| #1 aseq[106677] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
| 1st! |
| #2 onone[106678] |
| 212.209.45.109 |
| 2ond |
| #3 noone[106679] |
| 212.209.45.109 |
| ok reprort, the html sucked. |
| #4 aseq[106680] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
very good for a first report. Some (minor) things...
What went worng with the table and the layers?
Easy to read, amount of pics about right. I personally love minimap updates...i sometimes didn't know what the situation was like. It's hard to give keep the reader informed about things like troop count, expansions, without summing up (and being boring)
The rectangles on the pics puzzled me at first, but once i got the idea it was fine.
The jpg compression showed a bit along the edges of the rectangles on the pictures (which were very small in kb indeed).
I never knew Zerg was teching to ultras until he got em. Plz state at what time he got a hive...
Is this a replay only br..? I looks like one, i didn't see ppl talk...
Overall score 7.5, very g0.0d for first br, plz keep going... |
| #5 Chobo~Penguine[106681] |
| EHPP-p-203-54-78-251.prem.tmns.net.au |
| thnx. yeh it was a replay only :( . thnx for the mini map idea - will be in my next br. yeh i dont know wtf went wrong with the layout stuff but im ova it. |
| #6 RubiksCub[106682] |
| cache2.shlink.de |
| HTML was a little messed up, lacked some details, but better than my first reports, so I'd say 7 |
| #7 Shadow D'Arc[106684] |
| spider-wl034.proxy.aol.com |
Forgot your 'e', Rubiks. So the pics are mostly SUPPOSED to be fuzzy. I though it was lack of sleep and my comp being more of an idiot than even me. Split up your text into Early, Mid, Late game and make paragraphs. That entire thing looked like 1 big one. No clue where you got your HTML training, but for a first timer, it was done well. Only graphic flaw of HTML(Other than the white bar) was a bad wraparound on the last pic. Aseq said everything else.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #8 Testicular_Pugilist[106686] |
| sttldslgw27poolA14.sttl.uswest.net |
I must say that it wasn't bad. The format sucked and there were the obligatory spelling and grammar errors, but despite that, you did a decent job for your first try. The idea of focusing on certain spots in the pics was a good one; just ease up on it a bit. If you're really trying to illustrate a point with a pic, go for it, focus on the important parts to save me time. Anyway, it's really fucking late (early) and I need to work in about 4 hours, so I'm off to bed.
We kick ass and do a mean two-step
-- The Puncher of Balls |
| #9 DivvyO[106688] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
I didn't mind this report until it all turned into one paragraph. That and the occaisional spelling error (hell, we all have them) made me stop about halfway through :/
But the pictures were nice, nice use of blur and whatnot, and some good "encompassing action" bits thrown in, too.
I'd give this BR a 7. |
| #10 BBMCIAH (slinger)[106689] |
| spider-wc031.proxy.aol.com |
| Bravo best 1st report i've seen ever? |
| #11 Oddity[106690] |
| cmpt-127.usask.ca |
the end is completely fucked up on IE 5.0, pictures ended up being overtop of the text, the whole thing is moved over to the right for some reason
ill read it on ie 5.5 or netscape when i get home ^^ |
| #12 KHiLL[106693] |
| ool-18b8a2a6.dyn.optonline.net |
| u had 3 mistakes in ure first "The Game" sentence. Get someone to proof read |
| #13 KHiLL[106694] |
| ool-18b8a2a6.dyn.optonline.net |
| it feels like im stoned when i look at your pics too. i dont no if that is a plus or a minus |
| #14 Eradicate~Me[106695] |
| pa-millscreek2a-174.buf.adelphia.net |
| wtf |
| #15 BigD[106696] |
| pc167.hum2.lab.acs.ucalgary.ca |
Even though there was some real formatting problems, and a few grammar and spelling errors (zerg don't have probes), I really liked this. Though I couldn't read the end :(. Very, very good work. Good to see someone put some effort into their first try.
8.0 |
| #16 CaughtNaked[106699] |
| cp606088-a.mtgmry1.md.home.com |
| white bar owns me 2, secert is in setting table size. |
| #17 CKane[106705] |
| 12-233-180-134.client.attbi.com |
| Suprisingly good. Probably a 6 :o |
| #18 raging~cactus[106706] |
| evrtwa1-ar5-4-61-030-230.vz.dsl.gtei.net |
was it me or did he repeat 'zerg swarm' a lot?
hmph ;P |
| #19 |||l||||ll|||||[106710] |
| 66.76.9.50 |
formatting was horrible
learn english also please, at least spelling |
| #20 Adrenaling[106711] |
| CPE002078E0F4B2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| paragraphs are nice |
| #21 Adrenaling[106712] |
| CPE002078E0F4B2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| BTW, now i get the idea of the fuzzy pics and pretty, little rectangles. |
| #22 Arsenic[106713] |
| sdn-ar-004nmalbuP336.dialsprint.net |
| good writing. bad layout. use paragraphs and i didnt really like the blurred pic thing =/ |
| #23 Adrenaling[106714] |
| CPE002078E0F4B2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
BTW, the alignment of the last pic... is it supposed to be like that?
Adrenaling is quick. |
| #24 Casper...[106721] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-23-753.sprint.ca |
rekrul 2 base ultra rushes and rapes basic.
thats your report. |
| #25 John[106728] |
| adsl-63-206-88-68.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Good br |
| #26 Me[106766] |
| sdcax54-093.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
| need paraghraphs, a few spelling mistakes. nothing else that bad |
| #27 TheCh0b0[106798] |
| 1Cust44.tnt2.holman.wi.da.uu.net |
| everyone covered it =), but, only use the rectangle focusing thing when something game-changeingly important is going on or it gets kind of annoying. Anyway really good for a first BR^^ |
| #28 EMS[107574] |
| nabrown.vassar.edu |
Good stuff, to add to what #15 said above: if you use the word "peons" then you never have difficulties with switching worker names,
EMS |
| #29 Anonymous[107747] |
| 216-224-156-78.thegrid.net |
| Tight report, good job. I like the fuzzy pics, definitely a time saver for dial-ups. |
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