| #1 Heimholder[115273] |
| us1.pharmacia.com |
My 1st 1st... Another text only, here we go.
Heimy |
| #2 IcE-Inforcer[115274] |
| 209.105.210.34 |
OKAY... must... calm down...
Now I'll try and have pity. Your lucky buddy.
First of all, u typed this in class which means it took you somfin like 1-2 hours or less to make. Poor. I spent at least 6 hours on my first report and even more on my others.
Chheck fore spelinhgfs mistacks mahn.
"wraths and mutalisks coming from both sides as I keep building turrents and goliefs to diffend"
-Corrected version would look like:
"Wraiths and mutalisks coming from both sides as I keep building Turrets and Goliaths to defend".
Put more time into them man, dont make em at at school. |
| #3 Metamucil[115277] |
| CPE0048546d06e2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
horrbile
good lord when will a non text br come out
WHEN |
| #4 fearlessguy[115280] |
| gateway.dprcssb.edu.on.ca |
hey zorgbot u play d2 ?? so what lvl ru ?? expans or not ??
im 50 barb so ttyl |
| #5 SM[115281] |
| vance002.net.gov.bc.ca |
Lol, my BR will be coming out soon... Watch for pics, and even an animated mini-map.
About this report- The game was too strait-forward. Basicly, you attacked, he attacked, your base dies, your army dies. |
| #6 HarvKilljoy[115284] |
| 192.189.112.134 |
Zorg,
I for one prefer all-text as I'm an old-schooler and would rather read and visualize in my mind's eye what's going on; don't get yourself down if folks whine about your all-text stuff.
On the report side, I agree with #2 on doing your reports at school- take some time out at home and develop your report, run spell-checks, and give it that lil' bit extra that will no doubt make it a better report. I like the fact that you're mature enough to talk about the human side of the match- the game speed. It's often overlooked and seldom talked about. I personally don't like the mad rush of the fastest setting. SC is all about strategy, which requires thinking and planning, let alone trying to tell all of your units where to go and what to do- setting it at fastest is for the impatient and the folks on speed/crack/crystal meth, IMO.
Otherwise, not too shabby- it's a start, keep tryin' kid, you'll be fine.
HARV |
| #7 Jekpo![115288] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
Mediocre, but not bad :)
6 |
| #8 titans-thesoby/andy[115297] |
| d-207-5-252-62.s-way.com |
| they erased alot of my reports... |
| #9 Zorgb0t![115321] |
| h24-65-212-228.cg.shawcable.net |
Thanks for the feedback.
And I'll be writting my next report soon.
Also I am using a different nick from Durin B Brown fyi. I needed something a little more cool then my real name. |
| #10 Adrenaling[115325] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
first of all, learn to spell, u stupid, illiterate piece of 10 year old shit.
second, your lessons are so fucked up. you say:
"Cover your back. Regardless how much money it takes, the more you spend on diffence the less money is going to come out of your wallet when people stab you in the back. Think about it. 12*50$ per probe is 600 minerals. That is worth keeping around for the expense of 300 minerals for at least 2 cannons plus a pylon (but of course you need those)"
what if u arent getting any money? u'll be turtling behind 100 cannons while the guys takes the map. unless this is bgh or something, then u r being a complete newbie.
i missed a lot cuz i only read the intro and the lessons. im sure there are a TON more mistakes than the ones ive already mentioned. maybe ill read it some other time and flame you some more on the mistakes u made. |
| #11 Adrenaling[115326] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| btw, did u say u wrote this at school? even so, at least get the right spelling, even if u dont get the right grammar. and besides, whod want to write a report in school anyways. stupidest thing ive ever heard. |
| #12 Corpus[115329] |
| spider-tf084.proxy.aol.com |
| Not to bad, text onlys getting old though |
| #13 fut8yuityu[115340] |
| a6-42.madison.chorus.net |
| 13 yeah |
| #14 Post a comment of your own here[115341] |
| a6-42.madison.chorus.net |
| Post a comment of your own here wow i love copy and paste |
| #15 Tourney Fund[115342] |
| a6-42.madison.chorus.net |
please donait for our Tourney Fund Tourney Fund !!!!
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#16  [115348] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112467.sympatico.ca |
Not too bad . . . 5 . . . which is about average for a short text only ;).
You show great potential, keep writing! |
| #17 Redemption6[115390] |
| 209-6-250-32.c3-0.lex-ubr2.sbo-lex.ma.cable.rcn.com |
Lol dag u said 5 and u gave him a 6. Smart one. Lessons to be learned by this br'er. By the way how did the one before get a 3 and this get a 6?
1. English grammer is good. I don't know if your like european or something but its always good to have the right tenses and the right singular/plural tense. So please correct that.
2. A little lesson on spelling.
Goliaths not spelled goliefs
Wraiths not spelled wraths
Strait is spelled right
Marines not spelled mariens
was not as
cybernetics core, not cybernetix
3. Work on when u capitalize letters too. Its Starcraft not StarCraft though it looks cool.
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| #18 FLAMINMAGE[116150] |
| 1Cust245.tnt2.tpa2.da.uu.net |
| Man, it's funny reading the comments of people flaming this poor guy for making spelling errors when the flamer's can't even spell a word correctly themselves. I find great humor in people who can't type out the whole word "you", using "u" instead. Pity on you fools, check your own grammar and spelling before you send in a comment of your own. Maybe you'll look more intelligent. Thanks. |
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