| #1 Sovereignty[102930] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| 1st! Ah. This one is much easier on the eyes. Still needs more paragraphs though. Nice job overall. |
| #2 CaughtNaked[102931] |
| 1Cust92.tnt8.tco2.da.uu.net |
| sry bout the typos, spell check is gay. :} |
| #3 CaughtNaked[102932] |
| 205.187.255.214 |
| btw, if this gets good reviews ill do 2 poor from the perspective of the other two soilders(not shoulders :}) thats made it the longest. |
| #4 LuckyNewbie:P[102933] |
| user-33qtplu.dialup.mindspring.com |
| ya fanfics are gay |
| #5 CrackHeadJeb[102934] |
| mu-196093.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Thanks for making your html clean this time. I'll read it later. =]
-CHJ |
| #6 Triped[102937] |
| proxy1-gw.gcc.edu |
| What I said before. I felt like you rushed through writing this. |
| #7 StoneColdNewbie[102941] |
| nic-245-c65-200.mn.mediaone.net |
| i stopped reading fanfics after about the 1,001st one got submitted, sry. |
| #8 Eradicate~Me[102944] |
| pa-millscreek2a-200.buf.adelphia.net |
| fanfics seem really stupid to write, considering starcraft isn't exactly on everyones mind |
| #9 someone[102945] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| this sucked. you suck. stfu. |
| #10 astante[102946] |
| proxy.westbelt.calltech.com |
| not bad for a fanfic. |
| #11 Sovereignty[102949] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| Ah all these people not appreciating fanfics. If you don't like em, don't read em. |
| #12 Shadow D'Arc[102950] |
| spider-wq063.proxy.aol.com |
Uhh... I'm glad I'm not the scruffy man. Try writing it from his medic's perspective, heh.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #13 someone[102951] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| i didn't read it. |
| #14 [SM]Strega~F[102953] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
New, from the minds of CaughtNaked and [SM]Strega~F:
The tale of two medics, thrust into war and forced to share everything. The gripping tale of war, deceit, and lesbians. Coming soon, to a daydream near you.
Strega |
| #15 terrannavel[102957] |
| h002078d395d4.ne.mediaone.net |
| I actually liked it, cept fer it SUCKED at my resoloution, text muy small |
| #16 Ling-erie[102958] |
| proxy1.leeds.ac.uk |
...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
=o |
| #17 Cataclysmic[102959] |
| ce-crbk-01-01-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| I liked it, not really gripping but not bad either. |
| #18 CaughtNaked[102960] |
| 206.214.1.26 |
ling ur gay and i hate u.
everyone else who hates fan fictions, dont read them. and for everyone else, THX! :} |
| #19 Dampiere[102962] |
| ares.uwimona.edu.jm |
hmmm,
nice change of pace i guess,
but please, someone do a good SC battlereport.
anyways, i liked the doomed marine perspective.. hacker turned soldier huh?
oh well,
May the Terrans Prosper.
later Naked
D |
| #20 LuckyNewbie:P[103000] |
| user-33qtpnr.dialup.mindspring.com |
English with da' Newbie
Good sentence:
"If I were you id get my ugly ass up to Canada or some other shit hole where they wont check"
Bad Sentence:
"There general dead the men are on there own."
Learn from your mistakes
Coming soon: Hot, gay sex with da' newbie |
| #21 CaughtNaked[103003] |
| 205.187.255.208 |
| ' in id, i'd |
| #22 Mep[103030] |
| A040-1512.PHL2.splitrock.net |
| gw nakey |
| #23 Ana[103059] |
| phnxdslgw9poolA107.phnx.uswest.net |
| shut up |
| #24 Ling-erie[103081] |
| proxy3.leeds.ac.uk |
| hi ana |
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