| #1 Chicken[119610] |
| xs241-230-235.dial.tiscali.nl |
| Battlereport.com staff please remove that previous piece of shit report ?? |
| #2 Metamucil[119614] |
| CPE014060001930.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
i liked it
good pics and some nice writing |
| #3 Adhosive[119616] |
| c-24-131-21-144.mw.client2.attbi.com |
4th
looked good 6.5-7 |
| #4 Psychochild[119623] |
| 253.orlando-05-06rs.fl.dial-access.att.net |
| Looked much more eye-pleasing than the original one. I can say I liked. 7. |
| #5 moonsprochet[119626] |
| ip68-10-167-61.hr.hr.cox.net |
| Nice Br definately good enough to be gold |
| #6 Amoeba_Boy[119628] |
| spider-wl031.proxy.aol.com |
| I didnt really like it. Horrible grammer and spelling and you let the pics tell the story, you had about 3 to 4 lines of text, then a pic big enough to cover a page. Write more, smaller pics |
| #7 chicken[119636] |
| xs241-217-96.dial.tiscali.nl |
i am not english..
cut me some slack :) |
| #8 E[X]cess[119642] |
| lc0150.zianet.com |
Ooo pictures are fixed = thnx
Now, to read.. |
| #9 E[X]cess[119643] |
| lc0150.zianet.com |
Isn't quite worth reading.. the pictures give away all of the action. Leave half of the action to the imagination and don't put everything down into pretty pictures.
Although the pictures were nice, cropping and space management is thnx.. they really big --a
--E[X]cess |
| #10 striz[119644] |
| CPE00a0cc2d2b10.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| fairly good job... though why the team names? |
| #11 chicken[119646] |
| xs241-217-96.dial.tiscali.nl |
i was planning on some funny remarks in the pics..
but i got fed up. i thought never mind that
it would have applied to the names.. |
| #12 thatcantbegood[119649] |
| spider-tf021.proxy.aol.com |
| this report was a waste of my time. The pics were average, and the writing was terrible. Please, just stop, now. |
| #13 chicken[119652] |
| xs241-217-96.dial.tiscali.nl |
| is that a good way to comment.?. might as wel burn me :( |
| #14 E[X]cess[119660] |
| lc0758.zianet.com |
| Chick, I think he just did --a |
| #15 apos'trophe[119665] |
| adsl-63-200-53-2.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| sex is thx |
| #16 Mattkid[119674] |
| 52-54-00-e8-de-65.bconnected.net |
| Chicken, don't worry he's never had the guts to post a br. Get someone who's first langugage is english to help you with the grammer and spelling. Also, the advice the guys gave you should help you. |
| #17 mattzarella[119675] |
| 93.116.26.24.cfl.rr.com |
much better quality than the first. try some color with your pictures (borders help thx kk luvu by) and, as always, humor. i can't express enough how important humor helps boost a report's rating. if it makes me squirt strange liquids out of pores not accustomed to said act, it's gotta be a 10.
again, much better than the first. but the first is always the worst, eh? |
| #18 (...BlaZe...)[119678] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
I just don't get the current funk with those hand-cutted pictures .. well that may just be me :/
Anyway, looks like a 7 or an 8, i dont have time to read it, just skimped over. Could work a bit on the formating, but heck, its not a design contest (eh breeze ;) |
| #19 Painbringer[119680] |
| net.ino.no |
| I didn`t react to the writing. But it wasn`t great either. And the game wasn`t that exciting, with one player not doing very much and such. |
#20  [119682] |
| StCatherines-ppp109168.sympatico.ca |
| very good for a first attempt, the pics were quite nice, the text was tolerable and the game was decent - 7. |
| #21 Chicken[119684] |
| xs241-219-173.dial.tiscali.nl |
WOOOOOHHHHHOOO...
yey.. a 7 :)
thx.. maybe some hints for an 8 or 9 ?? |
| #22 Amoeba_Boy[119685] |
| spider-wl043.proxy.aol.com |
| more text then pics |
| #23 (...BlaZe...)[119687] |
| mp-216-43-55.daxnet.no |
Recipe for an 8:
- Good game
- Good spelling
- Decent lay-out
Recipe for a 9:
- Great game
- Great spelling, few mistakes
- Good layout
Recipe for a 10:
(i've never gotten a perfect 10 so i should not, but .. )
- One-of-a-kind-game
- Close to perfect spelling
- Great design / layout
Good luck o_O |
| #24 IcE-Inforcer[119690] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
13# Give him a break its his first.
Use other colors when you feather pix. Black is allright, but people like colors better :P.
-IcE- |
| #25 KepowOb[119692] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp3468252.sympatico.ca |
For your pictures, try putting some sort of border around them instead of just deleting whats around them. A nice retangular or circular shape is usually a lot nicer to look at as well, and when there are a ton of units, you don't need to show each and every last one of them, just most of them.
You did show a lot of action in your pics, which is nice, but in some shots there was stuff happening in two spots, with a big empty space (i mean really big) where there weren't even units standing there, cut that into two pictures next time.
One last thing, by the edges of your pictures, it looked like you were using something a bit higher up than paint, PSP or Adobe maybe? Whatever the program is, play around with it and try and make a style of some sorts for all your pictures.
I would comment more on writting, but since my writting isn't that great, I don't want to talk BS, but I do know about picture formating. |
| #26 IcE-Inforcer[119693] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Yes your wriTTing sux gj.
Haha. |
| #27 Chicken[119698] |
| xs241-192-37.dial.tiscali.nl |
very well.. mr flame..
next time, if i make a report, will you proof read it for me ?
or do you just have a big mouth ^^ |
| #28 Narcotik[119700] |
| dialups-155.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| well reffering to yourself in third person got kinda old and your writing could use some work, but other than that good report ^^ |
| #29 Narcotik[119701] |
| dialups-155.palmer.mtaonline.net |
well reffering to yourself in third person got kinda old and your writing could use some work, but other than that good report ^^
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| #30 E[X]cess[119703] |
| lc0440.zianet.com |
Hahaha
Add Comment button > Narcotik
^^'; |
| #31 Puma[119714] |
| 216-55-164-139.dsl.san-diego.abac.net |
| Maybe it's just me but I did miss the fact that you didn't add colored names and a color-coded mini-map in the beggining. With the pics and writing it was too much of a problem but it did get annoying at one point. Everything else seems to be said so...umm...yeah....oh yeah I gotta press the button now...messa so tired. |
| #32 HarvKilljoy[119720] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
Hiya Chick,
Welcome to the English language, and to all of the ribbin' yer going to get for making grammatical errors and the whatnot. Some of us folks out here (like me) purposely mis-spell words like 'yer' instead of using 'your', for flavor. Don't get worked up over flamers- take the criticisms and build upon it, find a proof-reader who'll do you justice, and keep up with your efforts. I personally prefer more text; color's nice too, and your lack of mini-maps was a bit of a downer, but hey, it was a decent report. Thanks for your efforts Chicken.
HARV |
| #33 Chicken[119723] |
| xs241-245-198.dial.tiscali.nl |
Thanks.. thats really a nice comment.
i understand my english kinda sucks. ill get someone english to read it first the next time. allthough i dont get it. in my country english is compulsary (or something) on all schools from the age of 11 or 12 and i allways aced english. lol.. anyway, thanks
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| #34 Darth..sidious[119837] |
| d2235.upc-d.chello.nl |
your english does not suck at all.
There might be some mistakes, ok, but for a dutch 17 year old (or are you 18 already by now) it does not suck.
looks good, english is reasonable, game is ok.
i did not have any problem with no minimaps, i know lt well enough to understand what forces are where when seeing a battle picture, and i guess most of us do.
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| #35 Terr@rist[120114] |
| p5080053C.dip0.t-ipconnect.de |
| Nice BR |
| #36 Cow-12toss[126661] |
| kabel-8-106.kabel.netvisit.nl |
It was a good game tho~
and stop talkin about that ''english'' because we are both dutch.
if u guys want it in dutch, fine with me. |
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