| #1 RectalOgre[116688] |
| c17231.blktn3.nsw.optusnet.com.au |
| 1st |
| #2 Arg0naut[116689] |
| a6h639v6y22v4.bc.hsia.telus.net |
| all in all, a pretty enjoyable report to read. gj lala. i found act 1 to be a little confusing though, i thought the overabundant humour and analogies were distracting. it really picked up though and by the sounds of all those spidermines being layed, it was probably a great rep to watch. |
| #3 Furious[116690] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Hehe your a funny guy lalala, get a better game next time though cuz that one kinda suxorz
Great 1st try, 7! |
| #4 Who'sGotLag.IDO[116691] |
| usrns71.dialup.hawaii.edu |
The centered text was kinda annoying, overuse of humor and adjectives, yellow text wasn't very bad but still...
Need a better game though, lots of dragoons vs sieged tanks... Was anyone else wondering where the high templar were?
I'd say 6-7 |
| #5 Redemption6[116695] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| Not at all disappointing, pictures and text must be aligned better and some of the humor was forced. Other then that great job for first. maybe gold but not likely. |
| #6 plus2longsword[116702] |
| asc3-ip19-grr.wmis.net |
| hmm, I think, even at the expense of not seeing everyone's name in alternating red and white colors, I could have did without the yellow text, and why center(?!) the text, even aligning it right would have been better. Very strong pic work. Impressive command of editing pics too. Content could be improved by removing a bit of the clutter. Try to write more simply. I liked the Nn-tss Nn-tss, leave it to some from Seattle to put that in their report! |
| #7 GoV[116706] |
| CPE0080c6f147d4.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| You could of atleast said it was a tournament final, :) |
| #8 Amoeba_Boy[116720] |
| spider-tm084.proxy.aol.com |
"tossticles"
hehehehehehe |
| #9 CrackHeadJeb[116726] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
| eee |
| #10 UltimateFire[116728] |
| spider-ntc-tc013.proxy.aol.com |
| yoyoyo? |
| #11 CrackHeadJeb[116730] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
| )p)' |
| #12 lalala931243732[116758] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
Thanks all.
Just so you know, the text alignment all stems back to one misspelling in the html. < p align="rihgt > :)
That was both the first time I've touched paintshop (i used a trial version of paintshoppro v.7) and HTML coding.
I agree with all of the comments on forced humor in the first act, I was just trying too hard at the beginning there.
The high templar weren't there because Ano Nomous is a moron. |
| #13 lalala931243732[116759] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| Oh, and I'll post up the rep soon. |
| #14 apos'trophe[116780] |
| adsl-63-200-49-79.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
I thought it was great. The only things I could complain about is mebbe add borders to the pics (doesn't have to be big or anything, just something) and that you should of had little screenshots of "Ano Nomous" flaming, threatening, etc. (since you kinda built him up to be a flamer in the beginning).
7-8 |
| #15 Furious[116784] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| oh yes for those who know ano he puts the lame back in flame! |
| #16 lalala931243732[116786] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| Ano didn't really flame in-game, though. He more threatened me in a thread on a forum. |
| #17 asdfasdfasdf[116791] |
| adsl-63-199-242-179.dsl.sndg02.pacbell.net |
Disappointing, *coughgaycough*, no trying, annoying text/lines, etc., bad pix...
5-6 |
| #18 Whoha[116810] |
| nbh.pu.net |
| hope the raters look at this it is fairly good |
| #19 vincible[116819] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| I automatically assume that anything by someone with a name like lala9329... is spam. I was wrong in this case but I bet a lot of people aren't reading it for that reason. Especially after the double post. |
| #20 lalala931243732[116823] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
Yeah, sorry bout that. Didn't realize that geocities didn't do outside links.
My name comes from MOCKING those very people... hmm... |
| #21 zan[116826] |
| spider-ntc-ta011.proxy.aol.com |
| OMFG SO FUNNY LALA that was hilarious :) it was a decent game not gosu but decent |
| #22 lalala931243732[116889] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| Ladies and gentlemen, the Zan of the report. |
| #23 GoV[116908] |
| CPE0080c6f147d4.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| Lalala = mass rape. |
| #24 lalala931243732[116912] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| ? |
| #25 warding[116920] |
| pr7-ts.telepac.pt |
| lalala will u marry me? |
| #26 lalala931243732[116923] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| Yes, yes i will |
| #27 lalala931243732[116930] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| SOMEONE RATE THIS!!! |
| #28 CrackHeadJeb[116935] |
| mu-197049.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Heayheay, don't sweat it too much. It took days for my first report to get rated. You show much potential and I'm very much looking forward to your next report.
Cons:
aligned text would be sexier, terran seemed to be in driver's seat whole game, humor seemed forced (the infamous "TSEEEEEWW.....WAAAAH!" made me laugh a bit, though) :)
Pros:
good sense of relaying the action to the reader, looked like MS paint image editing but you did the best you could, good grammar
-CHJ
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| #29 lalala931243732[116939] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
Aligned text- I know, I know, it's about as sexy as those 7up driver calendar ads.
Terran in driver's seat- no shit. Give props to zan for that. |
| #30 lalala931243732[116974] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
Whoa...
I just looked at who wrote that comment before my last one. Someone who the average visitor would recognize! |
| #31 Ezikel[116987] |
| 212.219.117.188 |
der... :P
GJ Lala, im sure... um... 'Ano' wont be chuffed (loves Moderator wars, heh) im off to go see how pissed he is... pick a better battle next time though. |
| #32 Chaoticlisk[117146] |
| pppoe0999.ka.centurytel.net |
| GJ for first time lalala, though those jokes at the beginning were dumb ;) |
#33  [117151] |
| StCatherines-ppp109190.sympatico.ca |
| Sorry for late rating ;(. |
| #34 lalala931243732[117161] |
| 12-230-100-33.client.attbi.com |
| I wuv oo! |
| #35 asdf[117294] |
| adsl-63-199-244-116.dsl.sndg02.pacbell.net |
| whoa!! do i kno u? arnt u one of the major flamers in that forum? i forgot which forum, but sum forum, right? calling everyone bitch and stuff? |
| #36 lalala931243732[117488] |
| 12-230-184-81.client.attbi.com |
| Which forum would that be, bitch? |
| #37 FireBlast![117620] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
The yellow writing gave me seizures.
Otherwise a good read |
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