| #1 Bird-Chaos[116003] |
| pool-138-89-69-158.mad.east.verizon.net |
| Heya, Hope my First BR isn't too bad. I made it in plain black and white though. |
| #2 LoZeR-X[116004] |
| p-proxy-2-int0.net.wisc.edu |
| Good picks and pretty bad writing imo.... FIRST |
| #3 LoZeR-X[116005] |
| p-proxy-2-int0.net.wisc.edu |
Expand on the battles and scouting with more pictures and text. The start was good, but some pictures that show failed attacks and how your sucesses went would give us a better understand of the flow of the game. Example: instead of 'I eventually broke through' take notes on the game and type:
My ground forces (15 zealots, 10 dragoons, and 5 Dt) were at 2-0-1 and facing a 1-0 metal containment of about 7 tanks, 10 goliaths, 10 mines and 2 turrents. (have a pretty picture showing his line)
I made my zeals move past the tanks then collapse to attack
or
I sent my units to patrol beyond the tanks...
or
I waypoint attacked the tanks with my zealots
(because) |
| #4 LoZeR-X[116006] |
| p-proxy-2-int0.net.wisc.edu |
at the heart of BRs we should learn something from the game or at least see the most important tactical moves. While scouting isnt important most of the time, watch the game from both sides and see whats scouted and whats secret.
Note major battles and if not numbers say 'a shitload' or 'a few' or best of all '# control groups' because we love 12 around here. Gj otherwise for a first one, I hope I do as well on the BR side. |
| #5 so many holic[116007] |
| 12-250-78-203.client.attbi.com |
hrmm gg but it was short, boring, lacked good pics. id give it a 6 for a first BR ^^
Keep tryin to make better BR's
4th* |
| #6 [116008] |
| 12-250-78-203.client.attbi.com |
or 5th =(
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| #7 ImperatorP[116011] |
| h002078ccd7eb.ne.client2.attbi.com |
7th
Good pictures but needs better and more discriptive writing especially at the end IMO. Personally when I saw the containment and read how your army was annihilated twice attacking it I thought you were screwed. Then suddenly "I pushed through and won" How did you do it etc. |
| #8 Jekpo![116016] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| I like the way it went from early game to "bust his tank push gg" |
| #9 DeepFrieddonut[116019] |
| dialup-67.25.111.109.Dial1.SanFrancisco1.Level3.net |
The report went down hill after the beginning, you got less and less descriptive and the writing was just horrible. you should have told what upgrades you had and what he had and where you expanded to. One more thing how did you get a army of 50 to 60 units in two secs?
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#10  [116020] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112426.sympatico.ca |
terrrrrible pictures :(. They showed exactly nothing, and were huge to boot. Absolutely zero actual action pics . . . I mean, if you're going to add big images, at least make them show something :(
But anyway, you were very vague here, not much detail at ALL. I liked how the update was followed by only about 1 paragraph of text :(. And then the endgame part of the br is about 1 sentence. You do a big comeback in about 5 words.
For what it's worth, you do show good potential. Just work on what the previous commentators and myself said :O. 6, and it's a little generous. |
| #11 apos'trophe[116021] |
| adsl-63-200-49-79.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
ummm, it wasnt very good at all.
What everyone else said. |
| #12 Bird-Chaos[116022] |
| pool-138-89-69-158.mad.east.verizon.net |
| Was the Beginning writing moderate? I want to know, because I was so eager to get this out that I rushed the end. Next time I'll make a mental note not to do that. |
| #13 Bird-Chaos[116023] |
| pool-138-89-69-158.mad.east.verizon.net |
| Oh yeah, and there's a rematch to this, do you think I should just give up on it or do it? If anyone wants to watch it and give their opinion that would be great. |
| #14 Dr Spork[116024] |
| Toronto-HSE-ppp3694366.sympatico.ca |
bad report...
i'll have to dis-agreee with dagomar..
he doesn't really show any potential either..
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| #15 so many holic[116026] |
| 12-250-78-203.client.attbi.com |
well, if your gonna do it on the re, make sure it's better than the first.
Remember that good report skills > bw skills in game u BR
thats all i got ta say. :) |
| #16 Adrenaling[116029] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
hi dag, ur fag how could u give a 6 to such an old hag that doesnt know how to br worth a rag.
btw, 6 is not a little generous for this report, its too generous. =[ |
| #17 Adrenaling[116030] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| btw, yes that rhyme was very gay. =[ |
| #18 CaughtNaked[116033] |
| proxy.ia3.marketscore.com |
| heh, i remember a year ago that animated gif alone would have gotten u gold... |
| #19 [116036] |
| StCatherines-ppp109137.sympatico.ca |
| To anyone who criticizes my rating: stfu. |
| #20 Redemption6[116037] |
| cache-1.sbo.ma.webcache.rcn.net |
| I think ppl just say others have potential because they want to make them feel better. But most of the people like this guy have potential neways....to some extent :D:D:D Writing needs to be more interesting, pay attention in english class. |
| #21 CaughtNaked[116049] |
| proxy.ord.marketscore.com |
| this actualy wasnt that bad of a BR if u took the time to read it. yes yes there were grammer errors and yes, the pics could have been much better, and yes there was a nice sized html error at the bottom, but.... huh .... mayb this did suck. but it was funny! er, semi-funny! |
| #22 Cal[116050] |
| DIALUP-156-206.TNMEM2.USIT.NET |
| Strong first effort, just take the time to write out the ending. |
| #23 Kane[116052] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Remember that Prozerran's first report got a 5, and now he's in the Hall of Fame |
| #24 plus2longsword[116057] |
| asc8-grr-ip048.wmis.net |
I'm not saying this to make you feel better, but you got potential, graphics-wise anyway. Try to putting something like
<h2>gosu anime above</h2>
below your pic to let us know the work you put in. I know that example I gave sucks, just experiment around until you find something that works. Pay attention to what Mark4 says in his guide, I think it would help you to improve. And play to your strengths (graphics,animations), try to improvise, show us stuff we ain't seen before. |
| #25 IcE-Inforcer[116058] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
| This was kinda dry, and pics showed up all messed up on my comp. Not bad for first, |
| #26 Apollo[L][116060] |
| 54.210.33.65.cfl.rr.com |
| wtf was with the ending it just ended so abruptly no explanation well not much of 1 o well good BR |
| #27 [116067] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517221.sympatico.ca |
In my opinion, that should have been a 6.5, while this a 5.5 ( I rated it up since it's his first br ).
the br you cited didn't deserve to be rated a 7 tho, which is why it was stuck at 6. |
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