| #1 Krael[103174] |
| 144.13.6.10 |
| eh? first? |
| #2 B.R.This[103175] |
| wccp2.bendcable.com |
OK More words. Less Pics.
3-5 |
| #3 Draco[103176] |
| 24.27.226.248.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
| Not bad for a first try... now if only i could find a game worth BRing... |
| #4 Eradicate~Me[103181] |
| pa-millscreek2a-200.buf.adelphia.net |
try centering the pictures to make the layout look nicer i.e:
<center><img "www.blah.com/blah/blah.jpg"><center> |
| #5 [SM]Strega~F[103182] |
| proxy4.senet.com.au |
You seemed to let the pictures do the talking for you. When I was first starting out, a wise old battlereporter (on top of a hill, made out of leftover pizza and bong water, surrounded by his bitches) told me to include more details. The pictures are supposed to complement the writing, not the other way around.
Also, you seemed to miss out some details about expanding and the like, as observed from the mini-maps. (BTW, using mini-maps inside pictures = thx)
Work on your writing a bit (If English isn't your first language, then I suggest getting a good spell-checker to put any doubts out of your mind.) and make sure that the writing is in the majority, not the pictures.
GG
Strega |
| #6 John[103184] |
| adsl-63-206-93-251.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| This was a good start u just need more text |
| #7 Sovereignty[103186] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
I agree. A lot more text. Also, Plains of Snow 98? It's looking a lot less snowy than I remember it.. :)
5 |
| #8 [SM]Strega~F[103190] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
Yeah, there wasn't much snow back in '98, so they had to ski on the lava. Quite exhilirating, actually.
Strega |
| #9 someone[103193] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| wow a actual game. |
| #10 gay but not bad, 7[103196] |
| cdm-66-7-114-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| |||l||||ll||||| |
| #11 BigD[103197] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
I can't believe the team with two won that. Some color would've been nice.
6 |
| #12 CrackHeadJeb[103199] |
| mu-196093.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Listen to Wise Man Strega. He knows his shit, yo.
-CHJ |
| #13 Emergency Medical Services[103202] |
| nabrown.vassar.edu |
I agree with Strega about lesss pics, also it is kind of disconcerting to see goons 1/10 the size you would in the game, I understand you were just trying to show the whole battle, but showing a part of it can be very powerful,
EMS |
| #14 Hathaway[103207] |
| ppp-207-104-158-22.wnck11.pacbell.net |
| Good report (at least a bit better than the last 2...), and what everybody else said. I'd definitely find a game where the player's are a bit closer to one another skill-wise. |
| #15 [103224] |
| 212088078242.sonofon.dk |
Thx guys, for the feedback.
Ill try to live up with that in the next reports :) |
| #16 Triped[103226] |
| 63.85.132.5 |
Next time, do a super long text-only, use lots of adjectives and similes, and kickass html. =)
|
| #17 RubiksCube[103234] |
| work.shlink.de |
This is a "10" for the only reason that you reported after two of cool11 reports. Then again anyone would get a 10 being the next one to report after him.
Now for real. Lotta Pictures thats a nice thing, but the txt was too small and kinda disappeared between the pic. Make a bigger text, more text, center your pics, frame your pics.
Make out more detail, too and overall make the text "work" with the pictures, so it gets an overall flow.
Damn, why dont I listen to these things when battlereporting? :( |
| #18 GoZuLu[103241] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Yet an other "Dane-Report". The Danes are taking over this site!!!
En ok første rapport, men læs kommentarerne og implementer dem i din næste ....
Er du en af sonofon-pigerne ?
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
| #19 CaughtNaked[103249] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
not bad, not bad. It was a nice report and a decent game, although it was a lil BGHy with the massive amounts of units. Towards the end you slacked off on the writing a used to many pictures. Your pictures we're good btw, i liked the style, but a lil sloppy. A nice border around each one and centering them would be good. Other than that gw! Nice first report.
5+2 for not being gay SD-MONEY MONEY$$$*@(&%(*&^$@###$ map
t2yl8r,
~CN |
| #20 [103250] |
| 212088076163.sonofon.dk |
hehe. Nej, jeg er ik een af sonofon pigerne :)
Btw. guys, do u have a channel on b.net where u hang out?
That would be awesome! |
| #21 Shadow D'Arc[103283] |
| spider-wk043.proxy.aol.com |
Only if you show your name, blank #20.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #22 stonecoldnewbie[103285] |
| 24.245.65.200 |
yes #20
channel: sex
hot cyber w/me, strega, POA, MASTURNATE, Mark4, anyone you could possibly dream of |
| #23 Shadow D'Arc[103293] |
| spider-wk043.proxy.aol.com |
I thought yours was channel: Goatse, SCN? Maybe I'm wrong, it could be T_Mac's. Go fig.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #24 AGENT9876[103309] |
| cookie.stuy.edu |
| too little words |
| #25 Losion[103491] |
| 138.227.189.8 |
very good 1:st report
have more minimaps,
don't create teamcolors, it will create confusion (use only playercolor in the br). have team names instead.
what ever happened to purp terran??? Except the last pic in the end? did he played at all?
#20 check channel: clan nohunter |
| #26 el_sux0r[104035] |
| 129-2-22-140.umd.edu |
"with a low morality..."
indeed.
Amazing that this one, with excess pics, didn't do too much better than my own 1st report, which was all text. Interesting. |
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