| #1 Killah![103976] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| 1st! go me! |
| #2 olle[103977] |
| 212.209.45.109 |
| 1st!? |
| #3 Killah![103978] |
| gateway.providentnj.com |
| ~Cattlebruiser~ |
| #4 CKane[103982] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| 4th :o |
| #5 Triped[103983] |
| 63.85.132.5 |
Mark4
But I like your writing style, seriously. Just take out the pictures and aspire to be like Mark4.
Go text-only |
| #6 Jaood[103984] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| This was an ok report. The only thing that confused me was the last pic. You described how the goliaths were finally overrun but the pics make it look like the goliaths prevail and fought off everything. Other then that good report. 7 worthy. |
| #7 Dragonsven[103985] |
| 170.158.87.162 |
| Heartcutter |
| #8 Testicular_Pugilist[103986] |
| sttldslgw27poolD171.sttl.uswest.net |
Good report overall. I agree that the last pic was kinda' misleading, but you can't... uh... judge the... BR... Uhmmm... GOOD REPORT! 7-9
Word -- The Puncher of Balls
I like CHJ |
| #9 ~FatAssReaver[103987] |
| SHW58-44.accesscable.net |
God bless 1 HP'ed SCV's. Nice report, I 'spose...
Oh, and my fave writer would be Heartcutter. Just plain great. |
| #10 Sovereignty[103988] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| Nice report and gg. Some of the pics were kinda blurry. 7-8. Oh, and heartcutter owns all :) |
| #11 ZerG~LinG[103989] |
| p428-053.ppp.get2net.dk |
About the last pic: Yes it was really confusing, if you'd care to read the "after game" thingy i also said it there. I suggest sticking to the text explanation of the last bit. Had i not included the pic, u would probably have bitched about that :O
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| #12 ~ViLaToR~[103990] |
| 65.33.107.252.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
| best reporter is Drefsab |
| #13 ~ViLaToR~[103991] |
| 65.33.107.252.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
or maybe flz-prozerran
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| #14 Thunder.[103992] |
| host-216-77-211-119.fll.bellsouth.net |
| Heartcutter... Oh ya.. and Slim.. hes a gosu reporter...... :P |
| #15 Nuggin[103993] |
| spider-tp062.proxy.aol.com |
| I always look forward to your reports.GJ, and my favorite reporter is ::nobody:: |
| #16 LuckyNewbie:P[103994] |
| dialup-63.211.244.81.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| YRM + CHJ |
| #17 .HeeroYuy,[103995] |
| ny-chicagost5a-232.buf.adelphia.net |
| ok that is strange nice report ^^; |
| #18 WrAth[103996] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
nice report! 8
Mr.Mediocre...he was a visionary..a brilliant man in his own right |
| #19 StoneColdNewbie[103997] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
man yuy sucks at terran ^_^
yuy i r fervor btw ;o
good report nice pics writing etc id say 8-9 |
| #20 oh btw[103998] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
writer = bob the newt
funny ^_^ |
| #21 Drunken_Dragoon[103999] |
| host-209-214-10-151.mia.bellsouth.net |
You're best effort yet! A real improvment. Got the borders, and the alt-text, some of the pictures were a bit "funny". Cynical-Magician all the way.
-Smart as a horse, hung like Einstien. |
| #22 BigD[104000] |
| px1so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Drefsab. 7.5 |
| #23 Squad[104001] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
hmm...favorite writer is either:
Bob the Newt
Drefsab
DrAwesome (his interactive br was own)
and/or YourRoleModel
this report was ok. 7-8. l8r. |
| #24 Patton1944[104002] |
| spider-tq071.proxy.aol.com |
| One word: Drefsab. |
| #25 juju[104003] |
| adsl-pool54-170-109.chicago.il.ameritech.net |
| -zx-Ravage! ravage....wheres my other br....t.t |
| #26 Dino Din[104004] |
| dynamic-152-183.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| tough one. YRM was pretty innovative though. |
| #27 [SM]Strega~F[104005] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
My fav. BRer would have to be Jebby, or J.R.R.Tolkien. He owns all, quite thoroughly too.
Anyway, the report: At the start, you didn't say what map or races were involved, although the pic did show it. Now, think forward a few years - let's say that the pic has been removed for some reason, will people know what map or races are involved without looking at the alt-text? No. Make sure to give ALL info in the text.
Also, at the end, you never actually said who won. It was just a case of "His gollies at his main died, my main died." The only way that I know for sure that you won is from the picture (Heero makes a comment such as "gg" or so).
Minor points, but can lose you points easily.
7.5
Strega |
| #28 John[104007] |
| adsl-63-202-179-35.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| YRM is the best 7 |
| #29 -zX-Ravage-[104023] |
| proxy1-external.sttls1.wa.home.com |
Breeze is best~
6.5 pics eyesore, good writing tho -.-; |
| #30 GoZuLu[104027] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Improvement rulez. The best ZergLing br ever.
Breeze is number one. His Mr. X report on temple, with the map made in 3D is still the best by far.
Klø på !!! Danmark er nr. 1
GoZuLu - TheOldDane
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| #31 ZerG~LinG[104029] |
| p426-024.ppp.get2net.dk |
ok, this was my first experience with paintshoppro7, i really liked it, and will continue to define my own style.
I really think y writing is improving, although Strega, u really made a good point, maybe i should have a someone else look at it before i post.
And its nice to see the ratings stay in the 7-8 part. That has always been my goal.
Bye~ZLing
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| #32 ground-LOBP-[104038] |
| syr-24-169-68-11.twcny.rr.com |
Why didn't you color your own name?
Your writing could have used some work imo but I'm probably the only person who notices English errors, considering the average English skill of br.comers. (See bob's article on this over at newtdojo for proof.)
Also, I didn't really like the pics - too overdone, garish.
I didn't read the whole thing. What I did read and see was maybe a 7, 7.5 tops. Decent, but nowhere near the quality of better battlereporters.
My favorite brers are funnymarx and Warfare. |
| #33 ZerG~LinG[104043] |
| p421-038.ppp.get2net.dk |
we'll, english is not my first language and im not that old^^
anyways, all i need now is official rating :D
then im happy.
Expacet a special christmas BR form:
yours truly,
Z~LinG |
| #34 stonecoldnewbie[104045] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
we'll
^_^ |
| #35 NotDefault[104055] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
7.5
I don't think it was too hard on the eyes.
NotDefault |
| #36 RubiksCube[104056] |
| work.shlink.de |
Always love to see your reports ZerG~LinG.
7-8 imho
fav. reporter(s): Heartcutter, Breeze and Strega |
| #37 Chaos_Lord[104070] |
| cx2127919-c.poria1.az.home.com |
Best writers: Drefsab, .Praetor
Funniest: ::nobody::, Sp|nE |
| #38 Twip[104076] |
| port-14.gall-ts1.cloh.net |
Tip: when you are replacing all the "ling"'s with "LinG", search for " ling" and replace with " LinG". This way, you don't end up with words like "kilLinG" :P
The reports I've liked the most were written by Heartcutter, Mark4, and Drefsab. But I also liked DrAwesome's stuff, and some of xld's too. |
| #39 Mindthief[104082] |
| ci31571-a.nash1.tn.home.com |
| xenomorph is funny as hell, snobound hodown is so damn funny |
| #40 Me[104090] |
| sdcax48-101.dialup.optusnet.com.au |
| Breeze! |
| #41 ZerG~LinG[104109] |
| p424-038.ppp.get2net.dk |
yo Twip, i know whta u're talking about, but whe i did the replace thigs, i made the "font color="XXXXX" around my name, but that name is also in every link to pictures! so i ended up with a real mess, sorry if anything slipped through.
all i need i a rating now |
| #42 Zotauzz[104185] |
| 0x3ef3a7ba.virnxx4.adsl-dhcp.tele.dk |
7... It's an ok battlereport.
And:
"After realizing that there simply didn't exist a "good game" in our local channel, we decided to head for ~Nohunters"
By mentioning "local channel" I suppose you are referring to dnk-1? Would you please define the term "good game"? I seriously don't hope you are talking about skills...
/ Zotauzz. |
| #43 ZerG~LinG[104191] |
| 213.32.56.70 |
well Zo, we just couldn't find a good game AT THAT TIME ok?
Otherwise dnk-1 can be ok sometimes *cough* when ppl arent spamming "DK OPEN" "DK OPEN" |
| #44 [104195] |
| 0x3ef3a7ba.virnxx4.adsl-dhcp.tele.dk |
| Funny how I always seem to be able to find a gg there then... |
| #45 ZerG~LinG[104206] |
| 212.237.49.50 |
| yes, how funny*Ha Ha Ha* :) |
#46  [104212] |
| imsbbcache01.netvigator.com |
| hi this game is kinda boring but the writing is pretty good. |
| #47 ZerG~LinG[104214] |
| p411-074.ppp.get2net.dk |
well, tnx are ya gonna give it or rating or is the "RATER" thing next to your name just for fun?
:D |
| #48 [104218] |
| 203.98.135.2 |
| I thought I already did |
| #49 ZerG~LinG[104228] |
| p431-031.ppp.get2net.dk |
| Oh sorry, the rating sign must be slow to upload :P |
| #50 Baal_66[104325] |
| pD9E30793.dip.t-dialin.net |
| YRM, CM, HC for me |
| #51 jmb[148713] |
| cache-mtc-aa01.proxy.aol.com |
| yeah this game is weaird so face off man get the hint yet boom gotcha. commy hommy haaaaaaaaaaa. |
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