| #1 Testicular_Pugilist[108868] |
| sttldslgw27poolC254.sttl.uswest.net |
Could be interesting, I suppose. Writings a little shoddy, in my opinion, but that can be improved upon... At least it can't be as bad as other BR's that have appeared lately.
We kick ass and do a mean two-step
-- The Puncher of Balls |
| #2 Cer1dan[108869] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| i wrote that at 4:30 AM so I can do better later in the day :) |
| #3 ZerG~LinG[108874] |
| p428-040.ppp.get2net.dk |
Im confused with all these fanfics, the story are getting mixed up inside my head :(
3rd |
| #4 Arsenic[108875] |
| sdn-ar-003nmalbuP049.dialsprint.net |
| pretty good start, better writing when you continute it :) 4th!!!!! the closest i've ever been to 1!! |
| #5 ~ViLaToR~[108877] |
| 24.27.228.60.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
| Too many fan-fics lately, some are ok, but its hard to get into these stories, if i want to rea a fantasy tale, thats what books are for. write more battle reports guys |
| #6 Serious[108879] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
| If you want a battlereport, fix the stupid report center. That's what I'm waiting for. I've got my br ready to post as soon as it starts working again. |
| #7 Amoeba_Boy[108890] |
| spider-wm053.proxy.aol.com |
Damn theres a lot of fanfics
Oh well, guess thats what happens when the report center breaks.
Is it just with pics or everything cuz if its just pics I'll start writing a text only |
| #8 WTH[108897] |
| 65.64.77.154 |
I especially liked the violet dark templar. I guess it would be nice to see your ending.
Does anyone know what is actually wrong with the center?
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| #9 SiG.[108898] |
| host-216-77-217-227.fll.bellsouth.net |
Well.. for starters.. you spelt Aiur wrong at the beginning :(
But ya, continue, put some cool action scenes in there.. that was like 3 paragraphs.. make it large
=o |
| #10 Predator[108903] |
| 216-166-197-155.pk.dialup.grics.net |
You also misspelled Violent the first time. You called 'em Violet ^^ Purple Dark Templar. It was pretty good keep going.
-Evil_Predator- |
| #11 |||l||||ll|||||[108905] |
| cdm-66-5-109-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| NOT ANOTHER FUCKING FANFIC |
| #12 Cer1dan[108913] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
violet...doh >.< made a boo boo!
Sig, blow me :P Auir is close enough to Aiur at 4:30 AM :)
Seems like feedback is good so i'll continue it
Cer1dan |
| #13 Crunchymaker[108956] |
| ACB58709.ipt.aol.com |
| WTF?...why does this seem so similar to my deleted fanfic about the lost Dark Templar Xavier...what a similarity xavior/xalar????????? wtf? anyway it's pretty fucked up that they deleted mine |
| #14 Cer1dan[108986] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
Crunchymaker, you are stupid arent you >.>
I didnt read your story for one
for another it has nothing to do with a fucking DARK TEMPLAR!
The DTs were exiled, prolly explains why they are on an abandonned world no?
The zealot wasnt lost, he was exiled, big dif dumbass.
Dont talk
Cer1dan |
| #15 elvish_warrior[134141] |
| 193.15.223.188 |
Continue the story, but add more detail!
Protoss fan fic usually isn't that good, terran fan fics are generally better. This is probably the best toss fan fic i have ever read, though |
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