| #1 Titans-Keith[118171] |
| 209.187.114.154 |
Nice job. A helluva lot better then the last one. GJ Dude.
-TK |
| #2 Metamucil[118173] |
| CPE0048546d06e2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
gj 2nd
alt text next time :) |
| #3 Decay[118174] |
| 206.10.109.65 |
Good Job! It held my interest, although it was rather short and it seemed one sided. Great for just a second try!
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#4  [118176] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| Not bad. Biggest problem here was that the game sucked hardcore. Pick a better game and use smaller text. |
| #5 Mattkid[118177] |
| 52-54-00-e8-de-65.bconnected.net |
| Nice improvement from last report. Read some of the really good reports and notice how they arrange there reports and how their text flows. Keep on trying man, it'll come. |
| #6 titans-thesoby[118179] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| FUCK i knew i forgot something! i forgot alt-text oops |
| #7 IcE-Inforcer[118181] |
| proxys.sj3.marketscore.com |
I guess I can help you out graphics:
-When you make a collage, pix dont have to be stuck together, let the report breathe!
-When you add text to pix, use adobe so you can move it around. On the pic with "dag" on it I guess you used paint and it messed the pic up.
-Also, use better font for text on pix, not necesary but better.
-I suck at writing, too :)
Good luck on next, make more.
-IcE- |
| #8 RockForce[118183] |
| spider-mtc-tj022.proxy.aol.com |
| GJ, but isn't is HnR)Alacrity? hehe |
| #9 RockForce[118184] |
| spider-mtc-tj022.proxy.aol.com |
| it* |
| #10 omega[cs][118185] |
| pool-209-158-239-91.cap.east.verizon.net |
| pretty good except it seems too move really fast |
| #11 Titans-Keith[118186] |
| 209.187.114.154 |
| Yea Andy, work on the way you describe stuff, it seems like the game goes like by in 10 minutes. |
| #12 Sexy^Orangutang[118187] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
first off I would like to say that for a 13 year old with ADD, you did a pretty good job. The format was decent, the writing was horrible, the game was below average, and the pics were about average. plus about your clocks, 2:00 and 7:00? that may be the actual location of the bases, but we usually just round it, so i goes top=12, right=3, bot=6, left=9. got it? good.
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| #13 titans-thesoby[118188] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
hehe what does ADD stand for again?
Keith u gonna post ur report? |
| #14 Freque[118189] |
| sdn-ap-013caburbP1359.dialsprint.net |
| Attention Defisite Disorder, now if only i could spell. |
| #15 LuckyNewbie:P[118192] |
| dialup-63.211.242.180.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
what the heck is this?
>html>
>head<
>meta http-equiv="Content-Language" content="en-us"<
>meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=windows-1252"<
>meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage 4.0"<
>meta name="ProgId" content="FrontPage.Editor.Document"<
>title<Hello and welcome to my second battlereport>/title<
you used frontpage for this? what the heck? what happened to the days of notepad and such? foreshame, titans, foreshame. |
| #16 LuckyNewbie:P[118193] |
| dialup-63.211.242.180.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| and sweet, i confuse < > again, go me |
| #17 titans-thesoby[118194] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| for certain parts... |
| #18 Alacrity[118196] |
| spider-ntc-tb031.proxy.aol.com |
Alacrity you men :p
and Dag the game wasnt bad. He had lings running aronud my base killing probes all through the early game, gay pseedling build t.t. He just didnt realy say it in BR:p |
#19  [118197] |
| StCatherines-ppp109203.sympatico.ca |
lol Frost, I didn't comment yet ( that was Dref ).
You're doing much better Titans, have a 7. |
| #20 titans-thesoby[118199] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| dont want to post on comment section so much but cant hold it in hehhe YES!! heheh |
| #21 EldritchEvil[118206] |
| nr11-216-196-185-54.fuse.net |
Nice. You're improving. More attention to detail, a better game, ALT-TEXT, a better font and smaller text (MY EYES!! AAAAHHHGHGG!!!!) and I see 7-8s instead of 6-7s.
-EldritchEvil |
| #22 NotDefault[118207] |
| h24-76-248-3.vs.shawcable.net |
I read this,
"Hello and welcome to my second battlereport! know enough talk lets get on to the show!"
and my interest was somewhat lessened. I'll read it later sometime. |
| #23 Amoeba_Boy[118213] |
| spider-mtc-ti054.proxy.aol.com |
Hey, dont make fun of 13 year olds with ADD, I used to be one, but now I'm a 15 year old with ADD.
And THATS why my reports take so long to put out |
| #24 IcE-Inforcer[118237] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
#15
Wtf are you talking about dude. Good br'ers use all kinds of programs. I use frontpage for HTML, photoshop for format saves, ********** for flash, ******* for gifanims and ******* to make graphic effects.
NOTEPAD IS GAY (no offense to all you notepad users)
:) |
| #25 hasgh[118243] |
| DIALUP-159-149.TNMEM2.USIT.NET |
| a better report than the comments would indicate |
| #26 BigD[118249] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Nice signature picture. Rest of it was average, good colors but writing/picture chemistry was severely lacking. |
| #27 CrackHeadJeb - Rater[118257] |
| pppw11.htc.net |
6.5 looks about right. I wouldn't think it'd be right for me to rate it up to a 6.7 or down to a 6.3.
Alactricity.... hehehe
-CHJ |
| #28 LuckyNewbie:P[118258] |
| dialup-65.59.22.75.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| i bet jv did this site in notepad :P |
| #29 [118280] |
| 12-222-61-61.client.insightBB.com |
| I've used notepad for everything I've ever put on the web :) |
| #30 Joe.Smurf[118289] |
| 63.174.196.30 |
first sentence was insulting ................
now is different than know
know is different than now
have a 5 :( |
| #31 (...BlaZe...)[118290] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
Lucky: "and sweet, i confuse < > again, go me "
You really use notepad for your own reports? ;)
--------------- *report comments * ------------------
- make a little table on both sides of the text, it looks ugly when the white text is so close to the white border (10 px or somthing)
- smaller and sexier text please (verdana is standard, but good, 10-13 pixels size)
And genereally work on the flow, it seemed awfully short and plain "he did that him then did that" |
| #32 Redemption6[118303] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| wuz the deal w/this notepad v frontpage crap? Isn't notepad something you write raw html in while frontpage is a program which you design your page and it does the html for you? just wondering. The game was nice but rushed, i believe the game was good but u didn't take the time to explain it. Commas and word screwups are common, like know. I think your font is strange. Nice report, 7 or at least a high 6 :D |
| #33 Mep[118310] |
| dialup-67.28.48.124.Dial1.Princeton1.Level3.net |
#24 You seem like you're refering to yourself as a good reporter?
Who are you? |
| #34 titans-thesoby[118313] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| i like ice-enforcers reports they are good |
| #35 ZerG~LinG[118325] |
| p413-098.ppp.get2net.dk |
First off all, IcE.
"I use photoshop for format saves"
WTF MAN! You have got to be kiddin me here. You don't get a powerful program like photoshop and use it for FORMAT SAVES. OMFG!
That being said, why U hiding the other shit? U're strange -.-
I use wordpad for all my stuff, it writes like notepad, but there's a bit more choices, like the "Replace" function. etc.
Will read report now |
| #36 ZerG~LinG[118329] |
| p413-098.ppp.get2net.dk |
Personally I don't think this would EVER be a 7.
The text was so boring, nothing really turned me on about your writing, it was all so quick and limited.
Also, when you use something like frontpage, mistakes happen.
For example, some of the text is black, and can therefore not be seen :P
Your pics need better and more precise borders.
When one border is four pix thick, and the other two, and another one six, it all looks messy.
So my conclusion is that this would never be gold, maybe not even a 6.
But hang in there, and look at others for inspiration. I can recommend reading all of BLaZe's reports ;)
Hi Blaze-.- |
| #37 ZerG~LinG[118330] |
| p413-098.ppp.get2net.dk |
Look! I can make a trible post -.-
Notepad ROXXXXXORS |
| #38 Titans-thesoby[118334] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
Thank god ur not a rater ling ur tough... but thanx for the help
**searching Blaze** |
| #39 [118339] |
| StCatherines-ppp109086.sympatico.ca |
Mep, I'm sorry to say but Ice has made some good brs lately ;).
I used WordPerfect instead of Notepad ;( |
| #40 Mep[118349] |
| user-2inil05.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I'm not really up on recent brs. But anyone who says they need frontpage to do a br i wonder about... |
| #41 (...BlaZe...)[118355] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
| Hi LinG, im more sober now, I hope I get a chance on that game again ;o |
| #42 apos'trophe[118359] |
| adsl-63-200-53-2.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
NOOOOOTEPAAAAD!!!
fo life! |
| #43 ZerG~LinG[118368] |
| p420-078.ppp.get2net.dk |
| GW Blaze, get online :D |
| #44 ImperatorP[118391] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
| SimpleText owns you all :D |
| #45 titans-thesoby[118398] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| what about the report????? |
| #46 (...BlaZe...)[118460] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
| I gotta wait untill exam is done ling ;/ Your name is zerg~ling on europe... ? |
| #47 ZerG~LinG[118486] |
| p455-69.ppp.get2net.dk |
Blaze, my exam are underway as well :D
On Europe I go under the name of "AzurReiZ[KoD]"
No comment |
| #48 Sexy^Orangutang[118526] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
| haha, simpletext is priceless for when you're really bored. try making up a rap or something and have the robot voice say it. good stuff. |
| #49 silk-masta[118561] |
| 207.3.148.219 |
| andy u quit school? |
| #50 titans-thesoby[118568] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| yes paul yes |
| #51 piromaniac10000[120081] |
| 209.187.114.248 |
| yeah, 2 battle reports! and u still blow. omfg, rofl, u r a gay who likes to rape little boys on churchday, now will u stfu, and cram all that shit stait up that candy ass of urs! |
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