| #1 Kodiak8[120878] |
| d324-ps5-mel.alphalink.com.au |
Well guys hope you all liked it. If i get enough feedback ill continue the story...
Till next time ^_^... |
| #2 Furious[120879] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| 1st!!!!!!!! |
| #3 IBashar[120880] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
| 2nd. Not sure to read it yet. BRs pllliiiiizzzzzzzz ! |
| #4 Decay[120887] |
| 206.10.109.59 |
Fanfics seem to have had their day here, but frankly, I like them, as long as there are brs to read too. But no brs =[
Anyway, this is OK, aside from a few spelling/grammatical errors. The whole terran vs zerg thing is way overdone, if you ask me. Make them fight the toss or something. Also, since someone else is gonna say it, I might as well. White text on black bg is better. =P |
| #5 Kane[120900] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Some advice: nobody's gonan read a report called "a fanfic, my first br" |
| #6 Decay[120906] |
| 206.10.109.65 |
Yeah, especially Kane. He hates fanfics, he only likes "stories". ;]
~Decay |
| #7 Redemption6[120923] |
| pc3431.bates.edu |
| ....another fanfic terran v zerg about one idiot going out into the world and falling unconcious etc etc. it was okay detail, like the "walking across spines part" but for the most part it was juts ordinary. no html=nogold. i think itd be a decent 5, a really bad 6, or a really good 4. no more plz. |
| #8 apos'trophe[120930] |
| adsl-63-200-51-170.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| omfg I read a fanfic |
| #9 :+:SlipKnoT:+:[120960] |
| atiy44hsy452e.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| Sucky! |
| #10 IBashar[120962] |
| coyotte-e.insat.com |
umm, read it now. Not bad but nothing new. Good ol' standard for a first fanfic, like BRing a 1v1 comp on LT.
But share and keep giving stuff to this site. There must be ppl who like it. I hope for you. |
#11  [120981] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112496.sympatico.ca |
Hey, some great writing. Improve your plot and you'll make very good stories indeed.
6ish. |
| #12 jUsDeE[120983] |
| spider-ntc-ta043.proxy.aol.com |
| true, people have been writing these long ass stories and dont even add a real report, we respect the stories! but post them up somewhere else too! |
| #13 F[120984] |
| 214ip227.emcity.net |
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| #14 Kodiak8[121019] |
| d416-ps4-mel.alphalink.com.au |
| Hey, yeah well i agree with most of your ideas and well i was thinking off putting the toss in the next installment.... and i suppose i could check for errors more... thanx |
| #15 vincible[121058] |
| 1Cust150.tnt17.sfo8.da.uu.net |
| Very standard. Try to come up with original ideas. |
| #16 CaughtNaked[121095] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| hey, keep writing. :) |
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