| #1 Keanu_Reaver[110020] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-29.sea.eschelon.com |
well this one was a bit tougher then the others because i got stuck on a few words (plus having the flu didnt help matters either)
i should have the next instalment out probably next weekend or sooner and like usual, all criticism welcome just tell me how i sucked so i can improve ;] |
| #2 Amoeba_Boy[110021] |
| spider-mtc-tk063.proxy.aol.com |
2nd non author woohoo
And its a keanu report/fanfic/ i dont know what it is cuz i havent read it yet
But yay |
| #3 Amoeba_Boy[110022] |
| spider-mtc-tk063.proxy.aol.com |
Wow, im a dumbass, i mean 1st non author
time to sulk at my stupidity
*sulk* |
| #4 SiG.[110023] |
| host-216-77-217-176.fll.bellsouth.net |
2nd person? whatever, gonna read now!
Keanus are always great!
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| #5 SiG.[110024] |
| host-216-77-217-176.fll.bellsouth.net |
Just read it, holy shit man, MAKE THE NEXT ONE.. NOW!!
The suspence.. and the story.. asdf!
A 'lil bit-o-trivia you might wanna know is that, even though high ranked protoss dont like DeeTee, DeeTee love their brethren, and will sacrifice themselves for their protoss brothers as fast as they would for their closest friends.
Read that in some book somewhere, also on the last mission in vaniller. |
| #6 Me[110030] |
| sdcax59-145.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
Noooooo!!!!
wheres the rest of it?!?!
Noooooo!!!!
9 |
| #7 triped[110036] |
| 63.85.132.17 |
| Please, please stop posting fanfics here, even though I really enjoyed reading it. :) / :( |
| #8 CaughtNaked[110042] |
| waf-dc11b-84.rasserver.net |
| we need seperate fan fic section, nice though |
| #9 |]agomar[110195] |
| StCatherines-ppp109085.sympatico.ca |
although the writing was marginally worse than the others, I really liked this one.
8! |
| #10 Chacmool06[110305] |
| dialup-63.215.227.114.Dial1.Stamford1.Level3.net |
| it was spiffy :) |
| #11 Keanu_Reaver[110525] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-183.sea.eschelon.com |
i've had absolutely no time what so ever so far this week to make the next part t.t so ill probably have it done this weekend (3 day weekend! score!) hopefully get done 2 parts this weekend, we shall see
thx for the comments all ^^ |
| #12 Evil_b..[110652] |
| c194s87h5.upc.chello.no |
great work.... my advice to you is to take a class in sales then once u got enough stories to make a book you go out there and sell it... for real.. it oculd prove to be quite proffitable ^^ Well done... looking forward to read the rest...
btw: an idea: the battle comes in the form of a battlereport with a little story inbetween the action..... just a SUGGESTION... Good Work anyways |
| #13 stardust8297[114499] |
| sdn-ar-001casfrMP139.dialsprint.net |
BoO!!
(just tryin to see how long it'll take you to notice that i added a comment to a report you wrote months ago =P) |
| #14 stardust8297[114752] |
| sdn-ar-015casfrMP142.dialsprint.net |
hehe looks like you're not gonna notice any time soon =P
(i posted that comment a few days ago... and today is april 20th, let's see if you ever notice =P) |
| #15 stardust8297[115822] |
| sdn-ar-016casfrMP105.dialsprint.net |
| May 1st... and counting =P |
| #16 stardust8297[116180] |
| sdn-ar-014casfrMP105.dialsprint.net |
| may 5th--alright flash, now i'm starting to get bored with this hehe =P well you did say that you were going to read allllllll your comments when you were all done with the story... maybe you'll notice then--but who knows how long it'll be before you finish =) |
| #17 stardust8297[116676] |
| sdn-ar-008casfrMP122.dialsprint.net |
| *sigh* may 10th |
| #18 Keanu_Reaver[116677] |
| max01-dynamic-64-65-141-121.sea.eschelon.com |
| lol, im not done with the story yet ;) |
| #19 stardust8297[118011] |
| sdn-ar-023casfrMP137.dialsprint.net |
well finish it up already!!! sheesh!
=P |
| #20 that guy from that whole holy grail shenanegan[120752] |
| adsl-66-127-53-211.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| ok, all you have to do is stay here and make sure he doesnt leave |
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