| #1 Serious[108856] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
| Yes, it's Part III. :) I hope you enjoy. |
| #2 Ak-47Indica[108857] |
| cce01.racsa.co.cr |
| 1st |
| #3 Serious[108858] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
Due to an unfortunate mistake I made, the Captain is named 'Kippings' at the beginning, and 'Kipplings' at the end. Since Kipplings is easier for me to remember, his name is gonna stick as Kipplings.
Thanks c.c |
| #4 Me[108859] |
| sdcax47-152.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
2nd
gj
nice action and good spelling ect. ect.
10 |
| #5 Serious[108862] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
One more thing, regarding the ranks of the officials in the Deja Vu 2. I also posted it in the comments section of that report, but I'm doubleposting just to make sure you get it.
Some notes:
Admiral is really a rank associated with the navy, so plz note that Admiral Bishop is Lt. General Bishop.
I made a mistake with Corporal Blake's rank. Corporal is a really low rank in the military (yes, I knew this before. I didn't realize it would be important until now). Plz make Blake a Major-General, which is the rank just below Lt. General :)
And for those of you who want to know, General is the highest, which is our supposed 'player' |
| #6 Cer1dan[108863] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| *drool* more more! |
| #7 TIME is not on YOUR SIDE[108881] |
| h000a277d260a.ne.mediaone.net |
| Average job, I suppose, but my 14 page 6,100 word document that got a 4 runs circles around it. MWAHAHAHAHAH |
| #8 |]agomar[108918] |
| StCatherines-ppp109249.sympatico.ca |
| Serious, how is major general lower than lieutenant general? Isn't a major above a lieutenant? |
| #9 Serious[108920] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
Well, my sources went like this:
General
Lt. General
Major General
Soo.... Yeah :) I have no experience or knowledge about the military, so I'm just going on what I can find n_n;
Hey Dag, are you the only active rater right now? c.c; |
| #10 Shadow D'Arc[108939] |
| spider-wg024.proxy.aol.com |
Yeah.
Gen-4 stars
Lt. Gen-3
Major Gen-2
Brigadier Gen-1 star
Not sure :(
Major
Colonel
I'm not sure the order of these three, but colonel has the eagle, Major has a maple leaf, and the other has the other maple leaf, ones gold, higher leaf is silver.
Captain (2 silver bars)
1st Lieutenant (2 gold bars)
2nd Lieutenant (1 gold bar)
This is all I can remember from my stuff, can't find it :(
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #11 Serious[108988] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
| lol. I'm not gonna write another chapter 'till this one is rated :) |
| #12 katome[109122] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| hmm... pretty good, I dunno starting to wear thin on me, I didn't like it so much. |
| #13 Patton1944[109232] |
| spider-wi071.proxy.aol.com |
Here's the ranks:
Private(1 stripe up), Private First Class( 1 up, 1 down), Corporal(2 up) Sergeant(3 up), Staff Sergeant(3 up, 1 down), Sergeant First Class(3 up, 2 down), First Sergeant(3 up, 3 down with diamond), Master Sergeant(3 up 3 down),Sergeant Major(3 up, 3 down with star), Sergeant Major of the Army (3 up, 3 down, with wreath and eagle)
Then for the officers:
2nd lieutinant(1 gold bar), 1st lieutinant (1 silver bar), Captain (2 silver bars), Major (Gold leaf), Lieutinant Colonel (Silver Leaf), Colonel (Full bird).
Generals are:
Brigadier Gen(1 star), Major Gen(2 star), Lieutinant Gen(3 stars), General (4 stars), General of the Army (5 stars. Only in times of war).
Sorry 'bout the long-winded explanation, but I just wanted to make sure you got it right.
Love the story. Just don't put so many "Fuck's" in next time, ok? 8 |
| #14 LuckyNewbie:P[109271] |
| dialup-65.58.60.146.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
heres simpler:
major gen used to be seargent major general
LT > sarge, so GG |
| #15 Shadow D'Arc[109275] |
| spider-wm011.proxy.aol.com |
95% right, Pat. 1st Lieutenant is 2 silver, not 1 gold. They've gotten close to completely drilling the rank structure into my brain, except for the 7+ different sergeants, cuz if they are too lazy to make up better names, I'll be too lazy to remember the ones they have :)
Peace |
| #16 Eternal_Deity[115249] |
| 206.10.109.66 |
I loved it!
Plz write more chapters soon!!!! :)
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