year at high school is coming up (:-O oh dear god no!) and I need the time for other things (catch-22 is a confusing book :/ ). but thnx for telling me what needs to be better, the only way to learn is from your mistakes (or crappy br's). as for the 8-bit version of Buddha, thnx for giving out my name, idiot, it's bad enough there's ONE popular Justin that people tease me with ("Oh you look like Justin""Ya bitch, I am Justin!", there might be another one (that fucker from the fucking american idol) >:O (his name is vincent, there, we're even) |
| #11 LuckyNewbie:P[124688] |
| dialup-65.58.56.140.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
what am i being thanked for now? oh, and comic sans ms font goes better when its smaller (i dont know if it was bolded)
maybe a better font color would be better too, oh well
now to read |
| #12 Redemption6[124689] |
| 216-164-223-141.c3-0.lex-ubr3.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
| Freshman year is ALWAYS fun :D anyways I read the report, and i still think blue on black is a pain in the ass. Please use white next time. Anyways the pictures were okay, but BORDERS and text on the pics could do SO MUCH MORE. The pictures weren't always aligned correctly either and the quality wasn't 100%. The writing was all together interesting, and I thought you did pretty good. Your grammar is okay, but sometimes you made bad use of comma's, doing a "run on sentence", when two independent ideas are displayed with a comma separating them. This made it HARD to understand at some parts. lastly, the game was a rape. They didn't attack once, you just raped them everytime, in fact it seemed that your ally's hunts could take both of their armies. This is an 8 or a very high 7. |
| #13 Draco2003[124697] |
| 1Cust186.tnt1.fort-wayne.in.da.uu.net |
| Nice...for a second report, dude, liked the closeup of the skeletons preparing to fight the orcish hord, gives it a kind of a mithical feeling. |
| #14 ZerG~LinG[124716] |
| p443-7.ppp.get2net.dk |
Ach.
I cant read, plz change color if possible :( |
| #15 demon_blade3[124754] |
| spider-mtc-tf023.proxy.aol.com |
I'm using my aunt's computer now so it's not some J.A. posing.
1.Luckynewbie:p your report was the first I read on here and it made me want to do reporting (cause it was kick-azz)
2)White on black next time (yes?)
3)No comic sans (what's a better one)
4)Dun't fale englash nube!
5)Borders
6)I know there's sumthing I'm missing but what else? |
| #16 rado907[124777] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| Nice report ;-) |
| #17 demon_blade3[124780] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-1-74.rasserver.net |
if it's hard to read try this:
highlight all the text and maybe find my lil comments
and then tell me a better background color and text color
(and font). i think i've commented enough plz give me your own suggestions, rants, complaints, comments (phh, yeah right), whateva's. and WOW week is tomorrow (week of welcome, so high schoolers can get to know each other better) so wish me luck |
| #18 demon_blade3[125015] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-1-211.rasserver.net |
| all right, i got above 5! |
#19  [125256] |
| pcp660145pcs.prshng01.fl.comcast.net |
Not a bad job for the first effort. I didn't see any pictures (Netscape 7b) and blue on black is really hard to read. One suggestion I have would concern the way you write -- It's okay for a battle report to be conversational, but this was sometimes written in a more "on-the-fly chatroom" style. If you're writing a report it should sould like a written report, not an oral report.
Also, the humour and insults sometimes fell flat for me... maybe it was a little too over the top in the beginning. 6 - 6.5
Cheers,
~CB~ |
| #20 demon_blade3[125324] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-1-5.rasserver.net |
| thank you sir CattleBruiser, I have learned from my mistakes and hopefully my next report I will put more of an effort into, and I'm not much of a humorous guy, more of a sarcastic annoyance ;) |
| #21 koa.quicksilver[125918] |
| ool-182ea1c4.dyn.optonline.net |
| i almost didnt read it after the first picture, but the others were really great. blue on black got a little boring, but overall it was fine. great br <( ' ' <) <( ' ' )> (> ' ')> ahem, sorry |
| #22 demon_blade3[126457] |
| dsc05.ivn-ca-3.rasserver.net |
| lol no matter i like those things. they remind me of kurby and old school vid games. ahh memories |
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