| #1 Mistears[103216] |
| sc-66-27-182-55.socal.rr.com |
| this website is in its prime. |
| #2 Erduarg[103217] |
| ts1-08.f1135.quebectel.com |
I kown I should'nt have done it but i coud'nt refrain myself for doing it :(
please forgive me and think of it as an essay.
Still I would like some advice, not on the game that is, but on the way it was written, it will help me improve my writting skill in the future. |
| #3 BigFloppyDonkey[103218] |
| 144.13.6.10 |
It's hard to critique writing style on a comp stomp. It's like critiquing a 400 page essay written by a 9 year old on the subject of why my dad can kick your dad's ass.
Nobody wants to bother. |
| #4 [SM]Strega~F[103219] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
Were those continuous errors meant to be a subtle flame of Cool11's writing abilities, or did you fail English miserably?
Strega |
| #5 Shadow D'Arc[103221] |
| spider-wn084.proxy.aol.com |
Other than the errors, this was half-decent as a guide to making a comp stomp look somewhat decent. You will do well once you start reporting actual games. The style itself is decent, almost reminds me of Heartcutter(poor Deon).
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #6 Furious[103223] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| That was pretty funny, not as funny as laughing at the original though |
| #7 willwinforfood[103235] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
Cool11 : what do he want ?
WHAT HAPPEN ! |
| #8 CaughtNaked[103247] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
| wow, maybe we're not punishing these people enough because they think that a report that gets a 1 should be remade. Ban all reporters that get a 1? |
| #9 Erduarg[103251] |
| ts1-37.f1132.quebectel.com |
Again, my appologies for those who read it, I still don't know what pushed me to do that.
Strega, I do know I have trouble with my spelling, so can someone can give me a link to a good spell checker ?
And thx to you Shadow D'arc, althougth I don't think I'm half near Heartcutter style I really wish to improve :) |
| #10 BigD[103256] |
| pc51.hum2.lab.acs.ucalgary.ca |
Better than cool11's was, but you got the entire game from him. If this was a unique game I'd give it a 5 (but I'm not a raater, so my opinion means nothing).
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| #11 |||l||||ll|||||[103257] |
| 66.76.9.209 |
| was english your first language? 1 |
| #12 Erduarg[103268] |
| ts1-48.f1131.quebectel.com |
| nope, me french canadian :P |
| #13 someone[103276] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| werd. all three "cool11" have different IPs. |
| #14 Shadow D'Arc[103280] |
| spider-wk043.proxy.aol.com |
The ref to Heartcutter was the way the guy kept talking to his ensign, the way Heartcutter does with Deon, Kei, Cletus, and Bork(Poor Bork), personification, there we go. Keep it up, tho.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #15 stonecoldnewbie[103286] |
| 24.245.65.200 |
| tip: go away |
| #16 NotDefault[103301] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
I will never be able to comment effectively with this 1000 character limit. I work up a long commentary, mocking several spelling mistakes (such as "celebrate" - ick) and included no less than *2* rules of battlereporting, and *poof* it is all gone.
NotDefault |
| #17 Ling-erie[103305] |
| proxy3.leeds.ac.uk |
i haven't read a full BR in a month, this type of thing is why.
Sorry: 4 |
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