| #1 MK~TeRrAn[117933] |
| 0-1pool49-195.nas1.oklahoma-city1.ok.us.da.qwest.net |
| I'm 1# :P, that should end that. Im looking for some constructive comments this time around guys :P |
| #2 RockForce[117934] |
| spider-wl052.proxy.aol.com |
| 1st non-author =P |
| #3 Adrenaling[117935] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| hi |
| #4 Adrenaling[117936] |
| CPE014100005949.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| nice second report. i liked it actually. =] |
| #5 Coolin[117940] |
| h24-86-146-23.ed.shawcable.net |
| The bottom part of the text fades too much into the background, so reading the text in the pics is sorta difficult. |
| #6 titans-thesoby[117948] |
| station4.govwentworth.k12.nh.us |
| yah. Gj the text is hard to read. looks like its still dling the entire time. But besides that looks good alot of pics though i feel bad for modem ppl |
| #7 Ezikel[117949] |
| 212.219.117.188 |
| It was a good, but it needed to be abit longer for my liking, better players would have helped too. (upgrades etc) |
| #8 Ender[117951] |
| 24-90-18-132.si.rr.com |
| everything looked good.. just a minor problem on top when you introduce sniffles to his race.. you made "sniffles randomed" yellow |
| #9 Ender[117952] |
| 24-90-18-132.si.rr.com |
| oh yea.. imo i think the font you used for the pics was a little hard to read.. some letters looks really similiar to others.. like in the last pic when the goons are getting owned it looks like "blue god" instead of "blue goo" so i was like wtf? does the toss come back in the mere 30 secs left? |
| #10 plus2longsword[117956] |
| asc8-grr-ip022.wmis.net |
| Overall pretty good, the center text worked out ok, but in the future go back through your code and Justify it or align it to the left. Pic work was excellent. I thought all the pics did a good job adding to the text to explain things. Your text left me a little distracted, maybe it was all the dark colors, I dont know. I would say room for improvement, like all of us, yet still pleasing despite the minor mistakes. |
| #11 HarvKilljoy[117967] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
MK, constructive criticism, eh? Ok, here goes... I always enjoy reading Terran vs anything reports so yours catches my eye- Build orders are good, simple and to-the-point and a nice way to introduce the players. Pics of major turning points and other actions are always welcome. Attempt to describe what was going on in your head, the other guy's head, and show how you both developed those ideas into reality or how your opponent fouled up your plans (and vicea versa). This is still a strategy game, so tell me about what's going on in your head- pics are plenty good enough to show what's going on, but words fill the bill far better when it comes to thoughts, IMO. Keep up the good work MK.
HARV |
| #12 CrackHeadJeb - Rater[117973] |
| pppw228.htc.net |
Solid report, but this game seemed like a Cowboys vs. Bills Super Bowl XXVII kinda rape. I'm not demanding different players, I just want a game that's not as one-sided.
I have very few complaints about your reporting style, though. Your use of images was rock solid. As Mr. Sword said, aligned or justified text would look cleaner. People seem to like it when the competitors' names are coloured throughout the report, but it was no big deal in this report. Some sentences were awkward and you may want to take advantage of spellcheck.
All of the stylistic gripes I have are minor compaired to the game quality, though. Aropica was the only aggressor, so the outcome wasn't in doubt.
-CHJ |
| #13 wynr[117976] |
| neptune.cohr.com |
| I enjoyed the report, but one problem I had was the text lines were too long for my screen. Please make narrower text next time. Thanks. |
| #14 Redemption6[117981] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
#13 change your settings to 1024X800 is it? temporarily. Dont just complain. The report was good but did not hold my attention. Lol did u use wordart for the text ;)? just wondering. nice report, 7-8
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#15  [117994] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112540.sympatico.ca |
decent br, awesome potential foiled to some degree by a very bad game. Find a good game involving big back and forths, and you'll get a far higher rating. You layout and text seem good, your pictures could use some more flare but otherwise are solid.
It's just the better game ;). Terran's build was a little off btw :D. 7. |
| #16 MK~TeRrAn[118015] |
| 0-1pool49-207.nas1.oklahoma-city1.ok.us.da.qwest.net |
thanks guys for your comments. Hmm, i have a game a played in less than a week ago that i debated on reporting. Its a totally different map(neovulcans forge) and it was also a 2v2 but i didnt feel that it was a really good game (maybe because i lost by giving up) But it was prolly the most back and forth game ive played in lately. maybe thats what you looking for?
also it was a choice to make everything white, grey, and black. I myself didnt have trouble reading it at all and i liked the effect of the pic letters fading into the background T_T, silly me i guess :P
Im gonna take this all into consideration in my next battle report. Those double 7's hurt :P |
| #17 real[118028] |
| 171.c.002.mel.iprimus.net.au |
aropica needs to play on aus-1 more :P
nice br :) |
| #18 Titans-Keith[118084] |
| 207.3.148.105 |
| Not bad man, I enjoyed reading it. |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[118121] |
| p443-59.ppp.get2net.dk |
As the rater said, game must be better.
GRADIENTS=OWNT! |
| #20 Freque[118351] |
| sdn-ap-003caburbP1655.dialsprint.net |
| players sucked |
| #21 XXXXXX[118672] |
| ppp-RAS1-2-240.dialup.eol.ca |
| Mike u suck GG |
| #22 SouLJa[118687] |
| d141-93-18.home.cgocable.net |
| hey mike, if i recall correctly you shouldnt be judging peoples games. ;) especially a toss' when you dont even play them!!! |
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