| #1 Ak-47Indica[107976] |
| cce01.racsa.co.cr |
| 1st |
| #2 Shadow D'Arc[107977] |
| spider-wp041.proxy.aol.com |
2nd. Ownage. Keep this shit up, okay? Thx gw.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #3 alex[107978] |
| hsa114.pool025.at101.earthlink.net |
| 3rd |
| #4 adrenaling[107982] |
| wc01.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
| 4th |
| #5 ZerG~LinG[107985] |
| p434-053.ppp.get2net.dk |
ahem, now i understand^^
this rulez...
7 |
| #6 ZerG~LinG[107986] |
| p434-053.ppp.get2net.dk |
OMFG! U USE A MAC????
OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG OMFG
excuse me while i go laugh menacingly for several weeks |
| #7 Twip[107987] |
| 156.63.129.18 |
It weirded me out when I first saw the mac pictures, since the only time I ever use a mac is at school (right now).
Now, while I usually side against all the clones who have some reference to zerglings in their names, I agree with #6. OMFG OMFG HAAHHSAHHDSAHHAHA$A$HAHAAHAAA |
| #8 aseq[107989] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
Macs are good, although i'd hate to use one.
Computers for elite part of population sux.
Also, who wants a box with no compatibility whatsoever.-> very few games.
And i want to move some computer parts around once i a while too...
As for the report:
Beautifully written, i love the language used. At first, i was like 'now who is this about' but it made good sense later on.
Plz keep making new stuff.
I used to hate fanfics, too boring and stuff about nothing.
But lately some very good fanfics have been posted, like this one, and the latest thing Dref wrote. 7.5 - 8
Ltr, aseq
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| #9 im on a mack[107996] |
| gateway.dprcssb.edu.on.ca |
mack sux alot !!
good fanfic thou 11 |
| #10 Amoeba_Boy[107997] |
| spider-wb021.proxy.aol.com |
| this chapter was just as good as the last one, keep this up and you could be the 2nd greatest fanfic writer at this site, first being .praetor of course |
| #11 stonecoldnewbie[108001] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
hehe, a mac becomes just as compatible as a PC when you run VPC on it ^_^
anyway pretty nice i didnt read it all, but most of it, gj |
| #12 BigD[108004] |
| pc167.hum2.lab.acs.ucalgary.ca |
Good work. The pics sucked from school, but the writing is good enough. Moremoremoremore!
(on a side note, I'm not sure the Protoss could've won that battle. Then again, templar > terran, who knows how much psi storm ownage ther was?) |
| #13 |||l||||ll|||||[108008] |
| cdm-66-6-113-tylr.cox-internet.com |
macs arent for "elite" people, they dont even have anything like a regular TTY or a console for that matter, all the kernel hooks are gui, which is odd since even windows doesnt do that
if you were talking about pcs (wintel (microsoft on intel)) being for elites then youre just stupid |
| #14 CKane[108012] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
Quite frankly, I am not going to read anything titled "Two Eyes". That is the lamest name ever :[
and macs own thx |
| #15 Amoeba_Boy[108013] |
| spider-wb071.proxy.aol.com |
| Just thought i'd add something else, it was a great story but the part about the assassin going after the religous guy just kinda popped out of no where.it also seemed kind of pointless if your not gonna try to tie it into the story in a coming chapter.even though it was pointless, it was really good |
| #16 CaughtNaked[108016] |
| 205.187.255.121 |
| blu hurts my eyes, i mite read l8r, looks good though |
| #17 lol[108017] |
| host-216-77-220-125.fll.bellsouth.net |
that was great man ^^
Im a fan of fanfics, and yours is like one of the best ive ever read.. the battle between the assassin and the cleric was so well written i felt like i was watching a movie.
Make more plz
-lol |
| #18 Forever_Knight[108069] |
| s17.dial1.pro.nac.net |
Macs own...contrary to popular belief. ^^
I'll put out about one of these a week. I am thinking about a five part series but it might extend itself depending on how well the other additions are accepted. Thanks for the great comments.
-Forever_Knight |
| #19 Ak-47Indica[108083] |
| cce01.racsa.co.cr |
tsunami uses mac
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| #20 Amoeba_Boy[108149] |
| spider-tp021.proxy.aol.com |
5 parts, 5 PARTS!!!!!!!!
Thats to short, make it 20 parts or 4 different 5 part things, you are a great writer and 5 parts limits your talent
Or you could just do whatever the hell you want it doesn't matter to me |
| #21 Forever_Knight[108164] |
| s19.dial1.pro.nac.net |
We'll see what happens Amoeba_Boy. Thanks for the positive reinforcement. =] Still, there are not many people reading it on this site. Maybe I should post something about it in the forum or something.
-Forever_Knight |
| #22 BOBBAY[108166] |
| h000a277d260a.ne.mediaone.net |
| IM AGRY |
| #23 Arsenic[108193] |
| sdn-ar-004nmalbuP042.dialsprint.net |
gw, awesome story. Is it me or do almost all fanfics in the world of starcraft end with some reference to zerg or zerg units?
-he heard a rumble. He looked up with frightened eyes..."zerglings"-
bah |
| #24 kaej[108197] |
| 64-213-127-149.roc.frontiernet.net |
| lol, anyone who considers this "great" or even "good" writing needs to go read some real books. just a very cheap and poor ripoff of Tolkien, Herbert, Brooks (who is just a ripoff of Tolkien anyway), and I'm sure a few other ripoffs out there. DUNE and LOTR are the end all of sci-fi/ fantasy. everything else is shit. |
| #25 Anonymous[108201] |
| 216-224-166-152.thegrid.net |
| kaej, this is br.com, not greatestwritersonearth.com |
| #26 Nah, dragonlance kicks ass[108225] |
| 24.241.187.40 |
| Twins series, Dragons of (input season here) |
| #27 kaej, stfu[108252] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
good stuff. I'm definitly looking forward to the next installment.
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| #28 wallysmith[108275] |
| lsanca1-ar16-4-62-061-059.vz.dsl.gtei.net |
| ya dragonlance kicks ass.. but this was very well done.... |
| #29 Forever_Knight[108293] |
| 170.158.87.199 |
Reading off a list of good authors does not make you intelligent, Kaej. In fact, my story bares no resemblance to any of those authors. Frank Herbert writes so called "medieval" science fiction while Terry Brooks (who is not a paticularly good writer) and J.R.R. Tolkien write fantasy...not fan fiction based in a futuristic environment full of alien species.
If you're referring to the "mini-story", the only author who you can even compare it with is Mr. Herbert and only because he also wrote about an oppressive religious system. Your argument is a weak attempt at being seen as literate. Please do try again.
-Forever_Knight |
| #30 Newb_Sven[108430] |
| 170.158.87.190 |
keke...kaej = newb
kekekekekekekeke |
| #31 FK=snob[108538] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| But damn your writing's good=) |
| #32 hi[120613] |
| ool-18b8ee8c.dyn.optonline.net |
| its Dragonriders of pern |
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