| #1 ZerG~LinG[102579] |
| p403-109.ppp.get2net.dk |
| WOW i got 1st! i own |
| #2 ZerG~LinG[102580] |
| p403-109.ppp.get2net.dk |
| anyways, the report was ok, you show some good potential, you should find a longer and better game, your graphics are good, but some better battle descriptions would also be nice, i'll give it a 7 |
| #3 Mr Furios[102581] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Gee thanx a 7!!!!!
I needed to describe more about what was going on behind the scenes. You guyz had pretty much no idea what was going on in our bases.
But it my first go.................. |
| #4 [MrFurious][102582] |
| cache.securenet.net |
| Nice to see someone else who liked mystery men :) |
| #5 Dino Din[102583] |
| dynamic-148-001.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| bad game, bad temple, 6 |
| #6 CaptainAmazing[102586] |
| usr3-ip23-grr.wmis.net |
| Oh i know that, and i know that you knew that id know that you knew |
| #7 Casanova Frankenstein[102587] |
| dialup-209.246.109.192.Dial1.NewYork1.Level3.net |
| But wouldn't it be you knew what I knew what you knew? |
| #8 Triped[102589] |
| proxy1-gw.gcc.edu |
| I liked this one. Obviously the grammar wasn't the best, html could've been a little better, etc., but I was entertained. |
| #9 Spuzz[102590] |
| 63.175.166.90 |
Nice report, it was a good read and it sounded like you had fun writing it. Good work!
Spuzz |
| #10 funnymarx[102592] |
| dhcp085206.res-hall.nwu.edu |
you were in beunos aires when you wrote this weren't you?
--funnymarx
"I'm sorry, he always keeps it in a glass of water while he's eating..." |
| #11 BOBBY357[102593] |
| spider-wj063.proxy.aol.com |
not bad. use better grammar and HTML next time, but overall, nice job.
7. |
| #12 stonecoldnewbie[102597] |
| nic-245-c65-200.mn.mediaone.net |
i dont know it was ok i guess
temple is old, grammar wasnt best, ok pics
5-7 |
| #13 John[102609] |
| adsl-63-206-91-190.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Good first br 6-7 |
| #14 Mr Furios[102611] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Mystery men was an absolute gun of a movie!!
Ive been calling myself Mr.Furios ever since I saw it........... |
| #15 Shadow D'Arc[102617] |
| spider-mtc-ta041.proxy.aol.com |
Not many grammar/spelling mistakes.
"Big Goon Army"=no thx :(
Should have used terrain to your advantage, rather than try to beat him in the center. Ah well. Good try. 5-6.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #16 DC_Tsunami[102624] |
| 223-pm3-4.ala.tularosa.net |
The writing style was very difficult to follow. Being more formal and less conversational would help. Also, html wasn't great. Paragraph breaks make the text ever so much easier to read than line breaks.
One thing that really impressed me was the graphics. Excellent graphics, although not terribly creative. Naturally, for your first report, no one expects you to invent something that everyone else will want to use from now on. But nonetheless, I felt the graphics were of great quality.
So, get a better game/map. Improve your layout, preferably something creative that hasn't been seen before. Writing style needs some work; have a friend read it to make sure it is easy to follow. I'm not a rater, nor even a report writing, but I know these things could put you in 8-9 range.
Lots of potential, keep them coming. |
| #17 MrFacist[102626] |
| spider-wa032.proxy.aol.com |
| Wow you lost just for reporting a game you lost you deserve a 7 or 6. keep up the good work jsut listen to these guys they will steer you straight. |
| #18 NotDefault[102629] |
| 24.83.137.10 |
Not bad. You have some real potential. As others have said, find a bit of a better game (being on temple isn't bad if you have a good game) and clean up your writing a little (a few paragraphs could do wonders) and I see a gold report in your future. As it is,
6
NotDefault |
| #19 [MrFurious][102630] |
| bha10-s26.mtl.colba.net |
Mr. Furios,
Yeah I have been calling myself that ever since I saw it too... I also have a slew of other "Fury" themed names and If i ever go into business I will use Fury for sure.
BTW, just so you don't think I am trying to steal your name I invite you to do search for my reports on this site :)
Cheers, |
| #20 [102647] |
| spider-wm061.proxy.aol.com |
[MrFurious]
Actually it's Shadow D'Arc, finishing #19's Cheers.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #21 Gojky[102651] |
| schefflera-79.csee.uq.edu.au |
| baaaaaah. |
| #22 [MrFurious][102668] |
| bha10-s9.mtl.colba.net |
Shadow D'arc,
What? I don't understand your post... |
| #23 CaughtNaked[102678] |
| 206.215.14.63 |
| um, not bad i guess.. use a lil more html, ie my guide :}}}} and um... longer game... and less LT and less pvp |
| #24 Sovereignty[102682] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
I agree. Better grammar next time. Find someone to proof read it before you post it. Temple = yucky though.
Furious: You didn't finish your post. It ended with Cheers, so he added your name under it, if that's what was supposed to be there in the first place.
Pasta la vista
-Sovereignty |
| #25 Shadow D'Arc[102684] |
| spider-mtc-tk013.proxy.aol.com |
What Sovereignty said.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #26 FM_Moltke[102689] |
| 206.248.114.254 |
| I give 1. If fish lost the report = 10. :p |
| #27 Mr Furios[102720] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
Gee thanx Moltke.
As soon as I beat Fish ill post it, check back in about 5 years then :) |
| #28 Chingachook[102755] |
| pub5.arendal.folkebibl.no |
| Nice to read some stuff from people I partly know. I havent read that many reports to grade this one, but I liked reading it. Hope to see more from you and anyone else from Slr in the furure. :) |
| #29 Mr Furios[102776] |
| bal-ts3-2500.tpgi.com.au |
thnax chingagook ;)
Good to get some positive feadback, unlike moltke |
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