| #1 TheyAre[112226] |
| pa-gbg-ts-01-024-197-050-154.charterpa.net |
Hmm. 1st :p, and except for the curious text change (that came outta nowhere :-[) I think its alright, I give it a 6. No, 3, posters are supposed to be self-critical until they can find someone to argue with.
Phew. I almost made a horrible horrible mistake there. |
| #2 dopey[112227] |
| 234.b.004.brs.iprimus.net.au |
| first non author |
| #3 dopey[112228] |
| 234.b.004.brs.iprimus.net.au |
| woah that thing is way long.. cant be bothered reading heh. |
| #4 (...Blaze...)[112230] |
| 193.217.141.63 |
| liked it, good stuff. 6-7 |
| #5 ZerG~LinG[112231] |
| p434-068.ppp.get2net.dk |
Great piece of fiction, will read the next :)
btw, Blaze, when's your next br coming? I loved ur Moon Hotdog series ;) |
| #6 TheyAre[112233] |
| pa-gbg-ts-03-024-197-052-062.charterpa.net |
| Yes need more Moon Hotdogs... I mean Moon Hotdog : ) |
| #7 TheyAre[112234] |
| pa-gbg-ts-03-024-197-052-062.charterpa.net |
| Also, dopey, I cut about three pages off Part One because it was 4 a.m. and getting kind of long... Part Two will include those pages so it will be looong. |
| #8 Keanu_Reaver[112235] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-251.sea.eschelon.com |
i liked it, cept for the wierd twists (ends up from the hyperion back to the battlefield...?) got kinda confusing but very good writing
and no, i dont like writing introductions for my stories, sry :O
6-7 |
| #9 TheyAre[112236] |
| pa-gbg-ts-04-024-197-053-043.charterpa.net |
| If you read it carefully (I'm sure you did) that was a dream/flashback to New Gettysburg when Mengsk abandoned Kerrigan. Ian was a Marine in that battle and would have died except a Dropship picked him up, took him to the Hyperion, they left the Sons of Korhal, blah blah blah, now they're on Aiur and Ian is having weird dreams about it... |
| #10 garett[112237] |
| cdm-66-240-109-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| wow this is actually good |
| #11 Keanu_Reaver[112238] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-251.sea.eschelon.com |
"But sleep presented its own problems, ones Ian was less capable of handling."
gotcha, didnt think it was stating ian fell asleep but rather that he was unable to sleep with all the shelling and the such going on, oh well :O |
| #12 Jekpo![112239] |
| c216-45-83-226.md1.cablespeed.com |
| A fan fic that is enjoyable?! I give it a 7.5 =) |
| #13 reaqu[112241] |
| cache-1.lnh.md.webcache.rcn.net |
OMG!!! a halfway decent fanfic, id give it an easy 7;)
cant wait 4 part 2
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| #14 Mr.Syco[112242] |
| AC86DE91.ipt.aol.com |
| Plz, no more fanfics for awhile. |
| #15 vincible[112244] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
This was pretty good. Definitely one of the better fanfics I've read on this site.
I laughed when Keanu Reaver (#11) said the twists were weird though, considering the strange stuff he writes. |
| #16 vincible[112245] |
| roam155-218.student.harvard.edu |
| Btw, I think people just want an introduction so they know they're reading a fanfic from the start, not a battle report. Though I personally don't care. |
| #17 this is battle reports[112246] |
| adsl-64-167-77-96.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| ok, i didnt mind reading a few fan fics, but this is just sad, it seems like only newb fairy people who like to write love stories have taken over battlereports.com , what can we do to get some quality reports back, this thing sucked, 1 and delete it |
| #18 TheyAre[112248] |
| pa-gbg-ts-02-024-197-051-075.charterpa.net |
| I don't see any umm love there and if I'm such a newb fairy and so is Reaver please give us your B.Net ID so we can embarass you in a game. That would make a nice Battle Report, wouldn't it? |
| #19 |||l||l|ll|||||[112250] |
| cdm-66-5-219-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| good god stop writing fanfics |
| #20 Amoeba_Boy[112252] |
| spider-mtc-tb014.proxy.aol.com |
| Anyone that says "stop writing fanfics, write BRs" should get off thier ass and write a BR instead of just complaining |
| #21 Keanu_Reaver[112254] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-251.sea.eschelon.com |
yes, i do beleive a mr. dino din was the one to make the claim that fan fics = lack of bw skill to me, it was rather funny honestly
as for all the people who hate fan fics, like Amoeba_Boy said, if you want more actual br's then go write them yourself, im a story writer not a battlereporter |
| #22 TheyAre[112255] |
| pa-gbg-ts-04-024-197-053-224.charterpa.net |
| Yeah I'm a writer I've tried some battlereports but I can never get more than 40% of my pics to load so I gave up on it... I can't BR but I can write so... if you don't like it too bad the comments have clearly shown the majority likes Fanfic and BR instead of just BR |
| #23 MatriX[112258] |
| h000094c60a57.ne.client2.attbi.com |
#3: If this was 3/4 as long, you'd say too short, i bet.
gj fenix
7 |
| #24 BigD[112259] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
"5hut th3 fuxx up y0u damn n3wbi3"
I won't say that. It was very well done. I think generally br.comers do like well done fanfic. Good work, look foward to the rest of it. |
| #25 IcE-Inforcer[112261] |
| proxy.ia2.marketscore.com |
Man o man, do i ever suck, this was better than my shit. Here's what I got for comments:
-This is shit.
-This a pile of shit.
-This sux, I hope you stop writing this shit.
Damnit you're trying to torture us, why didnt u include the big ass fight!?
Good stuff, gj. |
| #26 Disgruntled Retard[112264] |
| spider-wl083.proxy.aol.com |
One of the more interesting fan fics. I look forward to reading the next section.
Oh yea and about Moon and Hotdog u guys should check out Moon's stats.
12235-0-30 I would like to know if i am the only one caught in the twilight zone. |
| #27 Adrenaling[112265] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| disgruntled: you sure you didnt type his full name. i think he has a clan tag or something... |
| #28 triped[112275] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
I'm only going to say this once:
Don't fucking submit stuff. |
| #29 Anonymous[112279] |
| 216-224-155-99.thegrid.net |
| You have a really neat writing style, interesting stuff. Next to 0 typos and grammar mistakes. |
| #30 Snake[112365] |
| 170.211.34.51 |
| Blade!!! is back does that mean more hotdog vs moons. i sure hope so. |
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