| #1 Adrenaling[112039] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| 1st newbs |
| #2 Mattkid[112040] |
| 00-01-03-1a-b0-62.bconnected.net |
die
thx
=[ |
| #3 Mattkid[112041] |
| 00-01-03-1a-b0-62.bconnected.net |
9-10
Well written, lots of good pictures. |
| #4 Mattkid[112042] |
| 00-01-03-1a-b0-62.bconnected.net |
Ok, so there weren't any pictures.
Nice writing tho =o |
| #5 Anonymous[112043] |
| 216-224-153-125.thegrid.net |
| Cool descriptions, but you got one fruiked up beginning...kept saying you sent your overlord to scout, then built a cyber. What race were you? Whats this got to do with shadow hunters? |
| #6 Anonymous[112044] |
| 216-224-153-125.thegrid.net |
| Cool descriptions, but you got one fruiked up beginning...kept saying you sent your overlord to scout, then built a cyber. What race were you? |
| #7 Anonymous[112045] |
| 216-224-153-125.thegrid.net |
| triple post |
| #8 Sexy^Orangutang[112046] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
"I send my overlord scouting 3 finding no sign of any enemy. After I build a pylon and a gateway I send my guy out scouting. (first 6:00 then 9:00) I start an assimilator. I start a cyb core very shortly after. "
I stopped reading after that.
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| #9 Sexy^Orangutang[112047] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
| k, i decided to give it another try, and aside from that one fluke, i'd say this is pretty decent. 7 or 8. oh btw, this isn't really a new style of bring...I can name plenty of people that have used it before, but still you pulled it off pretty well. I can also let all of the gramatical errors slide cause u did this at midnight, but it wouldn't kill you to save it for tomorrow when u can edit your work properly. there were tons of grammar and spelling mistakes that kinda dragged the report down. |
| #10 triped[112049] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
| thought Fox was quick.. |
| #11 Mjotnar[112050] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| If there's one thing you don't do it's to tell Zeratul to shut up. *SWOOSH* AAUUUGhhjjggah....gurgle.... |
| #12 Adrenaling[112051] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| yah mjotnar :) |
| #13 sMs.NT[112059] |
| dialups-678.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| yall forget about another bomb vs zerg.. the goon/da/reaver combo ^^ |
| #14 |||l||||ll|||||[112060] |
| cdm-66-6-113-tylr.cox-internet.com |
"kindly get lost"
wow heartcutter poser, gj |
| #15 SiG.[112062] |
| host-216-77-215-97.fll.bellsouth.net |
I wasn't into the writing style..
It looked like a good game but the acting like you were a protoss and stuff.. Trying to tell it like it was real life just doesn't work for me :( |
| #16 Amoeba_Boy[112064] |
| spider-tf041.proxy.aol.com |
WOW, Ive never seen so manby triple and double posts. Insane.
Good br, nice and descriptive writing, Id give it a rating but nobody cares what i rate cuz im not a rater.
BTW, Mattkid, do you a split personality or something, first you hate it, then you love it. IM CONFUSED!!!!!!!!! |
| #17 Mjotnar[112066] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
;(
"I opt for an anti-random build, since I have no idea what match-up this is. I send my overlord scouting 3 finding no sign of any enemy. After I build a pylon and a gateway I send my guy out scouting. (first 6:00 then 9:00) I start an assimilator. I start a cyb core very shortly after.
Deon runs into a hatchery morphing at the 6:00 natural. I send him up the ramp and I see a pool morphing.
"
The one sentence about you sending a scouting lord just didn't quite work out well with the rest of the br (more specifically the part about you being toss). Also, Deon is not yours! Give Deon back to HC! :p
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| #18 Black_Abyss[112068] |
| 1Cust112.tnt23.lax3.da.uu.net |
""Executor!" I hear a sharp voice in my head. "These zerg are being controlled by the overmind. We must eradicate all forces here!" The Judicator. He's a faggot."
lol =]
Nice report, but I think this style has been done before.
P.S. Poor Peon family :(
7
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| #19 someone[112069] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| sair/dt isn't new, it just isn't used a lot because it's so ahrd to pull off (i speak for myself =[ ). |
| #20 Blitzkreig_[112077] |
| user-2ini8bb.dialup.mindspring.com |
One of my probes turns to me and says in the funny language all probes speak in, "Sir, the zerg cerebrate wants to speak
with you."
I nod and begin transmission.
"Very good work, Executor. But it will take more than a few funny ghosts and some flying dudes to stop me. I have the OVERMIND on my side."
"Well I got the undermind on my side and my funny ghosts and some of my flying dudes are owning your hatchery right
now."
This part is teh ownAgE =p |
| #21 ChessShark[112081] |
| 63.207.252.73 |
1) That mistake with the overlord was confusing.
2) Why did it say Computer vs Dawn?
3) Nice style, Im SURE its been done before tho. Pics would have made it really good.
4) To the post above me: Its BlitzKrieg I think. But thats unimportant.
5) Also, 21st. :) |
| #22 UltimateFire[112102] |
| spider-ntc-tc083.proxy.aol.com |
I would have liked the style if you had put more effort into it. This seems rushed, and maybe it's just cuz im on a caffiene low, but you seem to just start adding random elements into the game after the beginning. I would like to see more about what you are choosing to do, and what you are making, instead of the "Now i have this and use it, then I used this a couple minutes later."
On the plus side I like the First? Person perspective |
| #23 Sexy^Orangutang[112107] |
| 12-234-99-99.client.attbi.com |
| ummmm why didn't the rater comment on this? cmon this was at least a 6, maybe even a 7. why'd you go with a 5? |
| #24 SiG.[112116] |
| host-216-77-220-52.fll.bellsouth.net |
| Also the zeon deon etc peon names are annoyingly old =o |
| #25 Ling-erie[112133] |
| proxy2.leeds.ac.uk |
| yes |
| #26 IcE-Inforcer[112189] |
| proxy.sj3.marketscore.com |
Cmon people dont be gay, he wrote this in 5 minutes. And lol where he lacks in details he makes up in humour lol gj.
Btw, im not saying ur all gay. |
| #27 [112201] |
| adsl-157-192-96.dab.bellsouth.net |
| well im saying ur all gay |
| #28 Adrenaling[112249] |
| 24.156.202.174 |
| rater who rated this 5, plz tell me why. i wanna know how i can improve for my next br. |
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