| #1 Serious[108631] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
So here is part two. If people want me to continue, I'll probably do that.
Anyways, I hope I satisfied your guys' quench for more story development, and I'd like to ask raters again to rate part 1 and 2 as one piece :)
Thx
~Serious |
| #2 KHiLL[108632] |
| ool-18b8a2a6.dyn.optonline.net |
1st non author
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| #3 Amoeba_Boy[108635] |
| spider-wb014.proxy.aol.com |
2nd non-author
Yeah this story is great, probebly better then drefs cuz your making more chapters.
keep it up |
| #4 Anonymous[108636] |
| 216-224-149-239.thegrid.net |
| Tite, keep writing more |
| #5 Erduarg[108637] |
| ts1-34.f1135.quebectel.com |
| more, more :P |
| #6 |]agomar[108641] |
| Montreal-ppp47769.qc.sympatico.ca |
| Nice! Thank goodness for your very heterosexual influence to balance out the relentless torrent of homosexuality coming from people like Time is Running out. Woohoo . . . 7-8 . . . more like a 7 than an 8 tho ;]. If you dont make more I'll shoot you. |
| #7 katome[108643] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| this one I didn't find as good... 7.5 or so, its too drawn out I guess, with not much unification, but thats just me :p |
| #8 Serious[108645] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
Okay, what kinds of things would make you give it a 10, then? :P
Or are fanfics in general just lower graded than BRs? :P If so, then fix the report center! I want my 10! c.c |
| #9 Mep[108646] |
| user-2inilco.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Make more. 'Nuff said. |
| #10 |]agomar[108650] |
| Montreal-ppp47769.qc.sympatico.ca |
| You would get a 10 if you made something absolutely amazing . . . AKA Praetor's Pheonix Legions . . . something long and moving and captivating beyond belief. I dont think a fanfic has gotten a 10 for a very very long time. This was very good, and they'll probably get some 8 ratings too. Good work. |
| #11 hmm[108653] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| i would give you a 10 if you said spoon and fork more often |
| #12 Patton1944[108668] |
| spider-tq013.proxy.aol.com |
Wow. Make more plz. Rednecks are always thx.
8 |
| #13 NotDefault[108698] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
I like. I'm generally not into fan fictions and they have to be either odd (as Drefsab's normally are) or short to appeal to me. This one (as well as Part 1) was both odd and short :).
NotDefault |
| #14 Forever_Knight[108743] |
| 170.158.87.162 |
I've put out two parts of my story. You've put out 2 parts. Competition time? Yep.
-Forever_Knight |
| #15 Serious[108838] |
| h24-86-132-53.ed.shawcable.net |
Some notes:
Admiral is really a rank associated with the navy, so plz note that Admiral Bishop is Lt. General Bishop.
I made a mistake with Corporal Blake's rank. Corporal is a really low rank in the military (yes, I knew this before. I didn't realize it would be important until now). Plz make Blake a Major-General, which is the rank just below Lt. General :)
And for those of you who want to know, General is the highest, which is our supposed 'player' |
| #16 ~Fenix~[108991] |
| pa-gbg-ts-05-024-197-054-045.charterpa.net |
| Nice... but go over your work, there are some minor grammar errors like not capitalizing sometimes... it would be nice if the story expanded into Jim eventually going on a murderous rampage against Blizzard =) before taking Bill Roper hostage and demanding that he fix his damn replay errors. |
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