| #1 Coolin[122235] |
| h24-86-146-23.ed.shawcable.net |
| First. |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[122243] |
| p432-062.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Second, as always I'll read these fics whenever im offline, since wasting VALUEABLE 56k time on reading a fanfic just isn't my thing. |
| #3 Decay[122253] |
| 206.10.109.36 |
Haha epoch, GIMP didn't work, eh? Oh well, it was kind of slow, due to the lack of battles, but it was still pretty well written IMO. 6, maybe 7.
Kudos!
~Decay |
| #4 Epoch[122254] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
1:
I despise your kind.
2:
See previous (JK)
3:
Damn u
4:
Thanks Decay... It wasn't GIMP, it's just I can't draw the way I wanted to with a mouse ^^
Sorry for lack of battles... Next one will have biiiiig fight, promise ^^ |
| #5 Epoch[122255] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
Weee, I'm spamming my own comment section!
Anywho, to the rater who rated this (Most likely Dag...), could u have atleast posted on the comments... I like criticism so I can improve. As long as it's helpful criticism... |
| #6 Redemption6[122256] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
I found the plot kinda interesting, even though a bit predictable. I gather that most people would wish that the council was nice and forgiving, but i think you made a good decision at making the council corrupt. It builds for a better future story. I didn't notice any huge grammatical errors, partly because i didn't read this one, i read the version you gave me earlier today, and im hoping that all the grammatical errors there have been fixed. Overall very nice, in fact i find this just as interesting as kane's reports. <------ gets shot
i personally think this could be an 8. |
| #7 whiteboy[122257] |
| 208-58-201-2.s510.tnt1.abrd.md.dialup.rcn.com |
you need to work on dialouge a little. it comes across a bit stiff, but otherwise it was good.
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| #8 Reaken Fretard[122260] |
| 150-pool10.ras11.vahen.tii-dial.net |
Pretty good.
I don't know enough about Mave to decide whether or not I like her. If you write a litle bit more about her, tehn I can decide.
Nice plot twist at the end |
| #9 LuckyNewbie:P[122280] |
| dialup-65.58.58.53.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| wtf, ends justify means! |
| #10 LuckyNewbie:P[122282] |
| dialup-65.58.58.53.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| this aint that bad, but im amazed the elves lasted for 15,000 years if they make such a stupid mistake as giving the assassination job to the one assassin that has reason to back out on it |
| #11 Epoch[122306] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
7:
Thanks Red. BTW I tweaked some stuff around, but you didn't miss anything by reading this version.
Unfortunately, the Raters didn't agree with you
8:
The Dialogue is supposed to be stiff and formal-ish
War3=Middle Ages Setting.
9:
Thanks, I liked the plot twist myself ^^
10:
Ends don't justify means, especially when the council is corrupt. ^^
11:
Shadowfury's relationship with Kathris isn't a whole big public thing, the Master of the Demon Hunter's didn't know. Also, Shadowfury is one of their best.
12:
Mave will show up in the next episode, it was somewhat fun writing from a fresh viewpoint.
I'm not that fond of KOTGs, so I probably won't include one.
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| #12 ZerG~LinG[122421] |
| p462-68.ppp.get2net.dk |
Hey Epoch, I read all of your stories in one stretch now.
I don't find it as tense as The Journey, neither does it have that speacil "mood" you find in Dag's.
Still I would rate it a 7 after these three episodes.
(I think fanfics should only be rated every second or third time)
The reason this story isn't as good as the toher may have something to do with the subject. We all know War3, but both The Journey, and Dags story takes us into a whole new world.
If I was to give some advice it would be to make this radically different than the campaign. (I mean, NE and Humans fighting Undead? done before anyone?) The plot twist at the end of this was nice enough tho. |
| #13 ZerG~LinG[122422] |
| p462-68.ppp.get2net.dk |
| And speaking of characters, include some druids. |
| #14 Epoch[122435] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
14:
Ah, thanks. I haven't done any writing in a long time, so I just decided to get back into it. I started with something easy, a fanfic, so I wouldn't have to create a huge base to work off of. Maybe next time around.
As for a huge difference from the SP campaign... I haven't finished it (I refuse to cheat on this one)(NOBODY GIMME SPOILERS!), so I don't know exactly what to do. But what happens could be somewhat different. I'm still deciding exactly how to end the series... I know of a way that if I pulled it off right, it'd be one of those things that leaves you feeling somewhat satisfied, yet sort of... bleh.
I have plans for the rest of the series, I'll see if I can fit any Druids in... but, I don't plan on creating any new characters. |
| #15 LuckyNewbie:P[122443] |
| dialup-63.211.244.114.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| asdfadaf ends do justify means, read machiavelli less ch0b0 night elves |
| #16 ZerG~LinG[122528] |
| p460-34.ppp.get2net.dk |
| couldn't agree more with #17 |
| #17 ZerG~LinG[122529] |
| p460-34.ppp.get2net.dk |
Now, does that make me:
a) A heartless bitch
b) A guy who faces reality
c) A comment whore |
| #18 Epoch[122557] |
| ool-182f0edb.dyn.optonline.net |
19:
d) All of the above |
| #19 EldritchEvil[122847] |
| nr11-216-196-185-210.fuse.net |
| roofles. |
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