| #1 Mewatchy[108845] |
| 202.188.198.129 |
| And no, im not french :) |
| #2 Crunchymaniac[108850] |
| ACB7453B.ipt.aol.com |
2nd SECOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOND AHAHAHAHA AMA GO MASTURBATE!!!!!!!
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| #3 Furious[108855] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| 2nd non-author |
| #4 ZerG~LinG[108872] |
| p428-040.ppp.get2net.dk |
| 4th me own |
| #5 Amoeba_Boy[108888] |
| spider-wm053.proxy.aol.com |
5th.
Pretty good, just some details that might help to correct.
Thngs like Medics being there, medics came with the arrival of the UED. Another is a Kakaru on Korhal, they live on Shakuras
But those are just minor details and the overall story is pretty good |
| #6 SiG.[108899] |
| host-216-77-217-227.fll.bellsouth.net |
amoeba boy was right abut meds and kakaru, but i really like dyuor story.. the action scenes were really.. not explained well enough to get the total feel out of them..
continue the story plz |
| #7 Shadow D'Arc[108938] |
| spider-wg024.proxy.aol.com |
C-14? Err... thought they only had C-10 can. rifles, but I'm not sure. Good story tho.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #8 Mewatchy[108950] |
| 202.188.198.236 |
| thx you guys, anyways, im not that sure about the rifles, so thx :) |
| #9 Mewatchy[108952] |
| 202.188.198.236 |
| oh erm yea this is before the arrival of UED :D, though kakaru erm... i forgot hehe |
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