| #1 KissBlade[118031] |
| user-105ne87.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I'm having problems with imaging and the preview option. Also I occasionally get banned. (wtf? dynamic ISP =) can anyone help me out with this? |
| #2 Ezikel[118032] |
| 212.219.117.188 |
| Writing is ok, but its to short no pics, no background.... and im getting bored of black on white.... |
| #3 Ezikel[118033] |
| 212.219.117.188 |
| #1st non author.... thx |
| #4 (...BlaZe...)[118034] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
I liked the writing, but short and stuff ... you know the deal. Kinda like blizz' ladder reports, short with cool writing but no real details.
<img " "> ;) |
#5  [118040] |
| StCatherines-ppp109076.sympatico.ca |
writing has some serious errors ie. "Weak points are the occasional lack of mineral surplus during the heat of
battle." ( you mean the opposite, I take it ) "Three observers spirals to oblivion at the ends of hydralisks with overlord support" ( "three observers spiral to oblivion at the hands of hydras etc" would have been correct. Great choice of words with spirlals ). That said it had good potential and some real highlights - watch out for word repetition and run-on sentences . . . and use more commas too plz. I didn't mind this, gonna slap down a 6. Looking forward to more from you ;).
btw if you need help with html contact me on b.net. |
| #6 KissBlade[118042] |
| user-105ne87.dialup.mindspring.com |
"Great choice of words with spirlals "
We all make mistakes Dag. =)
Anyway, yah, I'll probably ask for a bit of help with the html, the pics turned out fine when I posted it at a forum but for some reason not here =. Grr ...
Also, I've tried to get games in ~nohunters for some practice (I'm soooo rusty) but no one goes for 1v1's or is afk and none of my reps ever gets rated. -_- (doesn't help that I get banned randomly if I relog my ISP) |
| #7 (...BlaZe...)[118044] |
| internett2proxy.fellesdata.no |
| I'm always up for 1:1's, just msg me ... I'm not in nh that much anymore, but occationally i come by for a game.. |
| #8 titans-thesoby[118050] |
| station4.govwentworth.k12.nh.us |
| GJ |
| #9 Mr.Syco[118055] |
| ACA7862F.ipt.aol.com |
| I remember hearing of Katome, he used to write BR's. You should get him to do the next one and maybe you'll get gold. BTW, what is Xv-[Blade] and I'm assuming you were Fox??? |
| #10 KissBlade[118059] |
| user-33qtdhe.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I'm neither of the players actually. Xv-[Blade] was just a tag I thought would look cool for a team and I got a bunch of friends to join it basically. =) |
| #11 IcE-Inforcer[118063] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
The writing was pretty good except for the screwups dag pointed out, you should add pics and your reports would be good. Just insert the <img "intro_pic"> tags or whatever to add pics in your br. You can also check out the guides section. That is where I learned the basics.
-IcE- |
| #12 Amoeba_Boy[118068] |
| spider-tp061.proxy.aol.com |
| Hey syco, I think katome was some guy that came out with a really good and promising first report. Then he became a asshole and got accused of smurfing in that clearly not divvyo report (tis a hienus crime indeed). I think he left shortly after |
| #13 [118069] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112379.sympatico.ca |
| #6, yeah, I know we all make mistakes but it's my "job" to point em out in your br so you can get better! ;). |
| #14 Tsear[118072] |
| cpe-66-87-4-245.ut.sprintbbd.net |
Heyas gj for a first report (although this makes me think
about my own low rating [note to self: do not bitch on forum])
It was pretty easy to read, although had some grammar mistakes. Try to describe size of armies, it would make it much better. I think it was good, except for I was confused on one part: When the toss player hadn't researched storm ye and had just lost a battle, wouldn't he be dead?
GJ for first report. |
| #15 Katome[118076] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| Kissy I can help with HTML or whatever you need, graphics &c. :O I can do alot better than the reports I posted on here now. If I get un-lazy I'll report that game between kain and raiddy that ownzed :O |
| #16 n00b[118090] |
| pool-138-89-69-253.mad.east.verizon.net |
| I thought it was OK. Decent first try. Potential is there. I found the style and language use inconsitant. Some descriptions are excessively flowery/wordy. Reworking some of the sentences and going over grammer would help. |
| #17 apple_pi[118286] |
| adsl-63-203-74-243.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| needs pictures, maybe u could highlight the names of players with the colors that they were. had sumthin' else to say but i forgot. |
| #18 cowboy_bebop[118504] |
| ool-182ea37a.dyn.optonline.net |
| Ezikel you just read lyddie or something and liked the black man in it? kinda weird name |
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