| #1 TheyAre[116472] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
| Except for the one part where I accidentally and stupidly didn't make a new paragraph, yay for me! Good stuff, TheyAre, keep it coming ^^. |
| #2 vincible[116473] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
This is episode 1? But everyone died.
Above average but not great. |
| #3 TheyAre[116475] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
I should have put in some background... I envisioned five short stories about the battle of Tarsonis, four of them focusing on Terrans and one on the Protoss. Each one is tied somehow to the others, whether it be with one part starting at the end of the previous one, or characters from different parts in the other parts to have it all connected...
I never said it was great :P above avg is nice tho. I think its better than 93.546357% of the drivel at fanfiction.net |
| #4 vincible[116476] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
Ah, I see.
I agree with you that this is a lot better than most fanfiction. It's got some nice turns of phrase and, unlike most people, you proofread. I guess my problem was that there was nothing that made this memorable to me--just another battle, ho hum. Yes, this is better written than most, but there are lots of similar stories out there. Except for the occasional references to buildings or special weaponry, it's not even really that different from, say, WWII fiction. |
| #5 TheyAre[116479] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
It gets more interesting lol... Episode Two is about the sniper who killed Logan and is more involved in political intrigue and that stuff with Kerrigan, Mengsk and the sniper...
Episode Three is about a Wraith pilot, some air-to-air combat but its main focus is the *blank* invasion (figure it out)
Episode Four is Kerrigan's abandonment, but from a High Templar's point of view as he watches the Protoss base being destroyed and Kerrigan abandoned...
Episode Five is good ole ZvP combat as the Zerg leave tarsonis.
So its not all "ho-hum" combat, but i mean star craft is all about combat ^^ |
| #6 LoZeR-X[116481] |
| p-proxy-2-int0.net.wisc.edu |
| --a who would ever argue that starcraft is a tactical cooking game? |
| #7 Kane[116493] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Way to give away the plot, ass |
| #8 Redemption6[116499] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| lol. Fanfic is okay, details are nice, no plot, characters all die cept the sniper, is he going to play a main part in the next one? if he is then you shouldve at least portrayed him as a good guy. Writing is good but storyline is just average. Short. |
| #9 Freque[116515] |
| sdn-ap-001caburbP1461.dialsprint.net |
| now that you told us whats gonna happen, im not gonna read anymore of them |
| #10 huker[116516] |
| bgp559251bgs.eatntn01.nj.comcast.net |
| That's some pretty good stuff. |
#11  [116525] |
| 12-222-60-60.client.insightBB.com |
| haha, fanfic... big doh on that one |
| #12 Adrenaling[116526] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
like kane said -
Way to give away the plot, ass
;) |
| #13 ZerG~LinG[116551] |
| p437-104.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Sorry, I've had enuff fanfics for the next month or so |
| #14 IcE-Inforcer[116633] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
Wont read this. Im tired of fanfics now, even more tired of my own (the one that got somfin like -3).
But hey they still rock, well, some of em. |
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